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  1. Abandoned and Forgotten
  2. New idea for lyric game thing, any mods, check this out, tell me what you reckon
  3. Dancing with the Devil
  4. Fate Set In Stone
  5. Just lost inspiration
  6. Responsibility
  7. Like rain drops on window sills
  8. The Ropes That Bind Us; The Walls That Set The Boundaries
  9. I'll Wait (please crit)
  10. Power Struggle
  11. Nearly an Hour (Crit to be crit)
  12. Strong Stench Of Night, In An Urbanized Battlefield
  13. -last will-
  14. Gazers
  15. Liquid Suicide
  16. the outsider
  17. Hey! (song title)
  18. Girl (Beatles lawsuit)
  19. your breath is taken
  20. I'm trying new writing styles. I'll crit for crit.
  21. New Years Day- 3rd song in prog set
  22. Phantom
  23. "paper in-house"
  24. A Perfect Picture
  25. Cereal Without Milk
  26. Its thats bad....please crit
  27. Two Empty Bottles
  28. Sung Softly
  29. So good in blue
  30. Work in progress
  31. toy soldiers (re-post)
  32. Seconds
  33. Sorry... >crit for crit<
  34. Song
  35. My New Song, "Thrown Around".
  36. "Cupid: The Crook"
  37. Here I Stand
  38. Obit Resolution #11
  39. help
  40. help
  41. Black and White
  42. Feeling this Regret
  43. Off Scot-Free
  44. Hideously Vicious Elegance
  45. rock oprea writting tips?
  46. Cry Out, Holy Recollection
  47. The Veteran
  48. Sorry repost
  49. First lyrics posted on here.
  50. Lies in You.
  51. need ideas for a title, crits anyone?
  52. Something of a Triumph (crit-4-crit)
  53. Song
  54. Pinpricks
  55. "My Wife, The Arsonist"
  56. Any Tips on screamer?
  57. please critique
  58. "Papercut"
  59. 1Andsoitbegins1
  60. Pious Atheist
  61. need some kind crit.
  62. Compliment
  63. Suspended
  64. "go snow"
  65. Breakthrough
  66. For my father. Title, anyone? 2nd revision.
  67. Vin Diesel
  68. The Longest Day
  69. Please crit my first song
  70. Simply A Humanoid
  71. A new song by Adrian-Tyler Jenkins
  72. a couple jingles. tell me what you think.
  73. Our Religion (Crit for Crit)
  74. Sponge bath
  75. metaphor
  76. another day, another song
  77. Trevor
  78. Lost
  79. crit4crit please
  80. giving up me
  81. "...is the only reason to live"
  82. something i wrote some time ago (Eternal sunset)
  83. It could be our last moment together
  84. please crit ''the past''
  85. my first song, please crit
  86. 1st draft 'Pass the bong' c4c
  87. The CLock Is Ticking crit-4-crit
  88. hey please write some thing about this: Giving Up Me
  89. Oh The Crying Beauty.....
  90. I'd Settle for Fire and Brimstone
  91. SOng about a girl
  92. go on! i can take it!
  93. Ode To a Cowboy - Please Crit!
  94. Stay Spring...Please
  95. Love Failure please tell me what you think
  96. So i made this poem........(crit please)
  97. Atomic Wings
  98. unfinished song...tell me what you think
  99. My bitter heart's resentment and the games you play
  100. Another Epigram
  101. Wide Awake At One
  102. Pueblo
  103. Satirical Folk-Punk Anyone?
  104. Love Sonnet for the Street
  105. this is not a song just a question
  106. Your Bullets and Statements of love...opinions please!
  107. Atomic Wings (Edit)
  108. Fading Photos: Hope you like it
  109. My new piece - Question
  110. Leave me alone - song me n my step bro wrote
  111. The Edge of Brilliant Lights ~Crits Please~
  112. another try..maybe worse but see.
  113. The Clock Is Ticking, revisted, c4c
  114. in need of serious feedback
  115. The Priest, The Lie And The Representative (first real thread comments would be ace)
  116. Growing up, falling down -please crit
  117. not done, not titled, not great, not horrible
  118. Photoshop Can Make Scarborough look pretty(Crits please)
  119. Idea for a song, tell me what you think of it
  120. "clam idea"
