Challenge 76: Replies

[pixiesfanyo]

Post bitches! :wave:

[SubtleDagger]

GG on being a ******.

[pixiesfanyo]

Gah. One time I'll make it the acutal word.

[SubtleDagger]

That's like when cyto wanted to make the word "coat hanger" (he thought it was one word).

Good thing he didn't win.

[pixiesfanyo]

Yeah. Good thing.

(Likes Coat Hangers)

[YDload]

There aren't enough good words that rhyme with "pious" except maybe "fry us." But that falls upon the cliched topic of people who desire to be cooked, and I don't think I can stand another one of THOSE songs, am I right guys?

[Permanent Solution]

Definitely...I love being cooked...but it is clearly an overdone topic. :rolleyes:

[pixiesfanyo]

There aren't enough good words that rhyme with "pious" except maybe "fry us." But that falls upon the cliched topic of people who desire to be cooked, and I don't think I can stand another one of THOSE songs, am I right guys?

lol. You could use pious in the middle :).

[SubtleDagger]

He's right, guys.

[YDload]

No way, I've avoided these challenges for too long because I was looking for the topic word to be used at the end of a rhymed verse! No longer!

[SubtleDagger]

No way, I've avoided these challenges for too long because I was looking for the topic word to be used at the end of a rhymed verse! No longer!
Well, the original title was "Challenge 76: ******", so I'm sure you would've been up for it at the time.

[YDload]

Well, the original title was "Challenge 76: ******", so I'm sure you would've been up for it at the time.

Have trigger will travel! Have trigger will travel!

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

question? since i got my vote in before you closed the thread im not dqed right?
:)

[pixiesfanyo]

nope.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

ill just throw pious into one of my other songs, and post it ;)

pious - adj - full of fruity filling

get it? PIE OUS :)

[SubtleDagger]

I hate you.

[Permanent Solution]

ill just throw pious into one of my other songs, and post it ;)

pious - adj - full of fruity filling

get it? PIE OUS :)
No...I don't get it please explian it to me :rolleyes:

Disclaimer: If you do explain it further I will hunt you down and take your head as a keepsake.

[super deluxe]

Pixhisnoseyo won again!

Dang, I really am going to have to see if i get all inspired...

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

<DQed

If only my computer wasn't a huge flamer. It has sex with the same-sexed computers. It taped itself once and put it all over the internet. I was disgusted when I found it on xxx.naughtyofficeequipment.cum.

[6945]

ill just throw pious into one of my other songs, and post it ;)

pious - adj - full of fruity filling

get it? PIE OUS :)


Mmmmmmmm pie.

Seems everyones estrogen levels have returned to normal. That last reply thread was HOT. 1st to post a song!!! Suckers

[pixiesfanyo]

^ As the popular saying goes. First to post, sucks the most.

[Permanent Solution]

I thought the saying was first is the worst, second is the best...oh well... :upset:

[6945]

Leave it to Pixiesf to be an authority on the POP culture but really?How'd you know I've done time?

[SubtleDagger]

what

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

Seriously...what?

[pixiesfanyo]

Lets just forget that and all download Elliott Smith - 2:45 AM.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

nah obviously whatever number i post is the best, seeing as how i never win these

[Dancin' Man]

I wish the word was coat hanger. Then I could write about abortions.

[Dancin' Man]

Lets just forget that and all download Elliott Smith - 2:45 AM.

Already got it.... ******.

[CSD & the Soul Machines]

I ate a big, red candle

[hotcod32]

can i eneter? i had always planed on actaly geting around to voteing on some of these befor i enterd, but i got a really cool line to use the word with... but i can't work out form the rules if you have to vote ont he last one (if you did't post a song) to not be DQ from entering the next

[SubtleDagger]

You do not have to vote for your first time entering. However, in order to enter the next challenge and/or win this one, you must vote once the voting for this challenge comes around.

In other words, you're free to enter.

[hotcod32]

ah right, ya i got that part... and me winning......... ha :D

[Disco Dragon]

GG on being a ******.

Well, the original title was "Challenge 76: ******", so I'm sure you would've been up for it at the time.
And you're a mod? What the ****?

[SubtleDagger]

I wasn't joking. The title really was "******", so this mod happened to edit it out.

Besides, it's not like I have to be PC just because I run this forum.

[Disco Dragon]

Are you kidding me? pixies actually put the challenge word as "******"? Well that's just plain stupid.

But actually Subtle, I thought you weren't supposed to use any sort of racial/sexual slurs. Am I wrong?

[SubtleDagger]

I don't have anyone telling me not to, it's nowhere in the rules, and we mods don't have a rule set other than the presets for MXers.

It's not like I'm spewing racial epithets all over the forum.

[xKONRADx]

to zeppelin: the way you used it in your song counts. so dont worry about it.

[ATC]

Are you kidding me? pixies actually put the challenge word as "******"? Well that's just plain stupid.

But actually Subtle, I thought you weren't supposed to use any sort of racial/sexual slurs. Am I wrong?

you should check this link out, dd.
www.musicianforums.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=3

the locals call it the pit.
slur away.

[d0ped0g]

dqed... :/
i'm not inspired to write anything decent anyway... apart from possibly a love song... so i can put music to it and play it to chicks in an attempt to woo them with my musicianship
and that song would indefinately suck

[pixiesfanyo]

The word ****** is a word. It can be the challenge word if I win.

[d0ped0g]

liek that would ever happen
:D

[SubtleDagger]

Do me a favor and don't make me change the rules in LC, just because you like the word "******".

[pixiesfanyo]

:(.

[SubtleDagger]

You'll be flamed to hell anyway, so it's not a great idea.

[pixiesfanyo]

Fine, next time it's going to be Death. Then everyone that loves Linkin' Park will be here in 2 seconds flat.

[SubtleDagger]

That's fine, that just means I get to do more mock LP songs in my crits.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

hrmmmmmmmmmmm.... no ones posting on here

[pixiesfanyo]

hmmmmmm. shut the hell up

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

*sniffle* yes sir *sniffle*

[Disco Dragon]

Yes sir?
Yes sir.
No, did you say yes sir?
I think he said "yeah, sure".
What'd you say man.
Well I said yeah sure... but literally what I said was yeah sure...sir.


i apologize for the preceding, but i just watched Super Troopers not an hour ago and that popped into my head after reading APS's post.

