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lord of darkness
10-20-2004, 06:54 PM
I know this is a really weird subject but i tried to write a song on how a necrophile thinks and loves lol crit apreciated thank you , and by the way if it's just to stupid and if I should scrap all this then say it I don't care I just really don't know what to do with these writting:p

Cold sleep

intro
During your sleep- Iíll be next to you
and when Iíll be near your bed I know
It will be so easy to rape youÖ.again

Verse1
When youíll be dead, when youíll be loved
Youíll have already been raped and ****ed
When my job will be done and you undone
I will realise I am a necrophileÖforever

Chorus
Iím a necrophile, the last person youíll see
Before I rape you, Iíll drown you in the sea
Welcome in a nightmare that will forever last
Embrace your destiny and be among the past

Verse2
You are so cold now and I canít help it
Tomorrow Iíll have to throw you in the pit
Iím sorry Iíve gone to far and I killed you
Love is so cruel, lustís so uncontrollable

Chorus
Iím a necrophile, the last person youíll see
Before I rape you, Iíll drown you in the sea
Welcome in a nightmare that will forever last
Embrace your destiny and be among the past

Bridge
Rest in peace my love
Stay in your cold sleep
Faint into death and decay

Iím your demise
Your destruction
the reason of your disease

Solo

Chorus 2
Iíve killed you, Iíve raped you but whoís the victim now?
Iím sick , Iím crazy, and Iím dead inside of meÖ forever
It ends here, Iíve suffered enough, today Iíll die with you
I embrace my senselessness, Itís too late to be with you

Iíve free you too fast and I pay the price, forgive me please
Let me sleep at last, Iíll take my last breath and free myself
From this decaying envelope I once called my aching body
Iím no more than a rotten carcass of sins, pain and disease

Solo

forgive me my love and sink in your cold sleep

CrashingDown213
10-20-2004, 07:00 PM
and by the way if it's just to stupid and if I should scrap all this then say it
^^^

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-20-2004, 08:31 PM
im going to cry and then slit my wrists and then cry some more