Someday - Please Crit

[guitarist12345]

It's time to show my thoughts again
Write them down using paper and pen
Tell you how I feel (about you)
Tell you what I think (about you)

I still pray that someday
I will make things better
Someday you will read this letter
{Can't quite get a last line to fit here}

I hope that you reply
I really think we give it a try
Second time it's always best
We sit down and forget about the rest

I still pray that someday
I will make things better
Someday you will read this letter
{Can't quite get a last line to fit here}

Two weeks have passed
I still have no reply
Maybe you don't want to try
Maybe I should curl up and die

I feel so alone without you
I keep making plans for two
If only you were back in my life

I still pray that someday
I will make things better
Someday you will read this letter
{Can't quite get a last line to fit here}

Someday I will make things better
I hope you read this letter
I will make things better
Someday you will read this letter


OK let me know what you think and could I have some help with the last line of the chorus. Cheers

[shaunybaby]

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[hurting]

i agree wit shaunybaby