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Understanding In a Crash
10-21-2004, 07:54 PM
WARNING: This is a taking back sunday, A thorn for every heart, dual vocal thingie. Even though I think the music would most representively be along the lines of acoustic Story Of the Year - Sidewalks its along the Taking back sunday lines.

( ) <== Are Secondary Vocals.. It's hard to judge timing when to read them but most of them happen in the middle or at once with the main vox. This song is going to be flamed to bits probably for this kind of set up.

I purposely dumbed down the vocals with simple stuff because when you try and make complex songs with dual vocals it comes out BAD usually.

/start ripping me to shreds plz.

How much can you know about yourself?

Today when I looked up, over the skies,
PatchesÖ of white, were laughing.
I couldnít help but to feel so good about myself (and yet so self relieving)
As the cars.. would pass me by (shining headlights)
I would never expect to see a future so bright.. (yet so delicate)

Promise is willing.. (Promise is selling)

Broken and breaking wonít matter for now
As long as I can breathe (I could still dream about you)
Some hearts can just sing with symmetry (With memories)
Iíll.. be.. on.. your sidewalk, (I know you may be for me)
Always on your side. (when the cracks are the only lines that divide..)

She is the season of autumnÖ
for the whole world to see..
She is the season of spring..
when inside his arms (so lovingly)
I know that she could make anyone so happy (Maybe..)
Her voice is the wind whispering into your heart (So inviting..)
She could give anyone a fresh clean start.. (So hopeful)
I wish that I could say, (I wish I could say)
Maybe even me. (maybe even me..)

Maybe even me.. (maybe even me..)

Broken and breaking wonít matter for now
As long as I can breathe (I could still dream about you)
Some hearts can just sing with symmetry (With memories)
Iíll.. be.. on.. your sidewalk, (I know you may be for me)
Always on your side. (when the cracks are the only lines that divide..)

Itís okayÖ
Iím just okay
Maybe just a little (Maybe a lot)
Today wasnít so bad (Seeing that smile flashed from a camera in a school parking lot..)

Broken and breaking wonít matter for now
As long as I can breathe (I could still dream about you)
Some hearts can just sing with symmetry (With memories)
Iíll.. be.. on.. your sidewalk, (I know you may be for me)
Always on your side. (when the cracks are the only lines that divide..)

Iím sorry that I wasnít what you were looking for. (Iím sorry for myself)
I always played the odds with spades and hearts (but today Iíve worked myself out)
At the time, our lives seemed so complete..
And maybe we need to break everything again (to make ourselves obsolete)
Someday I hope youíll understand what you do to me
Someday I hope Iíll understand what you do to me.

-=Hopesfall=-
10-21-2004, 07:59 PM
I think its pretty good, nice flow and I can kind of understand the back up vocals because I enjoy the old tbs, but I find if it too emo. but then again thats what it is.