PDA

View Full Version : Songwriting & Lyrics

Pages : 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 [31] 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44
  1. Help me yo. Crit for Crit
  2. "Deft" please crit for crit.
  3. Drive
  4. This Is Goodbye
  5. Im The Dreamer, Your The Believer
  6. Name me one other point of view and the dictionary doesn’t count
  7. Bind Them with a Noose - Crit for a crit
  8. "Midnight Serenade" Crit for Crit
  9. ...Stab Someone That Cares (Crit 4 Crit- just leave a link)
  10. 'Little Sorry'
  11. yo dudes im at it again (chapbookake)
  12. No title.
  13. Blue... (crit for crit, yo.)
  14. "If this tongue was any sharper, you'd be bleeding all over."
  15. 'dripping like plastic' - crit for crit (link me)
  16. Form. (Crit for a crit, just post a link.)
  17. Against Me! related (critique por favor?)
  18. Beautiful Nightmares (first song, take it easy)
  19. Realization
  20. Me As The Weapon C4C
  21. Burn (first song/work in progress)
  22. - 1547 T.o.d. –
  23. Level Ground, lyrics that are my emotion.
  24. Saliva Droplet
  25. Mob Justice
  26. My first attempt at a different genre. "Prize" Crit For Crit!
  27. any pro singers help me really quickly!
  28. Powerless (v short)
  29. Poem for Anatomy
  30. "Underground" My First Post
  31. Music or Lyrics?
  32. Does this allegory/metaphor work/make sense?
  33. Fűck the scene
  34. of fire... be harsh
  35. Microphones/cables/amp
  36. A New Song Wrote..
  37. The Friday after Ash Wednesday
  38. Nails and Chalkboards
  39. Until I Met You
  40. First thing i've written in ages.
  41. Please help me!
  42. Poem, or a jumble of ideas. You tell me!
  43. No verse or chorus
  44. doesn't have a title..
  45. horizon
  46. Malleable
  47. dont know if this belongs here.....
  48. Days
  49. help writing punk?
  50. I dunno a title, but I need help
  51. Check it out, editied
  52. Pessimistic Anthems.
  53. With a magazine of one million emotions…
  54. In the Flesh (suggestions for other titles?)
  55. Unspoken Parallel
  56. new song written last night..
  57. Not Yet
  58. A Poem For You(critique please)
  59. Unititled #1
  60. bill-a-marketing
  61. good songs
  62. Porcelin Skin
  63. Shed the moonlight [acoustic, pop song]
  64. The anticlimax
  65. My First Song
  66. You Know It's Damn Lucky I Can't See Outside the Photograph Edge.
  67. controversial
  68. ive got a thing about recycling you
  69. The Female Blade And The Heart Artistry
  70. Three Years Back- Havnt wrote anything in ages
  71. I am God
  72. Breaking Away(first song)
  73. "To Live Out This Lie Between The Starcross'd and The Carefree"
  74. The Madness Of Glory Finn
  75. Gates of Ectasy
  76. Twisting the satire that you prevail into something you react to in the way I hope...
  77. Room of Fantasies
  78. End of Ecstasy
  79. A Year In The Life...
  80. Haikus
  81. Haikus: Winter
  82. You Can't Make Love....You've Got To Find It
  83. "Let Me Show You a Magic Trick"
  84. the illegitimate daughter of nobodies
  85. Child Punk Star/Facepaint
  86. Astronomy (another song/poem)
  87. Wanna sing
  88. Cynic Freak. Please crit my first post!
  89. Mating Season
  90. Post Poetry here! (Sonnets, Haikus, etc..)
  91. "Me or you?" or "Kill Me" crit for crit. link needed
  92. Sun Kisses
  93. Bringing me across something stupid
  94. Fleeing From The World of Martyrdom
  95. new song: " Before time slips away "
  96. The Journey
  97. Drama (poem) crit for crit. I'm that kind of man.
  98. Dog (Third Song)
  99. I'll Be Getting Out of Here (First Song)
  100. some crit and a bit of help
  101. My stray heart
  102. "Caution" -- I'm back with a new one
  103. Nothing Is Right
  104. Fanatic
  105. Truth Is A Ghost
  106. fading dream
  107. Live This Lie
  108. I can see now why Oxford is too distant for you
  109. Alkaline trio
  110. My Plague
  111. Mudvayne
  112. watching!
  113. Out of a Cannon
  114. The March
  115. We'll Just Smoke Away Our Outcasts
  116. i cant songwrite
  117. Years of Hate
  118. rate my new song please!!!
  119. an untitled poem i started to write
  120. Obesity awaits
  121. writing lyrics
  122. Crit for Crit if your Crit isn't Sh*t
  123. No.
  124. Here's a drummer's shot at lyrics
  125. Jessica
  126. "Buried Cable."
