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threemoresteps
10-22-2004, 10:22 PM
I, cant believe...
that, you do drugs,
I, cant believe...
you grown thug,

I seen, seen the pain trough your eyes...
I been, changing trough the years of our life,
I, cant believe Ive been trough...
all this pain, just for you,

I tought, I had a friend...
who had do all the things,
that would do anything,
to do his life, like dead end

I seen, seen the pain trough your eyes...
I been, changing trough the years of our life,
I, cant believe Ive been trough...
all this pain, just for you,

Last, time I seen you...
you were high, I wish I didnt knew,
You, wrote a note...
a suicide note..................

I seen, seen the pain trough your eyes...
I been, changing trough the years of our life,
I, cant believe Ive been trough...
all this pain, just for you,

I seen, seen the pain trough your eyes...
I been, changing trough the years of our life,
I, cant believe Ive been trough...
all this pain, just for you,

all this pain.........just, for, you.........

thedeadwalk!
10-23-2004, 12:15 AM
are you jamaican or something? practice up your spelling and grammar.

i would suggest scrapping this song, there's no redeeming factor about it.

sexycakes
10-23-2004, 12:15 AM
that grammer is horrible, and the song is a little, idunno, childish. if this is a first song or even a later one, just keep working on pushing emotions and events out a little more subtle, not like a health class
I, cant believe...
that, you do drugs,
I, cant believe...
you grown thug,

threemoresteps
10-23-2004, 09:39 AM
hum am french thts y their so many errors. and ok ill work on it

threemoresteps
10-23-2004, 01:57 PM
bump bump and bumb

streaksandskiesx
10-23-2004, 02:23 PM
weak.

Richy833
10-23-2004, 02:28 PM
sucks big monkey cock.
or
T'est stupid va baiser un chien. Ton chason y est stupid et it scent comme du merde.