[pixiesfanyo]

prison guard

[SubtleDagger]

License and registration... chicken ****er!

[LiZZySkYnRd7^]

Sorry to interrupt but......what is everyones deal with Supertroopers? I seriously thought that movie was lame.

[DFelon204409]

Sorry to interrupt but......what is everyones deal with Supertroopers? I seriously thought that movie was lame.

no!!11!!!! supr tropers is teh best movie ever mad. joo dont even kno. + ur usr name isnt 1337 at all!!!!! @55c10W|\|zzzz!!!1111!

[SubtleDagger]

Super Troopers isn't that great of a movie, but for some reason it's still good times.

Club Dread is awful, though.

[LiZZySkYnRd7^]

no!!11!!!! supr tropers is teh best movie ever mad. joo dont even kno. + ur usr name isnt 1337 at all!!!!! @55c10W|\|zzzz!!!1111!


No way, I do know. That movie is bollocks...and dont mess with my username, Or I'll choot you mang........

Dont make me pull a 211 up in here.

[SubtleDagger]

what

[Permanent Solution]

what what

[metaliq]

What what?!

Back that sh!t up yo, for you want some of this peice of my ho, you's gunna haves ta pay me fo' the day she made me my son who's name is shady, and scratchy written on the bathroom walls wif her number under the slash advertin for some decent action. $10 a pop she dropped that rock and got knocked up but now she my wifey and i payed that pricey when i rolled those diceys down with brycey...

That is really easy. I should become a rapper.

[Permanent Solution]

I really shoudn't have to tell you to get your *** out of this forum twice in one day...but I am...
LEAVE!









:p

[metaliq]

Okay... i guess i better go drown myself...

(this is where you say we will spoon)

/Reno 911

[SubtleDagger]

Metaliq's been around the block.

[Permanent Solution]

indeed

[YDload]

Nice Omar avatar. He is awesome.

[Permanent Solution]

Absolutely, and ty...I wish I was as cool as him :upset:

[metaliq]

Metaliq's been around the block.

Ask Zeppi about me being around the block.

Well... it has nothing to do with zeppi, but he gets angry when I mention it.

What a nerd, eh?

[<3<3<3]

Maybe I'll enter,

When does it end?

[Permanent Solution]

Sooner than later...1 week entry period...don't know where it is at though

[metaliq]

18th I think.

Unless I suck at math. Could very well be a possibility.

[YDload]

I can't believe DFelon is back! I'm only trying this one because I thought he would not be around to smite me with his big words!

[Disco Dragon]

He hasn't been smiting like his usual self lately. Probably busy doing that lame college thing. Pssshh.

[Permanent Solution]

College is very lame I agree...*shifty eyes*...

[metaliq]

Like they say... smiting before college.

Well, that is how I will live when I attend college.

So has anyone heard of this really new cool band called 'Modest Mouse'!? Like, totally, float on. Its on MTV allllll the time.

*ponders*

[Permanent Solution]

Has anyone heard of like Dramamine, or Cities Made of Ashes...of course not, they are not on MTV...*hates nu-modest mouse fans passionately*...I am so glad they buy the CDs and then give them away after hearing the one single though, idiots...

[Disco Dragon]

Modest Mouse sucks rat turds. They should only be allowed to make music for deaf people. Better yet, deaf people with no taste in music.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

you dont like modest mouse? i dont understand... MY WORLD IS SPINNING OUT OF CONTROL!!!!!!!!!!!! :(

[Permanent Solution]

DD...have you heard anything not off Good news for people who like bad news?

[LiZZySkYnRd7^]

I like modest mouse........after I heard the line in the song that goes.......I sleep away the part of the day I cannot drink away...........and then opposite like..........I drink away the part of the day I cannot sleep away...

Brilll

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

hey, i sort of like good news for people who love bad news, especially bury me with it and black cadillacs

[Permanent Solution]

Bukowski is the best song on it...

[pixiesfanyo]

Blame it on the Tetons acutally.

[SubtleDagger]

Anyone who likes Modest Mouse should be beaten to death with a brick.

[DFelon204409]

hey, i sort of like good news for people who love bad news, especially bury me with it and black cadillacs

Too bad you like From Autumn to Ashes so your opinion means nothing.

[DFelon204409]

Anyone who likes Modest Mouse should be beaten to death with a brick.

The song "Dramamine" is good. Listen to that.

[SubtleDagger]

No.

I dislike the entire Indie movement. If I wanted to listen to '80's music all over again, I'd probably just kill myself.

[hotcod32]

meh i don't like most indie at all, it makes me want to cut off my ears so i don't have to lission to the same old boaring crap over and over again... at lest with poppunk you can giggle and have fun with the same old thing time and time again... but nor do i think that people don't have the right to lission to it...

[Permanent Solution]

Has anyone heard of like Dramamine, or Cities Made of Ashes...of course not, they are not on MTV...*hates nu-modest mouse fans passionately*...I am so glad they buy the CDs and then give them away after hearing the one single though, idiots...
The song "Dramamine" is good. Listen to that.
Thief. Whatever, Modest Mouse is a good band, though I am not a fan of indie at all usually, I like them a lot...what is very underrated though is ska :p

/prepares for flames

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Too bad you like From Autumn to Ashes so your opinion means nothing.

um wait, who has the thrice avatar? same **** kind of music man... you must have no idea what fata sounds like :/

[ATC]

/waits for dman to throw the dictionary at aps.

i find it weird that people can hate an entire genre. there is so much variation in each. i like indie. sebadoh > modest mouse.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

um, what? that made no sense ATC, i said it was the same type of music, damn just got bleeped out :)

[SubtleDagger]

From Autumn To Ashes is not the same type of music as Thrice.

Also, Linkin Park is the same type of music as the Deftones, proving that your point is useless.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

yet, i listen to and like both thrice and from autumn to ashes, and to me they are both rock bands?

