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- "Evidence of A Broken Heart".
- New guy some song
- One Gun Salute
- Adrifting
- My Own Political Punk Lyrics
- Boy with Lyre Forms Liaison
- "Europe: For Whores In Training"
- epic affliction
- Lyrics(comments are appreciated)
- Though
- Prozac nation
- A Match And A Pear
- Speechless (The Stars Fall To End Our Lives)
- Faculties Of My Mind
- jan 17/06 wrote it on a real shi**y day.
- Holy war...
- A Sonnet
- New [He's someones son]
- Regnant scars~~
- Dicta Of The Weak-Minded
- I'm a bassist trying to write lyrics
- Finally... A Chance To Be In The Spotlight
- Thus Passes the Glory of the World
- Zippo Friends
- Nothing to say?
- New lyrics (need title)
- Poem that I wrote one night
- Mystery
- Wish I was Here
- Untitled(your the dreamer im the believer?) Crits please!?!?
- The Crux of Aversion(crit for crit)
- Random Experiment
- "...And The Beast She Layed Within"
- 1st song I wrote
- Should I? (Unedited, needs critique)
- Me vs. Me (With recording)
- Disabling Inebriation
- Lyric Finder Thread
- Cared
- Overflows a River
- Marylou Is Manic
- Lacerated Nirvana/The King Of Nirvana
- Untitled for the time being (I swear I will match your crit)
- My ultra cheesy rock n roll song.
- You look it up
- rember your goodbyes (PLZ CRIT)
- To Reduce Serious Injury
- Critique would be appreciated
- how should i sing
- Cataclysmic Liquor, Broken Bottles, Ripped Rubber And Drunken Ice
- No More
- another one..........
- "About to break.....Just Breathe"
- Even Angels Love To Ride
- I feel like such a noob posting this...
- Need a Lyricist
- Blankets of bullets
- I`s got my eye socket
- The Waiting Room
- Hateful bitch in a ditch
- Tell It To Me
- First time I have written anything... Warmth
- 4.The Water, With Rust in Reply.4
- White Rose Pedals
- The Sky Holds Yourself
- Mongo
- Writer Of Fire
- wrote in like 5 mins
- Eostre crit for a crit
- Morphine Room
- Nashvilles Not My Home
- Worth a shot....
- Final Notes... Please Save the Others
- Tell Me
- Sequence : Critque please.
- one world, one nation
- Leaving All That's Known (need some opinions)
- Wreath
- nothing left...
- Car Crash
- Madness (need feedback)
- "The Wall Expierience"
- Get over yourself- not a depressing song
- Help
- Is my first song good? Please help me!
- Silenced Light
- [Falling back in love]
- Whether willing or not; permanent or temporary
- Pseudo Intelligence (not a song)
- Marriage(Who needs it)
- there aint no use
- One Last Dance
- Simply Seductive
- Please Crit My song, My First Attempt
- I Need Help With My Song, It Needs Better Flow
- lyric critique plz? somewhat new to this
- six fists hit harder than one(crit for crit)
- All About Me
- "Composure is Nothing More Than A Steady Hand At the End of A Gun These Days"
- What do you think of this
- this is my first song. tell me what your guys think.
- Over-Sensitivity, Thy Name Is Detective
- Reinventing Tom Gabel
- one world, one nation (v2)
- Lyric Writing Help
- It’s All Over
- Promise me
- Cliche Culture
- untitled (needs one ) crit plz
- Peroxide The Colorful Suicide, For Our Puritanical Brethren
- Did I Cath Your Attention?
- Our Collective Reverie
- Hop-Frog
- My work in progress
- Please critique and/or comment!
- Madness (2nd draft, changing title)
- Pseudo Intelligence (actually a song)
- The Incident of Glory Finn
- Comfortably Lost
- Peroxide The Colorful Homicide For Our Puritanical Brethren (Pt. II)
- Fair Weather
- Stagnant (Poem)
- I Took a Little Walk
- im sort of new here...please tell me what you think
- Kings Fall (working title)
- 19something
- "Refuge"
- Away
- The Sound (Please Crit)
- Raptors Wrapped In Rapture
- Tell me
- Caught Her Laughing
- No Future
- 4 Ur reViewing Pleasure or Disgust
- Prelude To Disaster
- title has yet to be......please Crit
- The Artist's Signature
- Jane Doe
- Can't Escape
- Archaic Rhetoric That Paints Temple Walls and Funeral Pyres Up On A Mountain
- Abandoned For the Better
- And the money burns Pls check
- "Waves"
- Unterrestrial Differential- a poem...
- Need Some Help... - Anyone... - Please?
- collection
- Short Song/Poem (My First!)
- Lookin' for a bit of constructive crit....
- Vortex of Love
- the crying clock (song)
- Lamb And The Lion
- Lies Paralyze
- Waking Up
- Never Say Goodbye (crit 4 crit)
- song in need of advice
- Metaphors
- New song: "SubtleDagger"
- Long Time No Post (Not a Song/Poem)
- Country Gypsy
- Ripped jeans // Critque
- Cure My Hands
- Death Awaits Me
- Po' Man Blues (crtique plz)
- wishing that you're somewhere else right now
- first shot at a song
- Absolutely Absolute
- Break Neck Speed
- First song....Breaking Point
- my first song lyrics
- Polished song, sort of.
- Czechoslovakian Minutemen
- Massacres Mural
- So Dark, So Cold(Poem)
- The Air in Which We Search For A Deeper Meaning
- Nightmare Come True
- When I Saw You
- Unknown
- Rehab Tastes Bad
- Another song that need critiquing
- Your the sleeper, your the dreamer, mr blue, mr believer
- 4 Songs
- Bottled Up Storm
- Thoughtless
- View From The Top
- The golden tribute
- Only the Refined Remain Intact
- Help me!
- Expressionless (poem)
- Default
- Alone In The Dark (crit away)
- I thought i saw a ghost today
- First happy piece I've ever written, help :(
- Chrysalis
- Tbh
- Vengeance is Finally Yours... [Collide]
- anyone know this song?
- The Buried And The Forgotten
- I don't want to (new lyrics crit plz )
- The Mexican Nursery Rythm
- Scarred and scared
- Jasmine
- Vocals?
- Writing this song, ya know?
- Neverland
- Living Room Halos
- Ode to Billy Joe
- "She", helpful critiques please
- Black Teared Hope
- Fading Pictures in Gilded Frames
- Revengeance
- Aspirin Aspirations For A Cracked Soul
- Blind Me
- garden
- Old Mill Dam
- Tempus Fugit
- New song by me
- Eighteen Forever
- Letters
- Never-Lasting Love (working title)
- As The Clock Runs Parallel
- Poem: When the Rain Falls
- When I sleep
- "Velvet"
- On This Notepad....
- Notes of a Contemporary
- Spider (mp3 recording of the piece inside)
- "Questions" (please give input, thanks!)
- System of Dave
- Cry Like You Mean It
- Untitled Song
- Something a little different
- you're the hughes to my plath
- Untitled Song
- Dreaming of Paradise
- Wearing the crown as a necklace ....
- Valentine (audio included)
- You'd Think That Titles Come Easy
- get this?
- before i share?
- "Beautiful To Me".
- Broadening my Vocab (question ITT)
- A Prince's Lament
- Fade Off...
- Goodbye Goodbye Goodbye
- Cave In
- Navy Blue, Turquoise and Sea Green
- Arachnid
- Waves Of Delta (2)
- I Wish We Were c4c
- last lullaby's
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