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- Help me yo. Crit for Crit
- "Deft" please crit for crit.
- Drive
- This Is Goodbye
- Im The Dreamer, Your The Believer
- Name me one other point of view and the dictionary doesn’t count
- Bind Them with a Noose - Crit for a crit
- "Midnight Serenade" Crit for Crit
- ...Stab Someone That Cares (Crit 4 Crit- just leave a link)
- 'Little Sorry'
- yo dudes im at it again (chapbookake)
- No title.
- Blue... (crit for crit, yo.)
- "If this tongue was any sharper, you'd be bleeding all over."
- 'dripping like plastic' - crit for crit (link me)
- Form. (Crit for a crit, just post a link.)
- Against Me! related (critique por favor?)
- Beautiful Nightmares (first song, take it easy)
- Realization
- Me As The Weapon C4C
- Burn (first song/work in progress)
- - 1547 T.o.d. –
- Level Ground, lyrics that are my emotion.
- Saliva Droplet
- Mob Justice
- My first attempt at a different genre. "Prize" Crit For Crit!
- any pro singers help me really quickly!
- Powerless (v short)
- Poem for Anatomy
- "Underground" My First Post
- Music or Lyrics?
- Does this allegory/metaphor work/make sense?
- Fűck the scene
- of fire... be harsh
- Microphones/cables/amp
- A New Song Wrote..
- The Friday after Ash Wednesday
- Nails and Chalkboards
- Until I Met You
- First thing i've written in ages.
- Please help me!
- Poem, or a jumble of ideas. You tell me!
- No verse or chorus
- doesn't have a title..
- horizon
- Malleable
- dont know if this belongs here.....
- Days
- help writing punk?
- I dunno a title, but I need help
- Check it out, editied
- Pessimistic Anthems.
- With a magazine of one million emotions…
- In the Flesh (suggestions for other titles?)
- Unspoken Parallel
- new song written last night..
- Not Yet
- A Poem For You(critique please)
- Unititled #1
- bill-a-marketing
- good songs
- Porcelin Skin
- Shed the moonlight [acoustic, pop song]
- The anticlimax
- My First Song
- You Know It's Damn Lucky I Can't See Outside the Photograph Edge.
- controversial
- ive got a thing about recycling you
- The Female Blade And The Heart Artistry
- Three Years Back- Havnt wrote anything in ages
- I am God
- Breaking Away(first song)
- "To Live Out This Lie Between The Starcross'd and The Carefree"
- The Madness Of Glory Finn
- Gates of Ectasy
- Twisting the satire that you prevail into something you react to in the way I hope...
- Room of Fantasies
- End of Ecstasy
- A Year In The Life...
- Haikus
- Haikus: Winter
- You Can't Make Love....You've Got To Find It
- "Let Me Show You a Magic Trick"
- the illegitimate daughter of nobodies
- Child Punk Star/Facepaint
- Astronomy (another song/poem)
- Wanna sing
- Cynic Freak. Please crit my first post!
- Mating Season
- Post Poetry here! (Sonnets, Haikus, etc..)
- "Me or you?" or "Kill Me" crit for crit. link needed
- Sun Kisses
- Bringing me across something stupid
- Fleeing From The World of Martyrdom
- new song: " Before time slips away "
- The Journey
- Drama (poem) crit for crit. I'm that kind of man.
- Dog (Third Song)
- I'll Be Getting Out of Here (First Song)
- some crit and a bit of help
- My stray heart
- "Caution" -- I'm back with a new one
- Nothing Is Right
- Fanatic
- Truth Is A Ghost
- fading dream
- Live This Lie
- I can see now why Oxford is too distant for you
- Alkaline trio
- My Plague
- Mudvayne
- watching!
- Out of a Cannon
- The March
- We'll Just Smoke Away Our Outcasts
- i cant songwrite
- Years of Hate
- rate my new song please!!!
- an untitled poem i started to write
- Obesity awaits
- writing lyrics
- Crit for Crit if your Crit isn't Sh*t
- No.