[metaliq]

I like Opeth and The Spill Canvas.

Does that make me gay?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

no, having sex with men makes you gay

[SubtleDagger]

Thrice = good hardcore band

FATA = really crappy attempt at metalcore/screamo

By the way, d0ped0g, I can read deleted messages, and I think you figured out that that's what I was trying to say.

[Permanent Solution]

Thrice = good hardcore band

FATA = really crappy attempt at metalcore/screamo

By the way, d0ped0g, I can read deleted messages, and I think you figured out that that's what I was trying to say.
Agreed...and Thrice has a lot more talent too...and yet they only really get mentioned in pop-punk :(

I didn't know mods could do that...I must be more careful *shifty eyes*

[metaliq]

Haha, preferences are things that rule the world arent they...

Because I dont care what other people think of what I listen to - if I like it I like it.

So does that mean that there was a point to this? Kinda.

[Permanent Solution]

No...no point at all...but be aware that if you like crap music you lose respect. Take, for instance, mainstream rap :rolleyes:

[d0ped0g]

yeah i did figure it out :/

[pixiesfanyo]

NWA is awesome, and they are mainstream rap. Looks like you are a close minded asshole

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

looks like most everyone on here is close minded :\,

and NWA is awesome :)

[Permanent Solution]

Just to humor you I went a head and d/led a few songs and forced my self to listen to them...the song I got was chin check btw, and the intro was great...I was entirely impressed with it and it was wonderfully suspenseful...and then it was crappy as any other rap I have ever heard so I tried it out for you, but that contamination is already off my computer again...rap could be good if they didn't make up words and have the same lyrics over and over again...but really...how do they differentiate from other rap in your opinion, cause that was crap...

[DFelon204409]

um wait, who has the thrice avatar? same **** kind of music man... you must have no idea what fata sounds like :/

Well there's a core difference between the two. From Autumn to Ashes is horribly contrived, derivative, uninventive, and talentless, while Thrice is the opposite in all of those components. Just because FATA rips off Thrice, inadequately and terribly doesn't mean they're the same genre.

The weirdest thing that people never get is that there are good bands and terrible bands in every genre. If we're going to look at the genre of rap I can point out 50 Cent and Ja-Kwon as low points while Deltron 3030 and De La Soul are high points. For focusing on the blend of metalcore and melodic punk, Thrice is an amazing band, while FATA sucks. Want me to unload an argument on you while I procrastinate tomorrow afternoon?

[Permanent Solution]

Haha, i think you guys should drop it...and stop bashing on each other's opinions, likes and dislikes. It is all opinion as to whether or not you like them...and talent is in the eye of teh beholder to a point. For instance, Yngwie has a lot of technical talent, but most people don't like his songs because it doesn't sound good to them, so talent does not equal good music...let each others opinions go since you won't change the other's mind by arguing about it.

[Disco Dragon]

I say **** it, music is music. Its supposed to provide a lot of variety. If you don't like it, don't listen to it. If you do like it, don't let anyone else try to discourage you from listening to it.

[Permanent Solution]

Ah...more aptly put than I said it heh :thumb:

[SubtleDagger]

"It's just opinion" is really a statement that's getting to me with its stupidity, lately.

I think we understand we're arguing about opinions here, that's the whole point of having opinions in the first place.

[d0ped0g]

DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

[SubtleDagger]

Is it OK to make an entire hXcmp3 page for your metalcore riff dealies? Ah well, I did anyway (http://www.hxcmp3.com/bands/16880/).

[ATC]

/gets to the replies thread.

*checking out the riff*

[SubtleDagger]

Disclaimer: My computer blows in every way.

[ATC]

yes, i agree there. your computer does blow.
i'm not very well versed in metalcore. but yours sound good. its in the kse- in flames area, considering those are the only two bands i listen to that have similar songs.

i found the first section to be average, almost like i'd heard it someplace else. not saying that thats a bad thing, but maybe with better recording and more instruments, it would be intriguing.
the second part is well, metalcore..just like it says in the title. its a nice piece of work. didnt find it amazing yet. i found traces of iron maiden in it. :thumb:. i'd like to hear the breakdown/solo for this one.

when i think of your songs, for some reason i assumed it would experimental as hell. but its a fair effort. more polish required. which lyric did you intend for this one?

[SubtleDagger]

It's not a song, just something I was screwing with because when I play guitar I go metalcore-ish.

I would be more expirimental if my sound card could handle more than two tracks at a time. You have no idea how long the guitar harmonizing took.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Well there's a core difference between the two. From Autumn to Ashes is horribly contrived, derivative, uninventive, and talentless, while Thrice is the opposite in all of those components. Just because FATA rips off Thrice, inadequately and terribly doesn't mean they're the same genre.

The weirdest thing that people never get is that there are good bands and terrible bands in every genre. If we're going to look at the genre of rap I can point out 50 Cent and Ja-Kwon as low points while Deltron 3030 and De La Soul are high points. For focusing on the blend of metalcore and melodic punk, Thrice is an amazing band, while FATA sucks. Want me to unload an argument on you while I procrastinate tomorrow afternoon?


so youre saying its impossible for me to like both of the bands? personally, i think fata is good... and thrice is equally good, so i guess im just a retard huh?

[pixiesfanyo]

so youre saying its impossible for me to like both of the bands? personally, i think fata is good... and thrice is equally good, so i guess im just a retard huh?

He acutally never said that. Stop putting words in peoples mouthes slut ***. And while your at it don't post **** in the challenge forum except for your song.

[Permanent Solution]

Haha, chill out pixies...

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

He acutally never said that. Stop putting words in peoples mouthes slut ***. And while your at it don't post **** in the challenge forum except for your song.

your unfocused anger is matched only by you amazing grammar, and witty comments... for that matter, what the hell is your deal with me anyway? you act like i raped your sister or something.

[pixiesfanyo]

No, it's because you come into the LCs acting like you own everybody and make smartass comments towards people who've been here 3 years longer than you. Just get your head out of your ***.

