View Full Version : Through the Grapevine

10-20-2004, 09:07 PM
This is my second song and I am not very good.

Through the grapevine,
I heard some talking.
Tangle in the roots,
Caught in the wind,
The story was twisted
Along the way, changing
To what it becomes,
To what I receive.

With my knowledge,
I made the mistake,
Went for you but failed
I can out, shattered,
Out, forgotten
Came out dead.

But don't worry,
I've got you fiqured out.
I'm not a chess board,
So stop playing me.
Give it all up,
Or get out.

Manipulation is not a toy
Don't change your tale.
Change it without truth.
And someone gets hurt.
Alter, to injure.
Keep it a story not a riddle.

Please crit.

10-20-2004, 10:11 PM
isnt there a song called "through the grape vine"? I know its probably creatively thought but just the fact I already know of a song like it, thats all I can think about while I read it, so I cant say anything about it.