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  1. Power Struggle
  2. Nearly an Hour (Crit to be crit)
  3. Strong Stench Of Night, In An Urbanized Battlefield
  4. -last will-
  5. Gazers
  6. Liquid Suicide
  7. the outsider
  8. Hey! (song title)
  9. Girl (Beatles lawsuit)
  10. your breath is taken
  11. I'm trying new writing styles. I'll crit for crit.
  12. New Years Day- 3rd song in prog set
  13. Phantom
  14. "paper in-house"
  15. A Perfect Picture
  16. Cereal Without Milk
  17. Its thats bad....please crit
  18. Two Empty Bottles
  19. Sung Softly
  20. So good in blue
  21. Work in progress
  22. toy soldiers (re-post)
  23. Seconds
  24. Sorry... >crit for crit<
  25. Song
  26. My New Song, "Thrown Around".
  27. "Cupid: The Crook"
  28. Here I Stand
  29. Obit Resolution #11
  30. help
  31. help
  32. Black and White
  33. Feeling this Regret
  34. Off Scot-Free
  35. Hideously Vicious Elegance
  36. rock oprea writting tips?
  37. Cry Out, Holy Recollection
  38. The Veteran
  39. Sorry repost
  40. First lyrics posted on here.
  41. Lies in You.
  42. need ideas for a title, crits anyone?
  43. Something of a Triumph (crit-4-crit)
  44. Song
  45. Pinpricks
  46. "My Wife, The Arsonist"
  47. Any Tips on screamer?
  48. please critique
  49. "Papercut"
  50. 1Andsoitbegins1
  51. Pious Atheist
  52. need some kind crit.
  53. Compliment
  54. Suspended
  55. "go snow"
  56. Breakthrough
  57. For my father. Title, anyone? 2nd revision.
  58. Vin Diesel
  59. The Longest Day
  60. Please crit my first song
  61. Simply A Humanoid
  62. A new song by Adrian-Tyler Jenkins
  63. a couple jingles. tell me what you think.
  64. Our Religion (Crit for Crit)
  65. Sponge bath
  66. metaphor
  67. another day, another song
  68. Trevor
  69. Lost
  70. crit4crit please
  71. giving up me
  72. "...is the only reason to live"
  73. something i wrote some time ago (Eternal sunset)
  74. It could be our last moment together
  75. please crit ''the past''
  76. my first song, please crit
  77. 1st draft 'Pass the bong' c4c
  78. The CLock Is Ticking crit-4-crit
  79. hey please write some thing about this: Giving Up Me
  80. Oh The Crying Beauty.....
  81. I'd Settle for Fire and Brimstone
  82. SOng about a girl
  83. go on! i can take it!
  84. Ode To a Cowboy - Please Crit!
  85. Stay Spring...Please
  86. Love Failure please tell me what you think
  87. So i made this poem........(crit please)
  88. Atomic Wings
  89. unfinished song...tell me what you think
  90. My bitter heart's resentment and the games you play
  91. Another Epigram
  92. Wide Awake At One
  93. Pueblo
  94. Satirical Folk-Punk Anyone?
  95. Love Sonnet for the Street
  96. this is not a song just a question
  97. Your Bullets and Statements of love...opinions please!
  98. Atomic Wings (Edit)
  99. Fading Photos: Hope you like it
  100. My new piece - Question
  101. Leave me alone - song me n my step bro wrote
  102. The Edge of Brilliant Lights ~Crits Please~
  103. another try..maybe worse but see.
  104. The Clock Is Ticking, revisted, c4c
  105. in need of serious feedback
  106. The Priest, The Lie And The Representative (first real thread comments would be ace)
  107. Growing up, falling down -please crit
  108. not done, not titled, not great, not horrible
  109. Photoshop Can Make Scarborough look pretty(Crits please)
  110. Idea for a song, tell me what you think of it
  111. "clam idea"
  112. Need Help!
  113. Mortal Prophets
  114. Gone Tomorrow (crit for crit)
  115. The Council Of Elders (Edited Mortal Prophets)
  116. Watergate
  117. Bubble, a song about a mate.
  118. These forum rules are wrong.
  119. Yeah so i wrote an acoustic song with violin, guitar and voice...
  120. hellbent
  121. Pause For Life (please crit)
  122. Finally, this piece is finished (I think!)
  123. "Emerald Eyes and Lullabies"
  124. There's A 747 (Revised)
  125. I'll Pick You Up In Fifteen...Don't Forget The Gasoline.
  126. Declaration of independants
  127. New thing i wrote Crit plz (Fade)
  128. If none of you object i'd like to post a song
  129. Something New
  130. Wrecked
  131. Truffle Train
  132. Moonlight Tide(or some such)
  133. More Than a Baby (Please Critique)
  134. From What Remains, I'm Sure It Wont Take Much
  135. Untitled.
  136. Dream On, Galahad
  137. Spur of the Moment
  138. Black Star
  139. Understanding Rocket Science
  140. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts
  141. To Forget Life's Beauty
  142. 2.It Walks Only To Be Reborn.2
  143. Ashes to ashes (Hello Goodbye)
  144. Circles(friends work, please critique.)
  145. i need help quickly...