[YDload]

Hey, people are posting comments in the official entries thread. Isn't that illegal or something? Isn't that what THIS thread is for?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

most of them are just saving a spot, and i deleted my post

[SubtleDagger]

Hay who else wantz 2 lissen 2 my riff guyz

itz up ther ^^^ lol

[Permanent Solution]

To Pixies...I see no one who has been here since 2001...so chill out heh...being here longer doesn't mean that you have supreme executive power...if you are here a long time and spam all the time you aren't exactly a figure of authority...(I am not referring to you, just in general)

[Disco Dragon]

No, it's because you come into the LCs acting like you own everybody and make smartass comments towards people who've been here 3 years longer than you.
Boy that sure sounds like somebody else in this forum. Now who could that be...?

[pixiesfanyo]

Boy that sure sounds like somebody else in this forum. Now who could that be...?

First off, all my responses (except for a few random ones) are mostly jokes.

I see no one who has been here since 2001...

Dfelon has been here since 2001 and all he really was doing was suggesting some better bands for APS. Makes sense to me.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

actually, what he did was insult me based on the band i listen to, then suggest i listen to thrice, which i already do...

yeah thats sooooooooo helpful

[ATC]

nice work on the sarcasm. :thumb:


/sarcastic

[pixiesfanyo]

You've got balls.
I like balls.

[DFelon204409]

so youre saying its impossible for me to like both of the bands? personally, i think fata is good... and thrice is equally good, so i guess im just a retard huh?

The latter is what I'm saying, yes.

[DFelon204409]

And let's all take a minute to read the winning song of this challenge:

My Life As A ****ing Loner

Crazy life of junior high
With the ups and downs of beer and pie
Your pious view of everything
Is like a wishing well without a chance
Of it ever coming true

Well I felt it and I know that
It’s bottled up inside
I’m hearing your anger
But over my head it glides
This feeling is new
I think it’s insecurity
Then I found you…
A definite score

“**** It” again I hear you say
Like a **** faced arsehole, you won’t go away
Off to the land of my principles
Where at least I know I’m wanted…

Well I felt it and I know that
It’s bottled up inside
I’m hearing your anger
But over my head it glides
This feeling is new
I think it’s insecurity
Then I found you…
A definite score

It’s like a hydroslide
Twisting and turning but once you do it…
You’re coming back for more

You know that it’s over
Nothing more to be said
Those ****ers won’t rest
Until they’re sure that you are dead

Well I felt it and I know that
It’s bottled up inside
I’m hearing your anger
But over my head it glides
This feeling is new
I think it’s insecurity
Then I found you…
A definite score

*Courtesy of green day punk

[Permanent Solution]

Meh, I was thinking more emo than Green Day meself...

[YDload]

Oh, DFelon, that's just mean! Wait, is it over yet? Can I still squeeze one in?

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

no, you still have time

[BMM]

Is it OK to make an entire hXcmp3 page for your metalcore riff dealies? Ah well, I did anyway (http://www.hxcmp3.com/bands/16880/).
thats pretty cool

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

does the thread close tonight at midnight?

[SubtleDagger]

To my knowledge, yes.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

i was just wondering, for the sake of the children :)

[Dancin' Man]

Wait.... did that song actually win?


Oh wait... voting hasn't happened yet.

[DFelon204409]

Meh, I was thinking more emo than Green Day meself...

Don't ever pretend like you know anything about emo ever again. You're wrong.

[Permanent Solution]

Probably...but then again I can't be mistaken about what I was thinking can I? :p

[DFelon204409]

Probably...but then again I can't be mistaken about what I was thinking can I? :p

As a pirate of truth you should cut yourself for being such a miserable twat.

[Permanent Solution]

Maybe, maybe not, I did after all simply state the truth of the matter, it is not my fault you don't like my answers. Besides...cutting yourself is the stupidest way to seek attention ever, just actually kill yourself and save the world the trouble of dealing with miserable attention whores :rolleyes:

[YDload]

oh crap, I missed the deadline. Oh well, I'll use pious someday anyway, because it's a cool world.

[Permanent Solution]

That it is...though I like piety better for everyday use personally :)

[YDload]

I said "world" instead of "word." I like what I said anyway.

[Permanent Solution]

It is a cool world indeed :rolleyes:

[SubtleDagger]

Getting anrgy at DFelon and/or myself has never helped anyone on this site.

By the way, the world sucks.

[sketchyjoe]

Probably...but then again I can't be mistaken about what I was thinking can I? :p
This is emo:
www.fourfa.com

[SubtleDagger]

Kid, you just got on DFelon's good side.

If you would have linked to CTTS, he'd be in heaven right now.

[Permanent Solution]

Getting anrgy at DFelon and/or myself has never helped anyone on this site.

By the way, the world sucks.
I never got made at anyone...he started the attack and I defended myself, but I never went on the attack to do so. I don't see where I got angry at either of you...

[ATC]

in the spirit of brotherhood, both of you can put in each others butts.
ps: green day is not emo.

while noobs should know better than to needlessly pis off older members, it doesnt mean anyone is infallible. coughsubtlecough. heh, nazi mod.
seig heil.

[DFelon204409]

Kid, you just got on DFelon's good side.

If you would have linked to CTTS, he'd be in heaven right now.

Don't worry. Fourfa brought me to climax anyway.

[DFelon204409]

Read this http://plagiarist.com/poetry/3596/

[SubtleDagger]

That's pretty good.

[ATC]

that poem reminded me of a bunch of haiku verses, since the last word of the first verse gets split halfway.

ling,
-ering a kiss.

who woulda thunk it?

[hotcod32]

so with the voteing....... which way round do the list go....... best at top to worst at bottem....... or worst at top to best at bottem.... i'm confused

[6945]

keep the same order as entered. Much easier to total votes that way.

[sketchyjoe]

Kid, you just got on DFelon's good side.

If you would have linked to CTTS, he'd be in heaven right now.
That site gets constantly referred to in the punk forum.

If anyone can't be bothered to read that site. A quick definition of emo is:
Emo stands for emotional hardcore. Like when you're watching porn and the girl gets ****ed up the arse so hard she starts crying.

