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- A Long Night (unfinished)
- Hopeless Dreamer
- Grudge (Crit for Crit)
- stuck in the middle(between life and death) with audio
- Smoking Kills
- I dont feel well
- Please crit my rewrite
- Does one need to born a singer?
- Vocals Question
- Untitled song/poem
- Any Second
- You know what would be good
- I Need a Singer
- Drugs are bad mmk?
- Between Today and Tomorrow crit4crit
- silent killer
- Opportunity
- Blitzkreig
- new songs would like some feedback please.
- Help Me Please!
- Colors
- Moonlight
- The Lie of Control
- The Ginger Vegaterian!
- Could someone write a song for my band?
- The Love Parade (Crit. for Crit.)
- Colors Of A Heartbreak
- Like You (Can't Believe I Ever Loved Someone)
- - Last Night on the Pacific Rim -
- The Drive
- Drown
- help with jazz
- If you've got writers block...
- Vocal Range
- where did my life go(with audio)
- Central Station Song/Central Station is for Lovers
- The Notebook
- misstep (please crit)
- Work in progress...
- One step
- Aspiring Songwriter
- whats the least i need to know?
- just pissed at someone...
- Parable of the Lost Son
- A distant summer lover
- Eh crit for crit...wrote this today about a chick at work.
- My first song in about 6 months...."driving"
- Gomer
- Effigy
- Smoke Trails Home ( it could probably use some work)
- Lyrics without music? Isn't that a poem?
- Prosody. How often do you use Prosody and when?
- Celebration of upbeat & weird songs
- Apocalypse
- Write lyrics? Need music?
- Days of yore
- My Second Song-"Elle"
- The littlest sparrow
- Everybody Gets Their Shot
- 616
- Adults in Production
- help with balancing guitar and singing.
- untitled, crit4crit
- new song- untitled
- We Need A New Humankind/World War III
- Just another Poem PLease Read
- First song I've written.
- experimental song, please have a read
- help with space images
- Here we go
- The Unnatural Lust
- Muse
- Song - Someone's Got it Worse
- NEBULA- new song- please critique
- crit if you want, I just feel like getting this out there
- help with writting guitar riff for song.
- Improving my voice.
- Swbat
- first song for a new "BAND"
- The Lighthouse
- The winged regardless
- Believe Me
- no name yet but i still need help
- one more
- 20$ disaster
- The Poet
- Some mo lyrics.
- The Storm Hasn't Taken Us
- An Opium For The Masses - A poem? Maybe a song.
- Sticks and Stones may break bones, But words play hell with feelings.
- I wish heaven was hell
- We Won't Need Much More
- Need some feed back on this lyric please
- Alter Ego
- First timer - 'Staple'
- Song I wrote a while back...
- "We'll Leave This Untitled To Preserve Your Dignity"
- The Metro Line
- Help with a song title. PLEASE HELP.
- Girl Friday
- The Real Me
- Safety Pin Savior
- Feel Better "crit for crit"
- Red Carpet Queen
- Tuesday Chokes On My Heart
- mics
- a brick full of love
- skulls and bones (crit4crit)
- Just A Short Little Poem
- death and pain
- The Lead Dancer
- Touch By An Angel
- Backdrop
- ?Question Mark?
- ramones
- Liar, Liar
- albert, oh albert
- Worst Lyrics
- "Cry Hero"
- The Fastest Line Isnt Always The Express Line - My First Song/Poem
- Off the top of my head
- Rain Down On Me
- my love
- "White Lies"
- I Wish
- Wild Bill Hickok
- A Dream Come True
- "The Preacher"
- Misplaced Intentions
- The Message
- Nice Is Kids Kicking Ice
- Serein
- My Voice
- Unnatural Completion Isn't Completion
- the one
- No title
- Vaults and arches; A gargoyles demise.
- A catch twenty too far
- Undine
- Melbourne Winter Prowl
- Gallant
- Hotel Europe
- Salute: Red, White and Grey
- Nine Horses And A Season In Hell
- Emo Hate Club
- Dear John
- sunset sunrise
- 'The haunts and questions that surround my death'
- Back to hell
- Beginning to end
- In Death, I Found Life Was Only A Beginning
- Hiding Beneath Masks and Bookshelf Sundials
- Sixth Day Spoils
- Guns at Midnight
- C.A: Damage Report
- what god meant to say
- Everyone dressed in blue
- With enough sweat and blood I can forget that I exist
- The Poor Kids With Guns
- writing topics
- Blues song entitled "See ya baby"
- Blackened Wings
- Don't Come Knocking on My Door
- Quick Critique Needed
- Without You
- New song...
- Floorboard Composition
- Letter to Elizabeth
- bleed the truth
- The Brightest Light Burnt Out Today
- solitude sings a melody
- Jacksonville
- Paint the Sky
- Forgotten Memories
- Love On The Wind
- i've been working on this forever
- Letting Go Would Lead To Treason
- recent events
- pacifist march- will match crit, post a link
- pacifist march- will match crit, post a link
- 'i love you'[soft rock]
- "Gone Fishin"
- Something I Wrote
- Aphasia
- Onus Of Proof
- Unsure
- Buried Is Your Truth
- "How Am I Not Myself?"
- gone
- It's only so charming
- Watching You
- From Dust to Mortal Breath
- Virtual Hell
- Revelation (previously untitled)
- Scenes From A French Restaurant- new song- please critique
- Waltz- new song- please critique
- new song- please critique- quiet things....
- whats wrong with america?
- You'll Come Back To Me
- Untitled (not through) Crit please
- [untitled]
- Swallow
- "The Heart and the Picket Line"
- Forever-Darkening Hold
- Rewards "CRIT FOR CRIT"
- The Weight of the World...
- new song
- "c."
- so my daughter wrote this....
- Endings
- Swingsets and Ignorant Bliss
- Another War song...
- Polished and Admonished
- Two new songs - Extreme metal
- Die welt ist eine scheibe
- Letting Go of the Struggle (greatly revised)
- "Spending The Penny You Stole Of All Shine"
- Currently untitled
- Clear Skies and White Lies *crit for crit*
- Variable
- I'm Changing
- Orange Tangerine
- Blind Me
- It's a poem(or really short song, w/e)!! By me!!!
- Tell Me What You Think
- roses and oceans
- New York City Lights
- The Battle Has Begun; But The War Draws To A Close
- Song Of The Month - April
- ...no idea...keine idee
- A Daytrip in the Estate.
- Kiniptions
- "In cold of autumn twilight"
- Stripped of Myself
- Untitled For You
- "About you."
- Song
- The itching of the emptines
- Lost (I know the titles boring...)
- How Cruel Can Some People Be?
- check these songs out
- A request...
- What I Was Thinking
- Paintbrushes and Paperthin Lines
- blood
- Tree.
- "Sound Asleep" (Has music recorded)
- 'Going Through'
- Siren
- Ecstacy Avenue
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