- Here's a drummer's shot at lyrics
- Jessica
- "Buried Cable."
- The Shivers/Letter from Carolina
- visions blurry
- Wrecked Again
- "Music of Monotony?" Crits appreciated full or partial.
- Standing Beneath an Arch, I am the Architect
- Work in Progress- Crit for crit.
- The Art of Becoming Lifeless CRIT4CRIT
- [He's got nothing on me]
- the dog song
- Regret
- Lost And Blind
- looking for singer north shore mass
- A Day in the Life of an Adolescent
- one stanza to "What Lurks in the Shadows"
- The Faces of Dead vs. Me Overload
- New Song
- Battleaxes and Fallen bridges (leave some skin for me to chew)
- First song ever be gentle
- A Poet, A Thief and More
- Stram And Trees.
- all alone
- We Can always say Goodbye
- S hit Song
- A cup of silence...
- Talking In the Middle of Class
- Morphine Room/937 Milligrams
- Through the universe and far away
- Blades of Grass
- Keep smiling sweetie
- Untitled (As yet)
- broken fires
- The Clock Tells Me There's Nothing Left
- dark circles
- Nothing Ever Changes
- faces in the grass--- its been a while
- running backwards
- Sky's Spectrum-full or partial crits would be awesome.
- Dont take that chance
- Corner - First song, crit plz!
- Cherry Blossom
- Empty feelings with heartful intentions. "A poem" crit for crit
- Make it Black- Crit4Crit
- "Song For The Ether"
- Placebo
- newbie help!1
- untitled as of yet
- Life Awaits
- whatev
- Wonderland bleached to the sound-crit4crit
- The Ranks of the Unknown
- Help Me
- The Unbearable . . .
- I've Really Gotta Hand It to You
- Today (Paper Manicures)
- Emotion in motion
- "Be My Cure To Nostalgia, You Enamorer, This Is My Wish" Poem
- The Prophet
- tales of the unfortunate
- We Are Only Edits (Crit4Crit)
- Here's a question...
- New song need help!!!
- When I Fall *crit4crit*
- Lullaby
- The Doll Collector
- Walking Contradiction (Crit4Crit)
- Walking Contradiction (Crit4Crit)
- The Concept Album
- What do you think?
- The Stage
- Patterns of Light
- it doesn't have to make sense
- Animals
- "Your Title 2" Poem
- Love the Air, Hate the Smoke
- Crepuscules And Evenings
- [Highschool] Reunion
- What do you think about my Music?
- My first song: Notice Me
- Murder in the words **crit4crit**
- Period Of Existence
- just somethin ive been workin on..
- Between Today and Tomorrow crit plz!!!
- Disclaimer (Crit4Crit)
- Bump in the Road
- No More Gold
- Unfinished Work
- Intermission
- I'd like to try something new
- When I Fall (Reworked Version!)
- New song, no title, plz check out and suggest.
- DR- song of mine- please critique
- rhyming bad? song writing?
- Glory is Boring
- The Evilness I Am
- Let Him Fall
- And I Ran Through A Field Of Scissors
- Hey, Just a quick question
- the "one word each" song
- Concept Album: Time to Change
- My first song attempt (crosses fingers and hopes not to screw up to bad)
- Commander Keen
- Calligraphy and punches
- Night Is Blissful Hitting Us (The sort of sequel to Crepuscules and Evenings)
- "In Absence Of"
- "The Psychedelic Man"
- Prodigal Prodigy (crit 4 crit, just leave a link)
- Scree
- Land of Hope- Crit for crit.
- first one and I wrote it drunk... be kind, ignore it if you hate emo style
- |[There][I][Said][It][...][I][Meant][It]|
- This IS NOT a new lyric game fing...
- you're not here
- Bridge Jumping For Beginners
- Rain Drops In Slow Motion
- Left On a Epitaph
- 04/06
- free verse
- Drama writing.
- Please Worship Elsewhere
- Macbeth
- Some songs I have written
- Her Older Brothers Girlfiend Is her Friend LOL
- Average At Best...
- A Long Night (unfinished)
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