[SubtleDagger]

Haha, that's pretty good.

[Dancin' Man]

I hate anal. It's so unappealing. Especially after I read Tucker Max's experience with it. http://tuckermax.com/tuckertriesbuttsex.html

[Permanent Solution]

Oh man..I am so confused, Pixies said he had no idea what the meaning of mine was, and Subtle said it was too blunt...isn't it either one or the other? :/

[DFelon204409]

I hate anal. It's so unappealing. Especially after I read Tucker Max's experience with it. http://tuckermax.com/tuckertriesbuttsex.html

I'm in the library and my laughter at that peice was definitely bad. Just because he went about buttsex in the wrong way doesn't mean it's all bad. Stupid mistakes of Tucker Max:
-Too much fancy dinner for both
-Too much Astroglide
-Too much videotaping without consent
-Too much wine

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

i have this feeling that everyone gives me bad scores just to spite me, which is probably supported by the fact that subtle thought my words didnt rhyme ;/

[SubtleDagger]

Sorry, kid, your rhyming is awful.

Need examples?

[hotcod32]

heh mine was god awulf even for me... i find geting slated funny... epsicly when its not done well

[Permanent Solution]

Wait Subtle, do you have an answer to my earlier question? (like 6 posts up)

[ATC]

subtle, have you ever listened to evanescence? ****, man, thats a stupid statement. lemme know exactly how my song sounds like evanescence. i'm curious.

'if the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear as it is. perfect.' -william blake 'the marriage of heaven and hell'
that is far removed from evanescence territory.

and APS, you dont need to rhyme to make a song. if everyone wrote songs that way, we'd all still be in the third grade.

[sketchyjoe]

Punkrawka!! While i agree with the tirade, I like songs that have layers instead of it all thrown bare. It's hard hitting. Recommend me some songs in that genre. 9
Anything by Dead Kennedys or Propagandhi

[SubtleDagger]

Wait Subtle, do you have an answer to my earlier question? (like 6 posts up)
Yes. Pixies is wrong and I am right. Also, pixies is dumb for not getting the song. (Luv ya pix :-*)
subtle, have you ever listened to evanescence? ****, man, thats a stupid statement. lemme know exactly how my song sounds like evanescence. i'm curious.

'if the doors of perception were cleansed, everything would appear as it is. perfect.' -william blake 'the marriage of heaven and hell'
that is far removed from evanescence territory.
Oh, now I see why your metaphor was completely random and had nothing to do with with the song; it's because it's Blake's.

Anyway, the rest of the song is boring, generic pronoun usage that doesn't say anything. What do you want me to do, go stanza-by-stanza like I did with DD's last one, saying, "This has too many pronouns and doesn't say anything profound"? (Hint: I'm not doing that again.)

[SubtleDagger]

too many pronouns in the first and third person plural. What are you? Karl Marx? You sound like Linkin park with an education or a socially conscious Manowar.
By the way, you're way out of line here. You're undermining my entire song because I'm speaking in a specifiic person (which has to do with the meaning of the song)? And I barely used any pronouns, I only used "we" a few times.

Your ratings have severely gone downhill. You're always comparing people's songs to bands and styles of music, and I seriously have no idea why you rate some of the people so highly. It's disturbing.

[ATC]

subtle, your person usage has nothing to do with the song.
you might notice, i put stuff in your crit in italics. were they meant to be taken seriously? i was generally pis[b]s[b]ed at the way i got compared to evanescence so the whole manowar thing is meant to annoy you.

ps: i have nothing against the usage of the third or first person. what i have an objection to is your belief that pronoun usage is a bad thing. while i agree it should not be overdone, it doesnt necessarily make a song bad or boring as you seem to think.

i compare people's work to music because i like to think at some point, someone would want to turn these into songs. i rate a lot on mood and emotion and other estrogen-ish things. All i have listened to for the last month is Tori Amos, Sarah Brightman,Jason Loewenstein,Loreena McKennitt and a bit of funk. Think of it as just another perspective, brutha.

I'll probably change when my next PMS thing happens and i switch to black metal.

Meanwhile, i want to encourage alternative non-metal musicianship.

[ATC]

subtle, Blake is not as bad as you think. His ideas are the basis of modern society, or rather the idealized version of it. If you are even slightly liberal, this is probably where you came from.

I have to read Blake for the romantic era in my literature class. His work is markedly different from others classicists. The proverbs of the devil are particularly interesting.

That work is all about how we do not know all that there is, and that the best works are not necessarily in God's name. All poetry and art is essentially the devil's through religious commandment when poets are likened to heretics. It reminded me of the Lilith myth/story/reference. Lilith, the first woman according to ancient judaic tradition, not Eve. Even if it is not something you are going to read into or even think when it is read, my song is merely about analysing and collecting ancient hebrew lore for class.

ps: if you were to say vagueness is just that, vague and does not make you think or feel, then where would most lyricists be?
i think that is why alice in chains was popular. it was vague as hell, but had a general feel and mood.

art isnt that which is easily seen and understood, art is that which has to be read into. and subtle, a line by line crit is not necessary. and yes, i apologize for particularly skewing your rating.

[SubtleDagger]

For Christ's sake, I've read Blake before. You completely missed the point, that the metaphor Blake used had no real similarity to the rest of the song, which was really just boring Evanescance pronouning for the majority.

And the reason basing your crits off of genres or artists is stupid is because you're grading on lyrical quality, not what you think the song might sound like.

PS: AIC was not vague in the slightest, and vagueness in lyrics when you're simply using pronouns and being ambiguous is stupid.

[ATC]

didnt i use enough metaphors for perception and a greater design in there? its pretty easy to figure that it is about perception and growth and human error.
do i have to spell everything out?

like i said, there is no one way i grade, purely what i feel about it. as for the genre, what i meant is that i dont rate the song opposed to every other song, but i rate it based on the best i have heard in that genre. if i havent heard enough of it, i ask for a recommendation. its not that bad a voting style. easier to compare apples with apples than with bananas. i might revamp the system sometime. Blame PMS.

ps: AIC talked about pain in a million different ways, did it mention anything specific. similarly for addiction and the spiral. My point was that a lot of lyricists have been vague.