  146. Skating on Thin Ice is like Walking on Water
  147. Song, would like critics
  148. Fade
  149. untitled
  150. Bleed So Well
  151. I salvage the moss, she gathers the stone
  152. Lifeless
  153. Why Is It That All My Lyrics Are So Depressing ?!!
  154. No title.
  155. I Can See Your Forked Tongue
  156. I suck with titles...
  157. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts (Revised)
  158. Losing Love to Time (crit for crit)
  159. Bullets And Bombs
  160. Lightly Dark: Power Switches
  161. Twin Telepathy.
  162. Trying again
  163. Cajun Mary...Read and Help
  164. Skeletons~~~Please Crit!
  165. A girl named Nicole
  166. silence of the night
  167. Just clothes
  168. Purpoise (crit)
  169. Will I see light, december lesson. please Crit
  170. Lyric NOOB!
  171. To forgive is no longer our business
  172. Theater of the Mind (crit fer crit)
  173. Bullets And Bombs re-write
  174. Defence Force
  175. Carte Blanche
  176. A Moment; the Conquest
  177. Lightly Dark (Pt. II): The Reveled Scripture
  178. Sometimes A Man Gets Carried Away
  179. The Horrible Truth
  180. Still untitled.
  181. RFID (mind control)
  182. Perfect Insanity
  183. Memories Forbid
  184. Learning is Too Late
  185. Tired After Seven Years
  186. The ongoing decline in the state of reason
  187. First song in a very long time...PLEASE CRIT
  188. "Bird's Eye View" - new acoustic song - crit 4 crit
  189. Lethologica
  190. Wipe That Content Look off Your Face crit for crit
  191. ...And The Beast She Layed Within
  192. Lightly Dark (Pt. III): Anthropoid Army
  193. This Horror In The House Of Abrams
  194. BSP- Slaughter shed pig - Balthazaar
  195. Remember to Forget ~ *Crit4Crit, leave a link in this thread (see inside for details)
  196. Alchemy (Please Critique)
  197. Need A Bit Of Help
  198. begining of song, tell me what u think
  199. Lyrics i Wrote
  200. Love in an Instant
  201. Where is my mind?
  202. book-front to-do lists
  203. The Optimist (edit)
  204. Cant complain (pls check it out)
  205. A Perfect Sonnet
  206. lyrics i wrote one day......
  207. guitar riffs
  208. I saw some deer at work.
  209. hawaii
  210. To The Seven Churches:
  211. "Presidential System".
  212. Time
  213. Need Help With This Song!!!!
  214. rabbits and wolves
  215. Serendipity c4c
  216. No Title (Unfinished) - Please Critique!
  217. First Song Figured I'd Give It A Try
  218. My Love Song Crit 4 Crit
  219. 3. It Feels, Only Hollow.3
  220. All must see!!!!~~~~~
  221. Sweet Innocence - new song, help wanted
  222. Uninspired :(
  223. Unsure, please critique
  224. Untitled, critique please
  225. Pleasure and Pain (Please Critique)
  226. new to this...
  227. something I wrote
  228. Hey guys
  229. Closing the Curtain
  230. Here i lie (crit plz)
  231. Watches, Drinks, Movie Theaters, and Nuclear Reactors
  232. Where Did Things Go Wrong? crit please
  233. A Podium And A Rock Will Make You Holy
  234. Graceful as a starlit sky
  235. and im back after years so please crit the comeback
  236. words of a suspicious mind pt.1
  237. some honest opinions please...
  238. green money burns
  239. Cyclical Existence(crit this)
  240. Natasha [incomplete/one verse]
  241. "Evidence of A Broken Heart".
  242. New guy some song
  243. One Gun Salute
  244. Adrifting
  245. My Own Political Punk Lyrics
  246. Boy with Lyre Forms Liaison
  247. "Europe: For Whores In Training"
  248. epic affliction
  249. Lyrics(comments are appreciated)
  250. Though