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lord of darkness
10-20-2004, 05:54 PM
I know this is a really weird subject but i tried to write a song on how a necrophile thinks and loves lol crit apreciated thank you , and by the way if it's just to stupid and if I should scrap all this then say it I don't care I just really don't know what to do with these writting:p

Cold sleep

intro
During your sleep- I’ll be next to you
and when I’ll be near your bed I know
It will be so easy to rape you….again

Verse1
When you’ll be dead, when you’ll be loved
You’ll have already been raped and ****ed
When my job will be done and you undone
I will realise I am a necrophile…forever

Chorus
I’m a necrophile, the last person you’ll see
Before I rape you, I’ll drown you in the sea
Welcome in a nightmare that will forever last
Embrace your destiny and be among the past

Verse2
You are so cold now and I can’t help it
Tomorrow I’ll have to throw you in the pit
I’m sorry I’ve gone to far and I killed you
Love is so cruel, lust’s so uncontrollable

Chorus
I’m a necrophile, the last person you’ll see
Before I rape you, I’ll drown you in the sea
Welcome in a nightmare that will forever last
Embrace your destiny and be among the past

Bridge
Rest in peace my love
Stay in your cold sleep
Faint into death and decay

I’m your demise
Your destruction
the reason of your disease

Solo

Chorus 2
I’ve killed you, I’ve raped you but who’s the victim now?
I’m sick , I’m crazy, and I’m dead inside of me… forever
It ends here, I’ve suffered enough, today I’ll die with you
I embrace my senselessness, It’s too late to be with you

I’ve free you too fast and I pay the price, forgive me please
Let me sleep at last, I’ll take my last breath and free myself
From this decaying envelope I once called my aching body
I’m no more than a rotten carcass of sins, pain and disease

Solo

forgive me my love and sink in your cold sleep

CrashingDown213
10-20-2004, 06:00 PM
and by the way if it's just to stupid and if I should scrap all this then say it
^^^

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-20-2004, 07:31 PM
im going to cry and then slit my wrists and then cry some more