  127. The Shivers/Letter from Carolina
  128. visions blurry
  129. Wrecked Again
  130. "Music of Monotony?" Crits appreciated full or partial.
  131. Standing Beneath an Arch, I am the Architect
  132. Work in Progress- Crit for crit.
  133. The Art of Becoming Lifeless CRIT4CRIT
  134. [He's got nothing on me]
  135. the dog song
  136. Regret
  137. Lost And Blind
  138. looking for singer north shore mass
  139. A Day in the Life of an Adolescent
  140. one stanza to "What Lurks in the Shadows"
  141. The Faces of Dead vs. Me Overload
  142. New Song
  143. Battleaxes and Fallen bridges (leave some skin for me to chew)
  144. First song ever be gentle
  145. A Poet, A Thief and More
  146. Stram And Trees.
  147. all alone
  148. We Can always say Goodbye
  149. S hit Song
  150. A cup of silence...
  151. Talking In the Middle of Class
  152. Morphine Room/937 Milligrams
  153. Through the universe and far away
  154. Blades of Grass
  155. Keep smiling sweetie
  156. Untitled (As yet)
  157. broken fires
  158. The Clock Tells Me There's Nothing Left
  159. dark circles
  160. Nothing Ever Changes
  161. faces in the grass--- its been a while
  162. running backwards
  163. Sky's Spectrum-full or partial crits would be awesome.
  164. Dont take that chance
  165. Corner - First song, crit plz!
  166. Cherry Blossom
  167. Empty feelings with heartful intentions. "A poem" crit for crit
  168. Make it Black- Crit4Crit
  169. "Song For The Ether"
  170. Placebo
  171. newbie help!1
  172. untitled as of yet
  173. Life Awaits
  174. whatev
  175. Wonderland bleached to the sound-crit4crit
  176. The Ranks of the Unknown
  177. Help Me
  178. The Unbearable . . .
  179. I've Really Gotta Hand It to You
  180. Today (Paper Manicures)
  181. Emotion in motion
  182. "Be My Cure To Nostalgia, You Enamorer, This Is My Wish" Poem
  183. The Prophet
  184. tales of the unfortunate
  185. We Are Only Edits (Crit4Crit)
  186. Here's a question...
  187. New song need help!!!
  188. When I Fall *crit4crit*
  189. Lullaby
  190. The Doll Collector
  191. Walking Contradiction (Crit4Crit)
  192. Walking Contradiction (Crit4Crit)
  193. The Concept Album
  194. What do you think?
  195. The Stage
  196. Patterns of Light
  197. it doesn't have to make sense
  198. Animals
  199. "Your Title 2" Poem
  200. Love the Air, Hate the Smoke
  201. Crepuscules And Evenings
  202. [Highschool] Reunion
  203. What do you think about my Music?
  204. My first song: Notice Me
  205. Murder in the words **crit4crit**
  206. Period Of Existence
  207. just somethin ive been workin on..
  208. Between Today and Tomorrow crit plz!!!
  209. Disclaimer (Crit4Crit)
  210. Bump in the Road
  211. No More Gold
  212. Unfinished Work
  213. Intermission
  214. I'd like to try something new
  215. When I Fall (Reworked Version!)
  216. New song, no title, plz check out and suggest.
  217. DR- song of mine- please critique
  218. rhyming bad? song writing?
  219. Glory is Boring
  220. The Evilness I Am
  221. Let Him Fall
  222. And I Ran Through A Field Of Scissors
  223. Hey, Just a quick question
  224. the "one word each" song
  225. Concept Album: Time to Change
  226. My first song attempt (crosses fingers and hopes not to screw up to bad)
  227. Commander Keen
  228. Calligraphy and punches
  229. Night Is Blissful Hitting Us (The sort of sequel to Crepuscules and Evenings)
  230. "In Absence Of"
  231. "The Psychedelic Man"
  232. Prodigal Prodigy (crit 4 crit, just leave a link)
  233. Scree
  234. Land of Hope- Crit for crit.
  235. first one and I wrote it drunk... be kind, ignore it if you hate emo style
  236. |[There][I][Said][It][...][I][Meant][It]|
  237. This IS NOT a new lyric game fing...
  238. you're not here
  239. Bridge Jumping For Beginners
  240. Rain Drops In Slow Motion
  241. Left On a Epitaph
  242. 04/06
  243. free verse
  244. Drama writing.
  245. Please Worship Elsewhere
  246. Macbeth
  247. Some songs I have written
  248. Her Older Brothers Girlfiend Is her Friend LOL
  249. Average At Best...
  250. A Long Night (unfinished)