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- Any Recordings?
- A Midwinter Stroll (for your enjoyment and commentary, no crits necessary)
- No title yet, crit and I'll crit you
- Dreams:pleez rate
- "Running Away"
- your guilt.
- first ever lyrics
- Sällan
- Mutiny Tonight My Friends
- forty three and seven
- The Faceless Clock
- No Name Sorry
- The Unknown Fear
- Old song of mine, crit it!
- in the early morning part one
- Machines of Flesh (tentative title)
- new peice of work in what seems forever "binded"
- Chorus to Cry for
- my first thread here - "Cold Morning"
- Razorblade Fate
- Adjourn
- "Et Tu"
- untiltled and need some opinions ( Crit for Crit)
- flawed hourglass
- Black label
- song for school due tommorow
- Vocal Training: Screaming
- "ill never ask"
- the need.
- Guilty as Sin
- The Vines Were Strangling The Trees
- The S&L awards.
- Make this right -->plz crit
- trendsetter
- Cero (I need more... someone helpieme)
- What scales and chords ?
- Poems to songs
- Tainted (poem)
- Shroud of nightmares.
- disenchantment (redone)
- Media Swamp
- The boys of timebomb.
- A Song, Shocking
- Running
- Sunny Night Nr 389 & 403
- “The last time I was here I hated you and now that I’m back I still do”
- Not for me, will crit in return
- I feel weird writing such a simple song
- Gone Postal
- Bologna
- lost
- Haiku and Short Poem thread.
- Forest Paradise(poem)
- I Don't F*cking Care (aka anything else)
- riptide
- Blank screen
- Self-destructive
- Your star
- Trial By Fire
- If You Like Fish Read This
- One Perfect Note (Lyrics)
- Ode To Cobain part one and two
- Needs a title...looking for suggestions...crit for crit
- A bit of a lost cause here...
- Fading Dreams (crit please)
- Siesta
- To Walk in the Light...
- colour
- Inferiority Complex
- Cut the chord. (Crit for Crit)
- Tragedy and Beauty
- "STUCK" (please crit)
- Dear You (I don't like the title - any other suggestions?) crit4crit
- Which way?
- Ish Kerioth, The En Passant Detractor
- Good Night St Peters Drive
- Thrown Out
- Attempt at a better...well...let's call it another song
- Punch-Drunk Philosophy(the revised version)
- SEED CORN, will crit in return
- Please Crit...Protagonist Challenge
- Through the passing storm
- Through the passing storm
- Through the passing storm
- The Day You Walked Away From Me
- hey i cant think of anything when im trying 2 write my own songs
- Prose-Perpetuality In Essence
- Thorn in my side
- Ode To Cobain Part one and 2
- silence
- the growing dark(please crit will crit ur songs)
- Runaways - Please Crit
- "Naked Blood"
- Looking for Interbet "collaborator" ...
- "This my Nest", Please crit this one guys??
- Writing Surfer-esque Music
- Testiment of a small turkey
- Pulmonate Gastropod
- A shadows flame redone.. crits please
- Right Wing Media Zombies - Crit for a crit
- Underground
- “Brand New Old Fashion”
- "Crush" - crit for crit
- the growing dark (rewrite) please crit
- Smith & Wessen High School
- something a bit different?!
- Mass Manipulation (please crit)
- "The Deal For Being an Idealist"
- Oh, Rachel..."I think he's fead!" they screamed.
- a triumphent loss
- I'd appreciate feedback
- "Nothing in particular"
- Dance of Rants--crit 4 crit
- In a haze ( hidden meaning)
- "Island Dreams" Crit for a Crit
- Dentistry befoe novocain (a S&L community challenge that is hopeless)
- Make me a Key (crit for crit)
- I Can't Lie - for crit
- New Song
- Really Need Help!
- Dreaming a Nightmare
- help me
- Song from a friend, pleeez crit
- Solo Help!
- 7 Feet Under
- How to... Improve your Songwriting
- New Song.
