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bassisbest
11-01-2004, 03:02 PM
Ive been listening to NOFX for the past 2 months so it was only time before i posted a song influenced by the Princes of Punk-rock. Enjoy.


its not the first and not the last time
the fate of human kind lays resting on his fingers
why say it is when its not over?
it dosent make sense.....

the time has come for some abusing
the world is yearning for conclusion
to the time bomb we have made
it is not right.........it is not safe!

Materialistic nations making headway
for the sign pointing exit on the freeway
without a cause, hope or reason
without a reason!

the time has come for some abusing
the world is yearning for conclusion
to the time bomb we have made
it is not right.........it is not safe!

burton.and.gas
11-01-2004, 03:13 PM
i love the imagery, it is suitably blunt and down to earth, come on this song just rocks!
i like politcial songs im not sure how well others will like it on this forum (not many are fond of political songs) 8/10

bassisbest
11-01-2004, 05:13 PM
I Love you. :)

bassisbest
11-02-2004, 12:16 PM
Anyone else?

Deathapalooza04
11-02-2004, 12:43 PM
The third verse is my favorite part of the song.

I dunno about the chorus, seems a little weak, but that's just me.

bassisbest
11-03-2004, 12:59 PM
Thanks man. Any improvements?

testtubebaby
11-03-2004, 01:56 PM
i cant find the flow and really not too sure what your talking about. crit mine plz.
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=260030