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Threepwood
09-03-2003, 02:37 PM
This is a little different then most of my songs, but tell me what you think...


Echoes of your confidence
Are all I am.
Am I of relevance?
Of greater plan?

I plan to build a raft out to sea.
If I asked would you come with me.

I think you would.
I’d ask if I could.

Shadows of deliverance
You hide away.
Questions of benevolence.
But not today.

I plan to build a raft out to sea.
If I asked would you come with me.

I think you would.
I’d ask if I could.

Makeshift heart.
My shroud, now torn apart.
Makeshift heart.
My shroud, in broken shards.

Threepwood
09-05-2003, 08:21 PM
Anyone?

king buzzcok
09-05-2003, 11:55 PM
i hate to say it but it's lame, too much crying.

Lowridenn
09-06-2003, 12:22 AM
It's very moody and jumpy. There isn't much there. Not much I can say about it.

hihatx
12-14-2004, 02:33 PM
there is already a song called echo but i admire you talent