- Curtains Drop
- Chapter III: Among the Enemy
- first song posted, please crit
- Unnamed song
- Mankind Part 1
- be alright by fred jones
- like last summer
- Hiding place
- Drifting, first song. (Tenative Title)
- Beauty Queen
- "Of Me" - Let's give this one a shot
- dunno where this came from
- Beauty Queen
- The reign of darkness(come up with new verses)
- "Jack Torrance and The Overlook" Crit please.
- What came to me Crit!!! or else...
- nightmare in a sunny sky (writers block song)
- [DUNNO YET BUT PLEASE READ and crit if ya want]
- long lost love (first song in a while,,bad block) help me out here
- Finally, somt time to write
- Lyrics to a song of mine (audio included)
- End to the pain. (A song to jennifer.)
- a deep and meaningful song... crit for a crit :)
- Let's Pretend
- Erosion
- The Genius’s Mastermind
- Flashlight
- sorry, feedbak on a song pleassse
- gingerbread man
- Give me some tips (new at singing)
- No title.......yet
- Devine Design
- Mountain Love (please crit)
- Holes plz crit
- Need help singing...
- Restoring Anima. (crit for a crit)
- My Gift To You... yeah, it sucks
- Belief (Virus) (Crit mine, I Crit yours)
- Speeding time?
- Leave(Look Away)
- Invisible noose
- How much do you deviate from a standard key when songwriting?
- maybe this is_n't
- A Thirty-Seven Cent Goodbye
- Vocals?
- The World is Falling
- Soar {my new song}
- Banished (My New Song)
- Dead Givaway
- A Temperamental Equinox
- cardboard wings.
- Friends dont - plz crit!! i wanna recorde it with my band
- Forget to Sneeze
- Guitar Pro
- Metamorphosis
- Optimysticism (Pavement Chakras)
- need help.. desperately!
- A New Song By Your Favourite Slug
- Leave Me
- Mankind Part 2
- Problems With Critting On This Forum
- The Grim Reaper and a Love for Oblivion, Quietus, and Necrosis
- Professional Lyrics
- the guitarist (crit please)
- Hide the Sun
- The Alysalolitagentaquachromagenesis
- "27-12-04"
- broken hearts on a winters day
- A Road Less Travelled
- The Rebel Cowboy
- Something I noticed...
- Her. (a short poem.)
- Song Writing Website
- Mind Riot
- Nothing
- Absent (I Don’t Have the Nerve to Call 238-1138)
- Regret (my first song)
- Comments are invited
- Protecting You Creations(Please Read And Give Feedback)
- She
- "Second Chance Mistaken at First Glance"
- 'What It Takes'
- The Manticore
- 'Salvage The Debris'
- Tangled >>>
- Cherry Red
- To Gaze Through Water
- The Distance that Makes the Game (crit)(plz)
- Four Seasons Of Life
- Lonely Nights (Crit. Please... Helpful tips)
- Everyone NEEDS to read this
- Time (w.i.p)
- Will You? (Another Song By Me - suggestions/helps? etc.)
- just because. ( fightin the power agen!)
- Mob Politics in the Key of Green (Please Crit)
- Disguise - Pls Comment
- Good Lyrics
- Overshadowed
- Why Does Everyone Write Pop Punk/pop Emo Lyrics?
- ok people i need help again on a song. im kinda stuck right now
- My Daddy Dodged the Draft
- Untitled as of yet! Crit backs, of course.
- Zrang
- Since We've Been Samurais
- My Pain, Your Guilt (work in progress)
- what to wonder....crits
- The Rebel Should Die
- Hell's Befalling
- Not Your Average Guy
- The result of cutting your throat.
- Gossip Can Kill You
- Fall From Grace
- Untitled (my first lyrics)
- I'll Smash Your Face If You Don't Leave (PLZ CRIT.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
- Hey! I'm new here this is the firs POEM i post tell me what u think plzzz
- Words Unspoken
- A Song Got Me Comments Pls
- Best Songwriters of All Time-Post Your Choices.
- Song Lyrics
- post lyrics
- Can I get some help with lyrics?
- The Puppetmaster
- Double-Edged Sword
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