X-treme1
10-31-2004, 07:20 PM
hi..
Well i'm new here, and this is my first post...
and i'd like to share something that i wrote, "hope" that i'll get some of your experience...and hope that i'll improve..
and go easy with me i'm yet 14 and english isnt my first language...
anyways...here it is..
:::: My Life is more Complete :::::
...I just woke up now..open my eyes to realize
that i'm gonna leave...
Though i dont wanna leave you
You dont know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And now i dont think there will be...
Some other place i can call home
...Cuz with you
My life is more complete....
And i...i just want to let them know
That i...i love you even more than before
Still i...i wonder how can they go
Moving on and just leaving you
Cuz i dont wanna leave you
You dont know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i...love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And i dont think there will be..
Some other place i can call home
The time i spend with you...Together
The things i used to do
I'll always remember you...Whenever..
I See some smile that looks like you
And though we're going, but as we do and as we go
I'll never forget you
Cuz my love to you...is forever
Is more than they can do
And as i said before
It's just the first time i wanted more
I Love to watch right a side by my door
And i liked to look in your dresser drawer
It's like you're my drug store
And you were the cure
And i just dont wanna leave you
And you'll never know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And now i dont think there will be...
Some other place i can call home
...Cuz with you
My life...my life is just more complete...
All you gotta do is ask
And i'll come running back
You are the place that i call...Home.
X
Well i'm new here, and this is my first post...
and i'd like to share something that i wrote, "hope" that i'll get some of your experience...and hope that i'll improve..
and go easy with me i'm yet 14 and english isnt my first language...
anyways...here it is..
:::: My Life is more Complete :::::
...I just woke up now..open my eyes to realize
that i'm gonna leave...
Though i dont wanna leave you
You dont know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And now i dont think there will be...
Some other place i can call home
...Cuz with you
My life is more complete....
And i...i just want to let them know
That i...i love you even more than before
Still i...i wonder how can they go
Moving on and just leaving you
Cuz i dont wanna leave you
You dont know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i...love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And i dont think there will be..
Some other place i can call home
The time i spend with you...Together
The things i used to do
I'll always remember you...Whenever..
I See some smile that looks like you
And though we're going, but as we do and as we go
I'll never forget you
Cuz my love to you...is forever
Is more than they can do
And as i said before
It's just the first time i wanted more
I Love to watch right a side by my door
And i liked to look in your dresser drawer
It's like you're my drug store
And you were the cure
And i just dont wanna leave you
And you'll never know how much i'm gonna miss you
And i love you
I just wanna spend the rest of my life with you
And now i dont think there will be...
Some other place i can call home
...Cuz with you
My life...my life is just more complete...
All you gotta do is ask
And i'll come running back
You are the place that i call...Home.
X