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bhholmes20
10-29-2004, 08:34 PM
Alright, I made this thread to post some of your favorite lines (not songs) that you've came up with. I haven't came up with any thing that great but I really like this thing I wrote:

Your eyes are loaded and your stares hold me at gunpoint. I hope I am the target in your cross hairs. Your ammunition would be like medicine to me. Please pull that trigger. I would bleed a smile so wide it would scar.

I hope you post things better than that ^^^ :upset:

xKONRADx
10-30-2004, 10:06 AM
"and i shake, with confidence, in my mistake"

EDIT: \/---losers

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-30-2004, 10:11 AM
"im going to shit all over this vending machine"
"im like a velociraptor in bed, i have really sharp toenails"

bre
10-30-2004, 10:18 AM
I **** my pants

CSD & the Soul Machines
10-30-2004, 10:35 AM
"fugitive, you cracked a smile"

Actually just about anyone single one of my lines could be put here, I'm just that **** good. [/dreaming]

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-30-2004, 10:51 AM
^--agrees

CSD & the Soul Machines
10-30-2004, 11:00 AM
With what? That I was dreaming? or that I'm just that **** good?^

Merkaba
10-30-2004, 11:23 AM
"...sounds a little sadistic to me, my whole life is a taunt and tease, the only sins are the things that please and i cant talk to you unless I'm on my knees."

"Every second's testing my faith. So every hour I'm falling farther from grace. So every day is another waste, wondering why you won't show your face, and every night is another light - less way for me to wait"

"When it all falls, crumbling to the floor, what do you hope to find? will you be searching for...everything you left behind, when you locked and closed the door, threw away the key to an open mind, that yearns to learn more"

"God save me, before i lose my mind....cause here lately, its been hard to find"

Metal G
10-30-2004, 12:03 PM
Paranio can destroy your brain
Paranio can drive you insane

Claws of sanity grip into your heart,
Fangs of insanity rip you apart,

Dark clouds create mindless misfortune,
Twisting vines create major distortion,

Run for cover,
Or your life will be deprived.
Deprived by one another.

Please dont sink low and steal these lines

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-30-2004, 12:41 PM
^---all mine now, mwhahahahaha

FiZz
10-30-2004, 04:05 PM
"Give me back my laughter, cause I'm running out of tears"

session9
10-30-2004, 04:14 PM
I don't have favourite children.

Permanent Solution
10-30-2004, 04:22 PM
Poetry:
As it happened, we filled with dust
Putrid taste like ashes fell upon us
The slaughtered cow wept in time with
The unborn fetus, never alive, never fussed

I just now made that up :cool:

Merkaba
10-30-2004, 05:34 PM
whats paranio?

Steerpike
10-31-2004, 12:14 AM
"Pearls at swine
Phillistines
A troubled mind
You don't understand
Brilliance and dementia often blur
Such a fine line
Will you find
How can I find
Your peace of mind
Peace of mind
Madness and genius go hand in hand"
- from "Of Madness and Genius"

I just like the haunting quality it has, even in just prose.

ibanezmanson
10-31-2004, 01:51 AM
She blew upon my face her sweet breath
and she blew upon my face happiness

It's an issue of deceivement melting through the lobes of a glorious landscape that is my head

I'll never forget those nights of love, when you sucked off my anger and swallowed the cum

I'm layin' in this bed my eyes half open, my world slows down, but I'm still hopin' to feel the effects come over me from this lovely green herb and it's peaceful mentality.

It seems I've tried to hard to be everything you see in me
but I want to be in your sweet dreams.

Permanent Solution
10-31-2004, 01:00 AM
^^^Don't make up words. Ever. Unless you plan on being a rapper, it just shows a lack of intelligence and skill with the language. Also, don't try to be abstract and concrete at the same time, it comes out all sorts of messy.

theBOYinTHEcorner
11-03-2004, 06:03 PM
heres to memories youve missed
words to songs that dont exist


nothings as pathetic
as a drunk who wont admit it


though im blind i see more than what you think

morrissey
11-03-2004, 07:41 PM
"life is never kind to those who need it most"

"So rest your head on my shoulder/no one could possibly know" <--- I thought that was genius until I realized it was the plot to half of Morrissey's songs :(

"And the newsreels will forget our names/Before the first commercial break"

"It's not supposed to be this way/Quick, think of something intelligent to say" <-- I really like this line, it sounds awesome in the song that it is from (it is about awkward silences on a first date :))

hdrobot_mdp
11-03-2004, 07:43 PM
"Chop your breakfast on a mirror"-Metallica, my fav. line of all time.
the one i came up with is "Sworn the color of crimson"

espf-250htd06
11-03-2004, 07:47 PM
Ghost of what use to taunt me
Well forever haunt me
Only after the bells
Will I relinquish
Past desires

Haggard, relentless look in my eye
For you It was erudition
For me the prior tradition
And here we are on level ground


Actualizations you make
And then to crit the cliché
As if the crown belongs to you
HIPOCRIT


my three favorite the last one is a project iam working on should be up soon