[ATC]

Use your vote wisely, learn to look past the propaganda.

look at the vocabulary used. 'evil', 'axis of evil' ,'evil', 'evil-doer'. whats the matter with them? couldnt they come up with 'schmuck'?
-george clooney

coughvotekerrycough

[SubtleDagger]

No no, I understood the song, but it was boring and generic. I never said it was hard to understand, just uninteresting.

[pixiesfanyo]

Zeppelin fan.

A shadow scapes of ghosts
Line our ceiling wall

That isn't horrible english. It makes perfect sense. A scape of shadows from ghosts reflect onto a ceiling.

[DFelon204409]

addicted_tomung - the lyrics of my song weren't emo at all. Explain yourself.

[Permanent Solution]

Zeppelin fan.

A shadow scapes of ghosts
Line our ceiling wall

That isn't horrible english. It makes perfect sense. A scape of shadows from ghosts reflect onto a ceiling.
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=scapes
Which of those meanings are you employing?...if it was meant to be shadow scape (singular), I can see it making sense, but the way you executed it makes no sense at all to me. The second way you said it makes sense, but the way you said it in the piece made no sense. Explain how I am wrong if I am.

[pixiesfanyo]

so it should be scape.

[Permanent Solution]

so it should be scape.
All right, good to know (that's why I have not scored/ranked yet) :)

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

i give up on lyrical challenges... even when i use the challenge word correctly i get last :\

time to get out the old polish and just write like a madman again

[Permanent Solution]

You beat Green day punk :thumb:

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

not according to dead walk :/... really depressing, he didnt even use the word right

[pixiesfanyo]

Dude, who cares. It's an internet music board. It's just for fun anyway.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

coming from you, id think you cared a lot more than me, seeing as how you argue about everything

[pixiesfanyo]

I'm just saying it took me about 10 challenges to win one and the same with most of the vets.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

eh, ill do one more and see if i do any better... ive noticed a steady decline in how much i actually like what im writing, that might be the reason ;)

[hotcod32]

meh its just an excuse to acatly write somthing.... don't cear that i'm comeing last since i actaly only wrote in the thing in 5 munits since i wasn't really on the net or anywere for most of the week... 'tis just fun to have to work a word in to somthing...

[ATC]

Oh great and exalted one - the lyrics of my song weren't emo at all. Explain yourself.

arent lyrics that come between prose and poetry called emo? the ones that talk about school in general?
if it wasnt, hell, i was wrong.
whatever, i liked your song. the whole background verse in bracket thing is emo, nein?

oh no, i forgot it. its draculacore . :eek:

[SubtleDagger]

None of it was emo. For ****'s sake, I am so tired of this.

Emo is a genre of music, not a style of lyrical writing.

[sketchyjoe]

That sounds like emo talk to me.

[ATC]

Emo is a genre of music, but surprisingly enough, a lot of the people in that genre employ a similar writing style.

Do not Misunderestimate Emo.

[SubtleDagger]

Do me a favor and never put "emo" anywhere close to "lyrics" again.

I don't know when you decided you were going to do your best to piss me off as much as possible, but I'm really getting tired of it.

[hotcod32]

who the **** cears?

[DFelon204409]

arent lyrics that come between prose and poetry called emo? the ones that talk about school in general?
if it wasnt, hell, i was wrong.
whatever, i liked your song. the whole background verse in bracket thing is emo, nein?

oh no, i forgot it. its draculacore . :eek:

Listen to Subtle. Also, if you don't listen to emo, or know what emo is, then how can you assess it?

[DFelon204409]

Also, tell me what you think my song is about. That might have something to do with why you think it's emo.

[6945]

Love some of the comments. Its so "cliche" to use cliche in a crit. Flow changes due to verse, chorus, bridge etc. One pattern through out is very ***yawn***. Most of the time I only put in phrases that sound like sh*t. I try to avoid lines I think sound good (not)

[ATC]

my annoy subtle day was over yesterday.
peace out.
ps: it doesnt matter if you're tired of something. interweb, bro. get over it. i wasnt actively trying to annoy you the last time. a display of ignorance, maybe.

dfelon, i thought it was a random high school musing. its nice storytelling, better than a lot i've heard about that topic. the little things were nicely dealt with. what made me think it was emo was maybe an underlying vein of judgmentalism/petty disdain. the music people call emo that i've heard tends to have a lot of that, even if it isnt as intricate as yours.
i admit i dont listen to emo much, and i was probably wrong when i pegged the song that way. gimme a few songs to broaden the taste a bit. i tried a circle takes the square song off kazaa. it's got that annoying static thing going. couldnt get any better since kazaa had only one at that point in time.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

ugh, i cant stand circle takes square

[SubtleDagger]

Christ, just as I thought. You completely missed the point of his song, and I'm positive you misunderstood mine, too.

[SubtleDagger]

ugh, i cant stand circle takes square
I'm going to give you my opinion and I'm sure it's DFelon's as well:

You listen to FATA, your musical thoughts mean nothing.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

unless that was just a dumb joke, you can suck my phalus subtle

[sketchyjoe]

unless that was just a dumb joke, you can suck my phalus subtle
If you're going to insult someone at least make sure you can spell correctly.

[pixiesfanyo]

Also APS, you like Bright Eyes. So that's two really bad bands you got on your list.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

im glad every band you listen to is just so popular everyone :), make sure you keep thinking everyone agrees with your tastes in music :thumb:

[SubtleDagger]

Quit being a tool, I rarely listen to any popular bands, nor does anyone who is mocking you.

[ATC]

Your tastes determine to a large extent who you are. And on the internet, thats all you have to go on. If you want to get defensive, there's a log out button right up there.

relax. so someone doesnt like your taste in music. big whoop.
pfft people.
dont turn me into maddox.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

Quit being a tool, I rarely listen to any popular bands, nor does anyone who is mocking you.

obviously, if you are listening to a band (unless you go to see them play in their garage every night), they were popular enough for you to have heard about them, and popularity doesnt have to mean a mass media, it can just be around your town. i'm sure you are one of those kids that stopped listening to a band you've been a fan of for years, just because they signed onto a major label. ill give you an extra 10 cool points just because im sure you've done it.

