PLEASE Stop This

[kerazay]

This is long-be warned-but it's a desperate plea to someone I know to get them to stop takin drugs before they kill themselves. I just wanna know if I was givin this to you would it help you change your mind.

Talk to me, please,
I'm begging you, I'm on my knees
Tell me why you're doing this
Tell me of the "fun" that I miss
You give me reasons that to you seem nice
But for me they really don't suffice
I want you to listen but you never do
I'm trying to tell you what I know is true
That I love you too much
I don't want to lose touch
But what happens if you fall from grace?
What if I never get to see your face?
I want you to listen but you never do
I'm trying to tell you what I know is true
Everytime I see you biting your lip
I wonder what would happen if you had a bad trip
I always swore I'd never do drugs
And I don't want you to be like those "thugs"
My anger and hurt make me say it like this
But I'm trying to express what I would miss
If you happened to go and you left me here
How awful I'd feel if you weren't near
I'm trying to tell you how I need you
I want you to listen but you never do
I see your pupils as wide as mine
But yours are influenced, with no reasoning for time
Why won't you tell me
I only want you to see
You try to make me understand
But if you go your blood's on my hands
It might not be true, but that's how I feel
I try to convince myself that it's not real
I know this, as every time I try
I suddenly fail and start to cry
You can explain to me just one more time
No matter what you say I won't change my mind

This is my last desperate plea
I'm begging you now, don't leave me
It's because I love you, why can't you see
That I want to protect you from your "precious E?"
It's not precious now, but I'm afraid
That if you keep going it will be someday
Please hear me out and listen to what I say
It's not a game anymore, I don't want to play
You laugh it off with every time
And every laugh sends shudders through my spine
Where do you see yourself in ten years?
I see myself soaked in my own tears
Knowing I didn't help you, but it's not my call
Please hear me out, my emotions are raw
I want you to say for as long as you can
Life's short enough and I need your hand
To help me through all my hard times
I'll return every favour with the same grateful smile
I've always hoped for the best for you
I know you can do what you set your mind to
I'm begging you, please, anything but this
I can't really see how it provides you with bliss

Just listen to me now
I really can't see how
I can't make you stop, but I need you to
I can't watch you face away into the blue
With every twitch that you make
With every pill that you take
Do you know that it kills me as much as you?
You may as well be taking two
But really you mean the world to me
I want you to know this, I want you to see
We've always been a team, all along
I was the brains and you were the brawn
I can't think straight if you're not there to help
If I needed you, you lifted my feet when I fell
Tell me the last time I wasn't there for you
I'm sorry if I haven't been
You know what I'm like, my head's always in the clouds
But I really do care more than it seems
I don't really nag about anything else
But I can't watch you do this to yourself

I hope that you've listened
As I've said all I can say
I hope that you'll stick around
Please don't leave me this way

Again, sorry about the length but... I really had to say all of this but I couldn't make it any shorter so if you can help me out there let me know!

[IOWNU200]

ok this was good but i think if you're sole purpose is to reach you're friend then i would drop the whole ryhme scheme and see if you can say things that would be more effective. It would seem more personal and it seems that if the ryhmes were dropped you could tell him how you really feel more clearly. Althought this isn't bad, I think if you want to reach the person you may want to re-write it.