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angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:07 PM
hi there, Im matt, Im a guitarist and an occasional riff writer and lyricist. Im a metal/rocker and have just written a country song

:angry: !WTF! :angry:

please tell me im not insane


hopped in a car for a 10 hour trip
sunny skies not a cloud to drip

no school or videogames
a vacation for my brain

then i think to myself i got life figured out,
then i have a boubt

further out on the interstate
passed a truck with no tail gate

through wooded hills covered in green
cross an old bridge over a rivene

and i think to myself i got life figured out, i have a doubt

goin to a simpler place in simpler times no slum lords or welfare lines
no ghetto gangs an no hate crimes
to worry me

just cigarette buts and pickup trucks, farra faucet hairdo cuts
no high skyscrapers or white-collar capers
to bother me

no political lies in the new york times
just grainery's and cobines

oh there so lucky
in lebonon, kentucky

mshort813
10-15-2004, 09:12 PM
i didnt like it. it was boring and i can hear this song sung in a ****ing country style and its just bad. there was no flow and it was very boring. at least go back to writing metal. the rhyming was terrible and very forced. the cotent was also bad. yes...you are going insane. .3/10

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:15 PM
oh no

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:16 PM
i know its a bad song but are any of you able to tell me how the hell this happened

mshort813
10-15-2004, 09:18 PM
well...maybe you are going insane.

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:19 PM
oh bloody hell i knew it

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:20 PM
i feel like drowning my self in a washing machine or toilet bowl

AntiGovRealist
10-15-2004, 09:21 PM
you know what you need to do, is never show this to anyone...well too late for that. Tell your little country conscience to go hang himself...if he can find rope.

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:21 PM
ill do that

A_Perfect_Sonnet
10-15-2004, 09:21 PM
its called a lasso, thanks ;)

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:26 PM
i feel a deathe metal song coming on :lol: :lol: :lol:

angus-x II
10-15-2004, 09:31 PM
thanx 4 ur help guys i feel fine now

life is good

ABulldog
10-16-2004, 02:45 AM
I don't think life can be good after that. I went out drinking and came home in a good mood... and now.... I feel ashamed almost. Ashamed that I had to read that. Ashamed that you even wrote it. Stick to metal. I hate country. Sorry. I need to listen to something that is the opposite of country... how bout danzig? NO, Hows about some sepultura, yeah I will listen to them.

limemachine
11-06-2004, 11:35 PM
country sucks as well as this song dude.
Stick to metal it's better than that crap
0.2/10

i am the robots
11-06-2004, 11:41 PM
LMAO funny song

Chucky
11-07-2004, 08:05 AM
what's wrong with writing and listening to two different types of music...?

mshort813
11-07-2004, 12:42 PM
there's nothing wrong with it, but this song just wasn't good.

I think this guy fled the forums after he posted this.

hannah
11-07-2004, 01:00 PM
narrow minded cocks
i agree the majority of country is ****e. but not all of it. personally (and woah am i gonna be hated for this) most of metal is ****e too. i like rock music. but rock music with emotion, and a lot of metal and hardcore merges into one big horrible noise, droning guitars, droning vocals, grating samey lyrics. i'm not saying there isn't good metal and i'm not saying there isn't a lot of emotion in some metal cos i'm not ignorant, just as you really cannot say all country sucks ****. there is more to music than metal for ****s sake.

and hey angus...
the song wasn't all that bad. and song writing is about expressing how you feel, so if you feel that way then you should write that way, otherwise your songs become forced and emotionless.

oh yeah and even if you are insane... i would say thats no bad thing when it comes to music!

mshort813
11-07-2004, 01:27 PM
most of metal is ****e too
I love you...I thought I was the only one.

Now I just hope the censored word wasnt "good."

limemachine
11-07-2004, 01:30 PM
i agree mshort813

hannah
11-07-2004, 01:33 PM
no ****e as in absolute poo

mshort813
11-07-2004, 02:09 PM
aweosme.

Elfy
11-07-2004, 02:12 PM
The song isn't actually that bad though; i really don't understand the comments put in place here.

Though i do agree, stick to your style; and only expand upon it if you know you can make a good job of it, or you'll expand your knowledge of that style later :P

All and all - Nice try :D

mshort813
11-07-2004, 02:14 PM
this song is famous.

/stops spamming the country song thread