[hotcod32]

Quit being a tool, I rarely listen to any popular bands, nor does anyone who is mocking you.

"look at me i am so grate becuse i do not lission to popular music, this makes me cool becuse it makes me diffrent form you"

stop being so freeking contrived... your worse than ****ing emo scean kids... i ****ing hate the idea that popular bands must automacily be bad, and bands that anit popular must be good... its a joke... its an attiude taken by people who have no understanding of aprashion of music what so ever... and you talk about me likeing "bad music" and i freely ammit that i do, lots of it is non complcated poppunk type crap, but i enjoy it and the idea that the band is popular or not never enters in to it... when talking about music, if a band is popular or not, should NEVER EVER come in to it, becuse it dose not matter, it dose not change the fact that you enjoy the music or not... you might not like the music of bands that are poupler, the only music you like may be bands that are unpopular, but to use this in a way that you think makes you better than other people, is a joke, becuse its then not about the music, its about you, and its about other people...

so APS lission to bands you don't like, and you think are bad, well good for you, thats your taste in music, and his is his... i hate lots of music, but i understand that other people can like it, as misterfieing as that can be, the music i lission to dose not make me better than any one, nor dose it make me wosre than any one, becuse there is more to a person than music... i have lots of good freinds who have a taste in music that when its being played makes me want to hurt my self in strange and horid ways, that i think is horiably bad, but they enjoy it...

chirst taste in music is a personle oppion, there is no right and wrong... you may think music is bad, but other pople don't... you can get in to how complcated the music is, but again that is pointles, becuse complcated dose not mean good, and with me in most of my tasts in the way i write story and lyrics, the way i draw, the way i paint the way i take photograths the way animate and film things i try and keep "simple" i perfer simple things, but people mistake the idea that somthing that is simple done can't have complcated meaning or ideas

but i'm geting away from the point i was trying to make... i'm sat here with the radio on, and you know what i have on, i have radio 4... for any one not in the UK that is the classical music stashion... but i may get board of this soon, and i may go put on blink 182 and still enjoy it just as much as i'm enjoying the radio now... but of cousre just becuse i like blink my oppion about music, and there for in your eyes about anything is autoicaly not as good as you....

did you even stop to think that sonet may also like some of the bands you do? i dout it, he likes some populer bands, so he can't be cool like you and lission to unpopuler music, becuse then he would fit outside your stupid contrived viwe of the world

i've had this crap all day from some 18 year old indy girl that can't descied if she wants to go for a drink with my freind becuse her freinds have diffrent tasts in music to me and my friend and our other freinds... she is at a stupid point in her life where she belive that music is everything about a perosn... as amazeing and as an imporant part of my life music is, it is not the only thing that makes me who i am... and her and her freinds can't seem to understand that, there just turning 18 and are moveing out of home, and are feeling so full of self imporants that they can't see past the fact people like diffrent music to them...

and form what i can tell, your just as bad, i've seen you do little that proves you to other than the self imporant git who has his head shoved so far up his *** he can't see what a fool his makeing of him self you really really need to grow up

[SubtleDagger]

SHUT THE **** UP, MORONS

I said that because he decided to make the comment of us liking popular bands, retards.

[ATC]

SHUT THE **** UP, MORONS

I said that because he decided to make the comment of us liking popular bands, retards.

NICE FONT. MORE CHEESE ?? SALAMI??

AH, YES. BINGO.

[SubtleDagger]

obviously, if you are listening to a band (unless you go to see them play in their garage every night), they were popular enough for you to have heard about them, and popularity doesnt have to mean a mass media, it can just be around your town. i'm sure you are one of those kids that stopped listening to a band you've been a fan of for years, just because they signed onto a major label. ill give you an extra 10 cool points just because im sure you've done it.
I'm sure you're a self-righteous asshole and you like to make assumptions about people you don't know just because you disagree with them.

[pixiesfanyo]

Ok..Number 1. Subtle listens to the Barenaked Ladies and Third Eye Blind.

They sure aren't played on the radio.

Number 2, hotcod that was the most nonsensical thing I've ever read in my life. You should be banned for just writing that.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

I'm sure you're a self-righteous asshole and you like to make assumptions about people you don't know just because you disagree with them.

hrm, look whos talking? *cough*

[SubtleDagger]

You?

Seriously, you have no idea what you're talking about. A band's mainstream success has never dettered me from liking them. A band sucking makes me dislike them. That is why I dislike FATA, and that is why you should shut up and quit making base assumptions about people because they disagree with you.

Idiot.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

obviously you live in a communist country where other people's free will isnt allowed, because if you didnt, you wouldnt be making such near-sighted comments like that. i notice how when anyone else says something to try and shut you up, you dont respond, but you feel for some reason you can win the arguement against me because of a band i listen to. its like the 98 lb weakling trying to fight the quarterback. how did you get to be a mod with such a horrible personality anyway?

[pixiesfanyo]

what the **** are you talking about? he said he didn't like FATA and you have bad music taste. two truthful statements.

[SubtleDagger]

obviously you live in a communist country where other people's free will isnt allowed, because if you didnt, you wouldnt be making such near-sighted comments like that.
More base assumptions, unless you're trying to be celever, in which case you're not even close.
i notice how when anyone else says something to try and shut you up, you dont respond
Give me one time that has happened. Pixies just made a comment in regards to you saying I never listen to any popular bands that backed me up, and you ignored that. Nice try, kid.
but you feel for some reason you can win the arguement against me because of a band i listen to. its like the 98 lb weakling trying to fight the quarterback. how did you get to be a mod with such a horrible personality anyway?
No, I feel I can win the argument you started, which concerns the issue of what you think I listen to. My argument was initally that your taste in music is awful, which you can't argue with, unfortunately.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

im talking about the fact that he says im an idiot because i listen to FATA, and listening to FATA makes me an idiot... incase you didnt know thats called circular reasoning.

but im sure if i had a sparta or ATDI avatar, i wouldnt be receiving half the bull**** im getting right now. but please, continue subtle, its always fun seeing you get pissed off.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

lmao, okay let's turn the the arguement around, and say that your taste in music is awful. whats your defence? "NUH UH, YOU ARE STUPID"

do you see how pointless it is?