  121. Need Help!
  122. Mortal Prophets
  123. Gone Tomorrow (crit for crit)
  124. The Council Of Elders (Edited Mortal Prophets)
  125. Watergate
  126. Bubble, a song about a mate.
  127. These forum rules are wrong.
  128. Yeah so i wrote an acoustic song with violin, guitar and voice...
  129. hellbent
  130. Pause For Life (please crit)
  131. Finally, this piece is finished (I think!)
  132. "Emerald Eyes and Lullabies"
  133. There's A 747 (Revised)
  134. I'll Pick You Up In Fifteen...Don't Forget The Gasoline.
  135. Declaration of independants
  136. New thing i wrote Crit plz (Fade)
  137. If none of you object i'd like to post a song
  138. Something New
  139. Wrecked
  140. Truffle Train
  141. Moonlight Tide(or some such)
  142. More Than a Baby (Please Critique)
  143. From What Remains, I'm Sure It Wont Take Much
  144. Untitled.
  145. Dream On, Galahad
  146. Spur of the Moment
  147. Black Star
  148. Understanding Rocket Science
  149. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts
  150. To Forget Life's Beauty
  151. 2.It Walks Only To Be Reborn.2
  152. Ashes to ashes (Hello Goodbye)
  153. Circles(friends work, please critique.)
  154. i need help quickly...
  155. Skating on Thin Ice is like Walking on Water
  156. Song, would like critics
  157. Fade
  158. untitled
  159. Bleed So Well
  160. I salvage the moss, she gathers the stone
  161. Lifeless
  162. Why Is It That All My Lyrics Are So Depressing ?!!
  163. No title.
  164. I Can See Your Forked Tongue
  165. I suck with titles...
  166. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts (Revised)
  167. Losing Love to Time (crit for crit)
  168. Bullets And Bombs
  169. Lightly Dark: Power Switches
  170. Twin Telepathy.
  171. Trying again
  172. Cajun Mary...Read and Help
  173. Skeletons~~~Please Crit!
  174. A girl named Nicole
  175. silence of the night
  176. Just clothes
  177. Purpoise (crit)
  178. Will I see light, december lesson. please Crit
  179. Lyric NOOB!
  180. To forgive is no longer our business
  181. Theater of the Mind (crit fer crit)
  182. Bullets And Bombs re-write
  183. Defence Force
  184. Carte Blanche
  185. A Moment; the Conquest
  186. Lightly Dark (Pt. II): The Reveled Scripture
  187. Sometimes A Man Gets Carried Away
  188. The Horrible Truth
  189. Still untitled.
  190. RFID (mind control)
  191. Perfect Insanity
  192. Memories Forbid
  193. Learning is Too Late
  194. Tired After Seven Years
  195. The ongoing decline in the state of reason
  196. First song in a very long time...PLEASE CRIT
  197. "Bird's Eye View" - new acoustic song - crit 4 crit
  198. Lethologica
  199. Wipe That Content Look off Your Face crit for crit
  200. ...And The Beast She Layed Within
  201. Lightly Dark (Pt. III): Anthropoid Army
  202. This Horror In The House Of Abrams
  203. BSP- Slaughter shed pig - Balthazaar
  204. Remember to Forget ~ *Crit4Crit, leave a link in this thread (see inside for details)
  205. Alchemy (Please Critique)
  206. Need A Bit Of Help
  207. begining of song, tell me what u think
  208. Lyrics i Wrote
  209. Love in an Instant
  210. Where is my mind?
  211. book-front to-do lists
  212. The Optimist (edit)
  213. Cant complain (pls check it out)
  214. A Perfect Sonnet
  215. lyrics i wrote one day......
  216. guitar riffs
  217. I saw some deer at work.
  218. hawaii
  219. To The Seven Churches:
  220. "Presidential System".
  221. Time
  222. Need Help With This Song!!!!
  223. rabbits and wolves
  224. Serendipity c4c
  225. No Title (Unfinished) - Please Critique!
  226. First Song Figured I'd Give It A Try
  227. My Love Song Crit 4 Crit
  228. 3. It Feels, Only Hollow.3
  229. All must see!!!!~~~~~
  230. Sweet Innocence - new song, help wanted
  231. Uninspired :(
  232. Unsure, please critique
  233. Untitled, critique please
  234. Pleasure and Pain (Please Critique)
  235. new to this...
  236. something I wrote
  237. Hey guys
  238. Closing the Curtain
  239. Here i lie (crit plz)
  240. Watches, Drinks, Movie Theaters, and Nuclear Reactors
  241. Where Did Things Go Wrong? crit please
  242. A Podium And A Rock Will Make You Holy
  243. Graceful as a starlit sky
  244. and im back after years so please crit the comeback
  245. words of a suspicious mind pt.1
  246. some honest opinions please...
  247. green money burns
  248. Cyclical Existence(crit this)
  249. Natasha [incomplete/one verse]
  250. "Evidence of A Broken Heart".