"Crystal Ball Destroyer"

[JohnnyTrash]

this is another selection of glam lyrics....70s glam anyway....some interesting phrases used here, see for yourself darlings, plese give feedback! *applauds*

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"Crystal Ball Destroyer"

hesidant at first
you were taken for a ride
yet only a laughing matter
your legs were spread so wide

crystal ball destroyer
wishing you were somewhere else
breathing in the lies
never caring for yourself

a fine wine descendant
does your mother know youre here?
silver tricks and lizard dust
enjoy the pain and fear

pull one from the hat
is it a crime to have such fun
in a cinderella cell
where you aint got no one

(chorus)
your such a sweet man (sweet man)
sweet man
your such a sweet man (sweet man)
sweet man


thanks for reading them!

[JohnnyTrash]

ne critz?

[Deathapalooza04]

hesidant at first<"hesitant"
you were taken for a ride
yet only a laughing matter
your legs were spread so wide

crystal ball destroyer
wishing you were somewhere else
breathing in the lies
never caring for yourself<catchy rhymes

a fine wine descendant
does your mother know youre here?<"you're"
silver tricks and lizard dust
enjoy the pain and fear<decent, but I don't know about "lizard dust"

pull one from the hat
is it a crime to have such fun
in a cinderella cell<I dunno what exactly it means, but I like it. It flows.
where you aint got no one

(chorus)
your such a sweet man (sweet man)<"you're"
sweet man
your such a sweet man (sweet man)
sweet man

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It's catchy. Too short, perhaps, but if you add a few more paragraphs I think you'd be in there.

A question: who's this "sweet man"? From the first paragraph I'd assumed we were talking about a woman.

[JohnnyTrash]

thanks for the feedback....sorry for all the grammer mistakes....was late *shrugs*

yeah it is a woman....erm.....sweet man, i guess it sorta worked with the vocals...erm, i guess, what any respected lyricist would say is..."make of it, what you will" :|

j.t

[JohnnyTrash]

ne crits?

[JohnnyTrash]

ne crits? please, for the love of god (johnny thunders), CRIT MY WORK!!! lol


xxx Mr Trash xxx

[testtubebaby]

hmmm i dont get the meaning. or maybe i do and am just not sure to say what it is. but anyway i like the originality.

[JohnnyTrash]

....lol....i know this ruins the fun, but.....its about a girls first time, and the "sweet man" thing is her view....sarcastically....she feels a bit taken advantage of...

signing out....

J.Trash