[SubtleDagger]

im talking about the fact that he says im an idiot because i listen to FATA, and listening to FATA makes me an idiot... incase you didnt know thats called circular reasoning.

but im sure if i had a sparta or ATDI avatar, i wouldnt be receiving half the bull**** im getting right now. but please, continue subtle, its always fun seeing you get pissed off.
Who said I was pissed off? I'm merely pointing out your rampant stupidity.

And just in case you didn't get it yet (highly probable), your idiocy has less to do with FATA and more to do with your lack of brain cells. Though I'm guessing the former was probably caused by the latter.

[SubtleDagger]

lmao, okay let's turn the the arguement around, and say that your taste in music is awful. whats your defence? "NUH UH, YOU ARE STUPID"

do you see how pointless it is?
Who said I was trying to have an intelligent debate with you to begin with?

Oh, that's right, you did.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

here's your arguement in a nutshell:

-you are stupid because you listen to FATA
-I am great because i dont, and i disagree with you... that makes me automatically correct, case closed
-you are stupid because i say things that dont make sense, then try and point out your flaws with more flawed logic
-did i mention i was great because i dont listen to FATA?
-obviously if i wasnt right, i would have stopped arguing a long time ago
-you are a mainstream tool, influenced by MTV, a channel you dont even receive, nor watch
-any band that i dont like is obviously for idiots
-everyone needs to agree with me because i have so many posts, and have such witty comments for everything
-he started the arguement by making a generalized statement directed towards no one in particular
-everything you say to make a defense for yourself about having your own taste in music is incorrect, because i dont agree with you. so i feel the need to try and force my opinions on you.
-you are making assumptions about me, so it makes it okay to do the same to you
-FATA still sucks
-YOU DONT HAVE AS MANY BRAIN CELLS AS ME! this would be because you listen to music that is almost identical to mine, but im not a tool because the ones i listen to arent popular.

[SubtleDagger]

Did you have that hard of a time reading my last post?

There was never an intelligent discussion taking place on why your taste in music is awful. I made a joke on the last page saying that your taste in music was nil because you listen to FATA (which I think is true, and if you really want to argue intelligently, I can do that). The point being, it was a simple jab, and you took it personally and tried to make a huge thing about it.

Is it that time of the month or something?


By the way, I have never said about two-thirds of the things in your last post, nor implied them.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

i also asked it that was a joke, then everyone else piped in and you decided to make an arguement out of my sarcastic comment about everyone liking the same bands

[SubtleDagger]

Sorry if you're too dense to realize people are joking when we've been doing it for the entire thread.

The moral of the story: if your username is A_Perfect_Sonnet, never say anything to anyone.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

or, because people dont like being insulted, i had a natural response to your comments. ill just change my avatar now \= to avoid further conflict

[SubtleDagger]

If you were masochistic and enjoyed verbal abuse, we never would have had this problem. I hope you've learned your lesson. : |

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

lol, yeah i got it... ill lighten up

[pixiesfanyo]

That cd sucked. :)

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

its been in my cd player for like 2 weeks

[SubtleDagger]

Listen to Dillinger or I rape your unborn children.

[pixiesfanyo]

Pitchfork Media gave Miss Machine a 6.7 and said they were starting to suck.

Pitchfork Media is a bunch of faggots.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

its more bareable than circle takes square :thumb:

[ATC]

hEy, eAT nAChOS !!!! :thumb:

[metaliq]

I dont like dillinger.

Saw them in concert 2 weeks ago headlining... and everyone else put a better show then them. Well their guitarist is awesome, but the vocals get OOOLLLLDDDD. He has no range.

[pixiesfanyo]

nah. He has tons of range.

[metaliq]

Well maybe he should think about using some of it live sometime, instead of doing the same falsetto scream, which gets really irritating after about 40 minutes straight. ETID, Misery Signals, and Zao all change it up a bit live, unlike one band I know...

*shift eyes*

[Permanent Solution]

Hey, since we don't have a good place to put this...Subtle, please close this and ban the user:
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=255629
:thumb: It was just plain stupid...

[SubtleDagger]

No problem. I don't have banning powers, but I've tipped off the supermods.

[Permanent Solution]

No problem. I don't have banning powers, but I've tipped off the supermods.
Sweet, thanks :)

[Disco Dragon]

So I was punching this chick in the ovaries last night, and out of the blue she says "Get a job you lazy clown shoe." So I was like "Screw you, I got a job. I belong to the POPO (Professional Ovary Punching Organization) AND I had sex with your dog!" She had nothing to respond with.

[SubtleDagger]

I got a job two days ago.

[A_Perfect_Sonnet]

So I was punching this chick in the ovaries last night, and out of the blue she says "Get a job you lazy clown shoe." So I was like "Screw you, I got a job. I belong to the POPO (Professional Ovary Punching Organization) AND I had sex with your dog!" She had nothing to respond with.

you sound like a man with a plan sir

[Permanent Solution]

So I was punching this chick in the ovaries last night, and out of the blue she says "Get a job you lazy clown shoe." So I was like "Screw you, I got a job. I belong to the POPO (Professional Ovary Punching Organization) AND I had sex with your dog!" She had nothing to respond with.
Baby Killer...god hates you ;)

[Disco Dragon]

^^Thank you. I'd like to think so too.

On a somewhat more serious note, Addicted tochaos, I'd like to know what you meant in your crit when you said "ps: nice fetish". What fetish?

[Permanent Solution]

^^Thank you. I'd like to think so too.
Well now you know so, I just got off the phone with him, you are going straight to the 7th level of hell, like all the doctors who give abortions, and all the scientists doing stem cell research, god is a spiteful bitch.

[SubtleDagger]

So, I got this job two days ago.

[Permanent Solution]

Interesting...I am a full time student...who needs 20 hours of community service by December...:/