Bad Feeling

[MisterXIsSilent]

This song is about growing up and the troubles you might face along the way

Somethings building in the pit of my stomach
its sending chills up and down my spine
Making the hairs on my neck stand up
yet Iv never felt so alive
Somethings gonna happen soon
I can feel it coming around the bend
Nothings gonna be the way it was
Everythings gonna change again

Chorus:
Whats gonna be the answer
to the age old question
Do you feel alive
Or is this just a test
Bloods rushing through my veins
cuz its driving me insane
clueless to whats next
but I know its gonna happen

Are things gonna turn out better
or will they turn out for the worse
Its gonna happen to everyone
I just hope Im not first
Its time to rise above
all the hardship and shame
and become the person Im meant to be
Even if it means fighting through pain

Chorus

Interlude:
Iv got a bad feeling inside
why cant I just stop the time
Or look into the future just to see my fate
to live in a world full of love or hate

Chorus

[MisterXIsSilent]

More crits crit and Ill crit back or endorse ur campaign for presidency

[deejuks2]

not creative

[session9]

vein/insane - done to death. Aspirational themes but clumsily handled.

[hdrobot_mdp]

I didn't mind it, lyrically, but, it's not that original. Keep in mind, that you don't have to keep rhyming.

[espf-250htd06]

just not good and not my style if this is they type of music your right ill just go ahead and tell you this anit your forum cya dude

[i am the robots]

if u weren't trying to rhyme i like it.