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brokenfaith
11-01-2004, 06:09 PM
Uhm.. weird lyrics
written about some
pretty recent, weird
stuff going on. Hope
you like it.
:amaze:
Her Thoughts , my change.
-Chorus-
Her voice hurts to hear, because i can't stand the past,
and how things happened, it wasn't suppouse to be this way.
The static sings me to sleep, underneath the crackling moonlight,each star a unanswered prayer,
each night my mind drifts away.
-Verse-
Im hypothsising a dream,
about how things should have been,
as im cradled to sleep, her shadow at the door,
and my heart half the world away.
Romantic was never my thing,
if you'd let me say these words i've been holding in,
if you'd let me try to change your mind,
would you still, some how be mine.
-Verse 2-
Sorry I don't speak with thoughts,
in the long run, they destory my dreams,
they lite fire to everything i care about,
just the way the sky shines,
when some ones close to death,
just the way the sky shines,
when my heart is ripped out,
and percied threw the inside.
-Bridge-
Don't say those words,
i've held them in to long,
you said you would
never say them back,
if i told you how i felt.
So i'll never say a thing,
just don't say those words..
-Verse 3-
Suddenly your saying you love me,
and i don't know how to respond,
you broke my heart before,
im scared, and confused,
i have no idea what to say, or
how to handle this, and i'll
never ask for help.

espf-250htd06
11-01-2004, 06:16 PM
idk its a little different from most love songs but not enough to be good to write a love song these days and it be good you gota have some wicked writing this is good but dont really jump out and get me and its gota little to much punk accent to it for example--Romantic was never my thing,
if you'd let me say these words i've been holding in,
if you'd let me try to change your mind,
would you still, some how be mine.

also a little whiny which is also bad, not to bad overall 6/10 cya lata check out my song past desires