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- poem - White Beauty
- Haunted by Passion
- Punch-Drunk Philosophy
- missed oppurtunities
- I Cry
- something i wrote
- Poem - enlist this pain
- trusting
- My dumb song about Bloody Mary
- 10.30 - Comment/Crit
- Striving to Survive
- Not Above Begging, I've gone acoustic :P
- F*** Reality TV
- From the Forest
- Jada Lyrics
- :( my chord progression isnt original
- Dying for Nothing
- WE RULE THE NIGHT (one for the metalheads out there)
- An exercise in opinions...
- Love Between Two
- New song, pls crit
- subliminal messages
- it lies with you- new song please crit
- clash of the uniforms.
- Rebirth(poem)
- Where are you now?
- Lyric game
- My Chorus Rest of song is under construction (crit)
- My first song/time on lyrics section
- hey fellow songwriters need a critique look here
- Akasha
- Can't Win For Losing
- Blindman's Cemetery
- no title (ill let yal guess the meaning) needs work crits please
- Solitary
- E? C?
- which instrument writes lyrics in your band?
- Don't know what I did
- so perfectly...
- Cyanide
- Razor's Edge C/C
- The Official Morrissey Hate Thread
- Can U Please Rate These Lyrics?(metal)?
- Please rate these lyics for me.
- Please rate this newish song
- The Ten Min Poem
- Desolated Dreams: The future is a mist
- The Official Skinfish Hate Thread!
- a song for a friend
- yet just a shape of a song
- umm some lyrics
- No trust
- Retarted
- I Can No Longer Believe
- Song of The Month
- Almost means nothing (Really fast)
- Always - New Song
- Pigs of Western Days
- November Heat
- songwriting techniques
- Light - A Poem
- Why Am I Still Weeping (Please Crit)
- Fugitive vs. Society
- what is the best way to write rock songs ????
- My latest song..... please crit.
- CRIT ME!! You know you want to...
- "Kick Back" have a look, please crit
- Critiquing Guidelines (reposted)
- crits needed, its for a competition
- Letters From The Wrong Side Of Hell
- Of Gravestones and Gravity - New Song
- The reign of darkness(rewrote it with a friend, you can say if you hate it:P)
- Scarolina: IN PROGRESS
- Lemon Meringue Pie
- Dead November [Poem]
- Victory, new Song Pleez Crit!
- Another Poem About Roses
- Tragedies of Yesterday
- A Song Of False Pretenses
- Something I wrote...(currently unnamed) *please critique*
- Blood Red Silence
- a symphony of whisky and bad intentions - crit.
- Oh My God! Not another crappy Moz song... yes, yes it is (unfortunately)...crit away!
- (unnamed lyrics)
- feel like ?
- neeeds tiiitle!
- Snow Angels
- 3 songs:please rate 4 me
- Whisteling Blues
- Of dances and fae
- spanked at dawn (tear it up for me)
- sleep away, for you, for me, for everyone
- no name yet - have a look
- newby writer
- "My Shadow Walks in Paranoia"
- Please rate!
- What do you think
- We're off to Never-never Land!!
- Unbreakable/Stainless
- Work
- Saddened not Surrendered
- clandestine whore
- my psychobilly song (untittled)
- The Suicide King Tonight is Wild
- And Then They Will Disappear
- masked
- Tips on writing guitar parts for a song
- How Many Songs Do You Write Per Week?
- 1st real song Ive writen in awhile -battles cant be won
- Pleaze RATE this song
- bloodmourner
- just flex-ing
- rat(p)e me
- help
- There Goes My Head
- Musings
- An End To These Thoughts
- Kings With Meat Cleavers
- sonnet poem please crit
- ~Mortal Coil~
- dunno bout this song but ill post it anyway.
- pleesz rate4me:DREAMS
- Something I Won't Do
- New,Start?
