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  1. Love Lost Song - Please Critique
  2. Sleepy Eyes (an acoustic song)
  3. My first song, Please Come Back
  4. Drummer's Song
  5. im stuck here
  6. Bologna
  7. (what we have done) crit plz new song
  8. Crit some songs Ive written
  9. The Elevator Made One Trip
  10. Brown Eyes, Blue Eyes
  11. hey
  12. the hourglass
  13. no name please rat it! and help me put a title to the song
  14. needs new opening line can any1 help
  15. Conflict on Washout Bay
  16. A Love To Die For
  17. -----Problem Child-----
  18. "Judge" - please crit this song
  19. grungy song I just started 5 mins ago
  20. metal song I posted in 2003
  21. bliss (crit and ill crit back)
  22. start of prog rock song
  23. The Clichè Song
  24. Opinions Of A Song I Wrote
  25. Finding the good
  26. working title 'Twisted' - help needed?
  27. Would it be alright if I were to call you God
  28. The 'Next Lyric' Game
  29. time wont to tell
  30. The American Dream
  31. unify--- crit plz
  32. First (Love) Song ... Opinions welcome!!!
  33. Sweet stanza from one of my poems
  34. Next is next and then is now
  35. A walk to the fair with a black scarf and my face full of hair
  36. Upon The Grave (edited)
  37. first lyric post...crit please "
  38. The final drop
  39. The Man With No Eyes (crit for a crit)
  40. love him or leave him, either way it gonna kill ya
  41. The City of the Dead
  42. Crit for crit, currently untitled song I wrote
  43. desert of delilah ( i think yal well really like it check me out thanks)
  44. Three days from tomorrow.
  45. (Rainy Day in) Winter; Rough Draft
  46. Success (slightly political song, please crit)
  47. Splits and Shatters
  48. sorry
  49. Universal Factor - Crit for Crit
  50. My songs
  51. gossip
  52. Another old song fom last year - metal
  53. Deaf Image
  54. The Blame
  55. My first song, Please crit me, needs a name too if possible
  56. Longing for the day... (Please crit)
  57. la voiture (it's written in english btw)
  58. we're not so special
  59. Revolution
  60. please crit, i broke it up for u this time
  61. New song..[no title yet]
  62. a very emotional song from an emotional bugg
  63. 4 songs i found under my bed!! i wrote them last year pleaz check it out!
  64. First song in almost 18 months
  65. Plexiglas Plethora
  66. The Spider's Web: Flight
  67. Eat Your Heart Out; First Draft
  68. When Two Eyes Meet-Please Crit,
  69. Tomorrows Nothing On Sunday
  70. The Melodies Have Faded
  71. First song I've ever put on musician forums, please read
  72. the day we threw our life away.. please crit please
  73. Changing me
  74. Crit this song
  75. Let go
  76. My new song "My Questions" !!PLEASE CRIT!!
  77. 'Think of Me' crit please!
  78. Showoff (2 draft) u crit, i crit
  79. Wake up your mind
  80. my first song on here, its not done,can anyone help me?
  81. Sometimes, is it like Pink Floyd
  82. The updated writer's guidelines and tools for a great song. (SHOULD READ)
  83. My Refuge In Darkness rate it its long and really really cool trust me!
  84. Twisted Reflection (Please Crit)
  85. Johnny's Song...i need help
  86. dirty/shiny records
  87. Goth lyric generator
  88. My old song (I'll just call it Beam me Up Mary) edited, crit for crit
  89. Killer Instict - Crit fo' crit
  90. your soiled beauty/how is this so far
  91. A Maze in Mind....CRIT
  92. Two Pounds of Crimson Puddles
  93. Vocalist Needed..Mississippi..Rock
  94. Something new! Crit for Crit...
  95. Eve (please crit)
  96. Moribund
  97. Convulsions
  98. hopefully better than my 1st lyric please crit
  99. Insecurity Girl
  100. The girl I like that doesn't know I like her
  101. The truth inside the dying sun
  102. Noob to writing - Crit what I've got
  103. Action (Bring It Down)
  104. New One.
  105. If i woulda known
  106. "My Love," please crit
  107. discouraged crits very much welcome
  108. need help open to any suggestions
  109. need help any suggestions welcome
  110. 'UnderOath'
  111. Old metal song - think Iron Maiden
  112. Potential?
  113. 'Illegally Acquired'
  114. Where I've Been >>>
  115. Spider - Oblivion
  116. LoTM: Elliott Smith
  117. Forget the Angels
  118. Central Park (With Audio)
  119. This Is My First Songs, I Need Some Crit So I Can Make It Better
  120. Final moments of clarity before the sun finally sets
  121. alone, here, i wait (a short one!)
