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- new song, crit please
- Too Late
- Ugly
- Thank you Adolf
- lucid dream , i havent finished it!
- "so we get another goodbye" crit please
- "Calling Us(Resist It)" crit
- Paintings
- Falling down-Story of the year Q...
- but you just brush him by
- sweet soul
- Lock the Doors, the Salesmen are Coming!
- "White Lies" (not a love song)
- Super-Ego + Alchohol = Ego - Inhibitions
- Speech
- Dependant on the sun
- Symbiont Species
- mostly untitled......crit
- The Human Stain
- Emo Opera #3(You'll Never Know)
- Opening To A New Untitled Song
- How about band-offs in MX?
- Time of need
- Flames on the Surface
- If God lived on earth, people would break his windows.
- Love Is...
- Neon
- lowercase everything
- Dreams of escape
- Warmm Beer
- Forever Gone'd
- Pride
- Some of my stuff, can u gimme feedback.
- I hope you never understand...
- just something but its unfinished
- "My manic dreams"
- Deceased lactate product delivery personell
- another song please crit!
- the clown
- Blissful Rest
- Picses
- Take A Look Around
- Highway to no where. please crit.
- just a chorus
- Not sure if thise goes here, but, help getting some vocal sounds
- Slight Visions Of Unison - Lyrics - Please Comment
- Fly - crit for crit
- I'm a dirty sellout and deserve to die (Social Satire)
- Savouring The Flavour Of 1 + 1 - Lyrics
- Lucifer's Reality- crit please
- I/You/We
- Poor sam ( pleez crit, i'll crit in return)
- not titled
- When Sleep Meets Morning
- yet another 1st song
- feedback requested
- 'Above It All'
- Executioner - New song -
- Empathy (please leave feedback)
- Broken Man
- One for S&L
- King of Contemno
- Desperate help!
- Those Days
- Wot u think of this?
- new one
- NEW SONG "Project 2" CRIT PLEASE
- Please crit - 'Voice of a Generation'
- We Are the People... I will crit back
- Opinion
- Screaming
- returning to the randomness with a collection of slang and bad english!
- Blood Brothers (Willam's Song)
- Communication Grace-crit please?
- Metaphors?
- Autumn
- Painting a Picture (please crit)
- good unused band names
- Poetry inspiration question...
- 'Above It All' Rewritten
- just looking for some critisism ...also Title
- Vocal Lessons
- Mother Natures Wrath
- anyone wanna write??
- New Song I Wrote Please Crit.
- What do you think???
- the magnetic conversation (rande and her torso exceeds limits)
- Emptyness breeds loneliness
- Clean the Dirty Window
- I feel nervous doing this...
- A song I wrote
- Music justifies
- more, please gimme feedback
- Take a look at my song
- JUst a recomendation
- Untitled
- added third verse....come see
- ''Detox'' --Critisism's welcome here
- What is a hook?
- Its official
- the weapons of my mind
- song suggestions
- Failed Attempts to Drown
- Community Thread / Tips and Questions
- Lyrics question
- Closed doors in a quiet, cold mind
- Walk Dreaming (please crit)
- Bottom Dwellers Seeking an End: Meet at my Place Where We'll Mend*
- "Stay" - short song
- A start.. please help.
- Typical Song
- Oblivious - Please Crit
- I Don't Care
- "This Pain" (poem of love)
- Can You Hear Me? (my first ever song)
- Tales of the Old Kingdom
- Just A Few
- Livin On Lies
- A Mistress and Her Cataclysm
- verses to a untitle song help crit
- verses to a untitle song help crit
- how do i?
- Alfred McGee
- where to put your best lines
- Chinese Song
- I Still Don't Understand Me..
- entitled "bloodsucker",please crit..
- Lunar City
- critique away critique away
- Abstract Writers Thread
- the pain of love (crit please)
- corner of my street ( crit n ill crit bk)
- Microsoft Sam
- wait!
- Denial (the unamed verses from before) please crit
- vocal training
- Paint the Sidewalks Fuchsia
- A Little Town Called Arson
- hey you guys!
- Painting a portrait of her, upside down..
- Too Little, Too Late
- "Falling Down"
- "the old days"
- a song that needs a little work so please crit
- Love, Sweet Death
- where to start the words?
- The Decieved- Christina (My first song plz rate)
- Amnesia (Not Done But Give Me Your Crits So Far)
- Title Needed - Go on, have a peek!
- a song that is wierd as.
- America?
- Banish Your Fears, hurray a positive song!
- Time Seals My Fate(please crit and i'll crit yours)
- Nocturnal Silence
- Dreams
- The Broken Mind
- unforgiven (a hard metal song (lamb of god) need crits thanks)
- My first song i wrote. (it really sucks) i need some tips
- You And I (please crit)
- Duck,Duck,Duck,Duck,Duck...Goose
- Child Left Behind
- "Like Day and Night"-crit appreciated
- Untitled but I'm taking suggestions. Take a look
- Critique this Noobs Song
- A Few Words About...
- valentine song
- I really need help
- Sleeping Beauty
- im a begginer... its only my 3rd song
- Nine Feet Deeper Than the Standard Depth of a Pool
- Diaries of My Demise
- collection ff my songs
- I swear
- Hong Kop
- silver
- Yesterdays Hero
- Sacrifice
- Tears Of Blood(Please crit)
- Responsibility and Blame
- My Crisis (plz rate)
- Ohann Part 1: Trevor
- dark empty tears
- Seeing You Burn in Black & White
- Love Song(unfinished)
- "CRUMBS" crit please!
- lust for the lost one (crit for a crit need help here thanks)
- Second Song Crits Appreciated
- Cold Night Sky
- val(ANTI)ne
- Ok let me try this again...
- My song "Cell Rat"
- Eleven Letters
- Rag Doll
- Untitled
- The Serpents Kiss(please crit)
- "Taken Girl"
- Silent Sleep
- My First drug song...crit plz
- Forsaken........maybe the best song i have ever made but it's up to you
- Tears Of Hate- Just wrote this!!
- Tea with the moon
- Not close to finished - Stars in the Night
- what has this become? (i'll crit yours if you crit mine)
- Shackles of Love
- Post Your Song Here
- Ignite The Stars, i'll crit back if you take a look
- Flood
- Khayr Ad-Din's Venetian Galleasses
- Just a Tip
- Song through Greif....
- The Blank Image... crit 4 crit
- Happy Songs
- Broken Seed.(ok, let me have it)
- let me in
- Untitled little thing...
- Forget Your Lies ((*dont be harsh*))
- One-Up Mushroom
- Enveloped~~(Please Crit)~~
- ::untitled Experiment::
- Please Do Not Break Me
- Somewhere to go
- Societies Sermon
- Saturday Night
- My Remains
- Behind Castle Walls
- Black Mask
- "Open Hearts and Closed Books"
- Finished Song
- Anzu
- Painted smile
- obscure passion of love
- "On Display"
- What a Grotesque Thing a Rose Is... (Gatsby)
- My First Song
- poems in red
- my burnt collection of songs
- Mindgames
- Songs?
- My Anxiety(please Crit!)
- a song for two vocalists
- The way that it was (crit 4 crit)
- Young Beginings
- Wip Punk Song
- Sold Out!
- A poem i wrote today(has some cussing in it)
- Can I get some help with lyrics?
- Im looking for lyrics with...
- A lesson from someone who died again
- Funerals Give Closure, This Doesn't
- This is Why I Don't Go Out
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