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apromisingyear
10-24-2004, 11:13 PM
Second Guess

Up all night, dark room i'm all alone
I hear your voice in my head and
Still I know, were only friends
I don't want this to end...because of me

A secret, we'll make it, this feeling, so intense
You have me, I want you, don't hold back
Don't second guess so clueless who knew this
You see my mind breaking down, you live here in my heart

Sorry for those things I have not done
On the account I always knew your the one
I'm so scared, don't know if im prepard
You know I truly care...about you

A secret, we'll make it, this feeling, so intense
You have me, I want you, don't hold back
Don't second guess so clueless who knew this
You see my mind breaking down, you live here in my heart

A secret, we'll make it, this feeling, so intense
You have me, I want you, don't hold back
Don't second guess so clueless who knew this
You see my mind breaking down, you live here in my heart

You listened, as I talked
We held hands, while we walked
The future, I can see, your not here with me
Your different, i'm the same
Your cooler, i'm still lame
I miss you, you want me
You know it's true
Dont...Hold...Back

Don't Want To Ruin What We Had
Don't Want To Ruin What We Had
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As you can tell from the previous lyrics we are a pop-punk/emo/screamo band. What do you think of those lyrics?

Good? Bad? Need Improvment?

What ever your opinion is please back it up with real reasons and if you think it needs work let us know how, specificly!

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SubtleDagger
10-25-2004, 05:43 AM
One song a day, read the rules.