  122. Four Season Planet
  123. Song written last night, please crit
  124. untitled
  125. Mankind Part 3
  126. On The Other Side Of The Wall - crit plz
  127. On The Other Side Of The Wall - crit plz
  128. less than nothing
  129. My Mistake
  130. Stepping Stone For Higher Ground,PLease Crit
  131. Grave yard
  132. Xenophobes
  133. "2:24am" last one for tonight i think!
  134. a poem based on Starry Night (the painting)
  135. untitled for now
  136. a joke song
  137. my first song...take a look-see
  138. A Mahogany Apologue, Vol. 5: The Forgotten Love Session
  139. Jury - another song for crit
  140. Hope This Finds You Well
  141. somthing i wrote.... crit please....
  142. I Like Apples And Bananas Too, Just A Silly Song You People May Like
  143. Victim of Noteriety
  144. the wave
  145. Forget The Sun
  146. whats in ur cd collection
  147. Games (fairly screwed up poem)
  148. "My Dove"...Very Sad...Please Crit.
  149. this is still really ruf...need help...i wrote it at school today
  150. this is still really ruf...need help...i wrote it at school today
  151. An Empty Gesture
  152. Army of Puppets
  153. Hesitance drives a different meaning....
  154. Last Day
  155. Inebriated Decisions
  156. Tell Me What You Think
  157. the taint... crit plz
  158. Jesus Complex (working title)
  159. Break On Me
  160. rough copy of new song - rock 'n' roll
  161. Easiest Choice
  162. First songs ive written
  163. First experiance song...plz crit
  164. Tempestuous Hate
  165. repost...i revised a song
  166. Revelation
  167. Enemies In Sight
  168. Glad to be with you
  169. lyrics written by my guitar player
  170. this world demented by time (a totally new subject please check it out)
  171. Do lyrics have to rhyme to be good?
  172. Break Up Beach
  173. Hidden In Television
  174. a verse for a song. please crit
  175. COPS- Lined Up
  176. your fight is not with me
  177. untitled Poem
  178. Hour Glass
  179. Crumbling Inside
  180. Lyricist Wanted
  181. Colorless (Please give thoughts on this)
  182. "The Dreamers Dream" CRIT 4 CRIT
  183. its true register copyright for $5
  184. Just like when we were young
  185. someplace better than here
  186. Just the way it is
  187. Spider - Return
  188. Think of home
  189. Caved-In (Political)
  190. Men-o-war
  191. Blind- crit plz
  192. The World Needs a Hero (Criticism appreciated!)
  193. Drunk With Love
  194. Bike In Den
  195. Peace Dynamite
  196. Alive: Outside - Crit Plz
  197. it was me...
  198. Patchwork (hardcore rough draft)
  199. nearby stranger
  200. Its time to think a new way--vote away
  201. First song post
  202. She Don't Mean Anything
  203. Please critique lyrics to Keeper Of Destiny
  204. my first poem here
  205. I’ll Be In the Vineyard, Waiting
  206. sever all ties! pleaz rate it
  207. the end of the world , a smile to my doom!
  208. what do you guys think....i tried too hard to rhyme
  209. this song is average i personally think...please critique me
  210. give me feedback
  211. Star Gazing(poem)
  212. Still Under Construction But Just Critique It
  213. Treading Water
  214. Tragedy
  215. Present Her Present
  216. So What?
  217. Hurt Me
  218. A new song
  219. From Behind Our Walls
  220. "WITHOUT THE FIGHTING"
  221. The Mirror
  222. godlike
  223. "NEW SONG CALLED "GREENWOOD BEACH"
  224. a life lesson (very emotion filled song--true story here) i would apperciate ur input
  225. Please Come Back
  226. "Bullets and Bloodvessels"
  227. Bulletproof Glass
  228. Heroism
  229. "Soil of the Underground" - input appreciated.
  230. And We’ll Salvage Albany
  231. runnin again...please crit
  232. Emo Opera#5 (The Last Piece of You)
  233. Down Below, please crit
  234. well i have a chorus...
  235. emancipate 1st revisions-crits would be nice
  236. A song without a name...
  237. Second Chance - Plz Crit
  238. Song, No Title
  239. the dark kiss of my angel
  240. my 2nd poem of the day -- its called BLACK HAVEN
  241. One of my first
  242. Opinion
  243. Spider - Explorations
  244. So We Wont Speak?
  245. This a poem: They
  246. new here..but here's one of my songs..
  247. "Mistake (Take 5)" My song..PLZ CRIT
  248. your basic life the universe and the res of that stuff song.
  249. Snow
  250. Revelation (Crits Please)