- Two plus Two (My first song please crit)
- Dim Light, Bright Shine (Critiques = Requested)
- Shattered Glass
- My Emo Queer Line
- Step Into the Sun
- "Friend"
- string of blood--quick poem idea
- A Love Forever More
- A Love Forever More
- "I Heard a Rumor..."
- Grey and Love don't mix (Crit for Crit)
- morning dew
- Attn: SD
- "Bitterness Consumes Fear"
- Bloodburner
- Why?
- help me/ or crush me
- To Reduce the Risk of Injury
- More musings
- Masked Perversion
- In Safe Hands (repost of recent song)
- "Last Time"
- nothing left to feel.
- Future Emperor of the World
- Requiem -Rock/Metal Song - Please Crit!
- safety
- "I Think I'm Developing Issues"...plz crit.
- "I Think I'm Developing Issues"...plz crit.
- My Apathy
- crit all you like.
- Elixir with midi file
- An Army Of 2
- Hangout/Cop Out
- Along the Lines
- Candelabrum (Recording Available)
- Senseless Travel
- Well, I'm new here...
- Dawn of the Fallen (please crit!)
- "Don't know why" critisize please
- Crit : A Few Minutes More
- [Confusion in Purest Form: The Wishing Hole, Vol. One]
- Secrets Under Sunlight
- "creature of deception"
- "the individualist"
- The Arsonist
- Seven Years Bad Luck, Crit I crit back
- untitled and unsure
- dupester
- needs critq as soon as possible!!!
- REALITY (crit the hell out of it)
- "What it is to Loose" Please crit???
- all to mindy.
- Wish Me Luck
- The Latest Season
- autumn rain (crit it i'll crit urs)
- Gardnerville Gangsta'
- asking me a trivial question ( needs work a little cliche<<help would be great)
- without you (crit for a crti)
- seriously, dont crit this
- The Grinner (critisize please)
- good times come bad times flow first song ever
- time flies
- high skool punk band one of our first songs wat do u think
- Sky
- Ok, sorry kids, but it's Mozza time again
- What do you think of Metallica's lyrics
- moded song
- Heartbreaker of the Drunk
- miss you my sweet, miss you my girl
- Alwasy Shy - 10 minute epic
- just go
- anyone writing any raps in here??
- Gag
- Diary of a serial killer...crit for a crit
- 1,000 Times seriously need a crit
- Song to be crit
- please crit my first song ever!
- The Wedding Cake (crits appreciated)
- Suede Shoes Blues
- When
- Forest of Stone (crit 4 crit)
- Once Lasts Forever (please crit)
- a new piece from SLOTH!!!
- !!!...READ...False Emotions From a Box!!!
- Born To Raise Hell (Thrash Metal band) crit please
- On Fire, my first song (please crit)
- "Pages" Please crit this one guys??
- "My Friend" Please crit!?!?!
- Give me lyrics, and I'll write music for them.
- Right To Speak
- Battle of the Bands 2005
- jings, crivvens, help ma boab - please crit
- Wrong is nothing (Crit for a crit)
- The Octagon Table
- Valentines Day Alone
- curbanimals, please crit
- Tired Man (crit for crit)
- Souvenir
- need help with lyrics
- hellbound
- people are so selfish (crit and ill crit you)
- Tragedy
- Shallow (Foolish)
- "Dejected"
- Breathe Myself To Sleep (rev 2- please?)
- Judgemental Posession
- My Head (crit the hell outta it)
- Pardon my French....
- Straightjackets
- first song ive ever wrorte
- extracts.
- constructive critisism
- baby killers
- Small Towns : Crit mine and I'll Crit yours
- Top S&L Members
- Tear Catcher (a spear of the moment thing.)
- help
- Suicide -- first song :\ plz crit
- Buried and Breathing
- Between the lines of a will
- untitled
- Look at me when I was you, love you
- Striving For Silence Please Crit
- Why Am I Still Weeping (New Version, PLEASE CRIT!)
- new song/poem
- On The Edge (tentitive title)
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