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- Same Old New Year (new song)
- Abandoned and Forgotten
- New idea for lyric game thing, any mods, check this out, tell me what you reckon
- Dancing with the Devil
- Fate Set In Stone
- Just lost inspiration
- Responsibility
- Like rain drops on window sills
- The Ropes That Bind Us; The Walls That Set The Boundaries
- I'll Wait (please crit)
- Power Struggle
- Nearly an Hour (Crit to be crit)
- Strong Stench Of Night, In An Urbanized Battlefield
- -last will-
- Gazers
- Liquid Suicide
- the outsider
- Hey! (song title)
- Girl (Beatles lawsuit)
- your breath is taken
- I'm trying new writing styles. I'll crit for crit.
- New Years Day- 3rd song in prog set
- Phantom
- "paper in-house"
- A Perfect Picture
- Cereal Without Milk
- Its thats bad....please crit
- Two Empty Bottles
- Sung Softly
- So good in blue
- Work in progress
- toy soldiers (re-post)
- Seconds
- Sorry... >crit for crit<
- Song
- My New Song, "Thrown Around".
- "Cupid: The Crook"
- Here I Stand
- Obit Resolution #11
- help
- help
- Black and White
- Feeling this Regret
- Off Scot-Free
- Hideously Vicious Elegance
- rock oprea writting tips?
- Cry Out, Holy Recollection
- The Veteran
- Sorry repost
- First lyrics posted on here.
- Lies in You.
- need ideas for a title, crits anyone?
- Something of a Triumph (crit-4-crit)
- Song
- Pinpricks
- "My Wife, The Arsonist"
- Any Tips on screamer?
- please critique
- "Papercut"
- 1Andsoitbegins1
- Pious Atheist
- need some kind crit.
- Compliment
- Suspended
- "go snow"
- Breakthrough
- For my father. Title, anyone? 2nd revision.
- Vin Diesel
- The Longest Day
- Please crit my first song
- Simply A Humanoid
- A new song by Adrian-Tyler Jenkins
- a couple jingles. tell me what you think.
- Our Religion (Crit for Crit)
- Sponge bath
- metaphor
- another day, another song
- Trevor
- Lost
- crit4crit please
- giving up me
- "...is the only reason to live"
- something i wrote some time ago (Eternal sunset)
- It could be our last moment together
- please crit ''the past''
- my first song, please crit
- 1st draft 'Pass the bong' c4c
- The CLock Is Ticking crit-4-crit
- hey please write some thing about this: Giving Up Me
- Oh The Crying Beauty.....
- I'd Settle for Fire and Brimstone
- SOng about a girl
- go on! i can take it!
- Ode To a Cowboy - Please Crit!
- Stay Spring...Please
- Love Failure please tell me what you think
- So i made this poem........(crit please)
- Atomic Wings
- unfinished song...tell me what you think
- My bitter heart's resentment and the games you play
- Another Epigram
- Wide Awake At One
- Pueblo
- Satirical Folk-Punk Anyone?
- Love Sonnet for the Street
- this is not a song just a question
- Your Bullets and Statements of love...opinions please!
- Atomic Wings (Edit)
- Fading Photos: Hope you like it
- My new piece - Question
- Leave me alone - song me n my step bro wrote
- The Edge of Brilliant Lights ~Crits Please~
- another try..maybe worse but see.
- The Clock Is Ticking, revisted, c4c
- in need of serious feedback
- The Priest, The Lie And The Representative (first real thread comments would be ace)
- Growing up, falling down -please crit
- not done, not titled, not great, not horrible
- Photoshop Can Make Scarborough look pretty(Crits please)
- Idea for a song, tell me what you think of it
- "clam idea"
- Need Help!
- Mortal Prophets
- Gone Tomorrow (crit for crit)
- The Council Of Elders (Edited Mortal Prophets)
- Watergate
- Bubble, a song about a mate.
- These forum rules are wrong.
- Yeah so i wrote an acoustic song with violin, guitar and voice...
- hellbent
- Pause For Life (please crit)
- Finally, this piece is finished (I think!)
- "Emerald Eyes and Lullabies"
- There's A 747 (Revised)
- I'll Pick You Up In Fifteen...Don't Forget The Gasoline.
- Declaration of independants
- New thing i wrote Crit plz (Fade)
- If none of you object i'd like to post a song
- Something New
- Wrecked
- Truffle Train
- Moonlight Tide(or some such)
- More Than a Baby (Please Critique)
- From What Remains, I'm Sure It Wont Take Much
- Untitled.
- Dream On, Galahad
- Spur of the Moment
- Black Star
- Understanding Rocket Science
- 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts
- To Forget Life's Beauty
- 2.It Walks Only To Be Reborn.2
- Ashes to ashes (Hello Goodbye)
- Circles(friends work, please critique.)
- i need help quickly...
- Skating on Thin Ice is like Walking on Water
- Song, would like critics
- Fade
- untitled
- Bleed So Well
- I salvage the moss, she gathers the stone
- Lifeless
- Why Is It That All My Lyrics Are So Depressing ?!!
- No title.
- I Can See Your Forked Tongue
- I suck with titles...
- 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts (Revised)
- Losing Love to Time (crit for crit)
- Bullets And Bombs
- Lightly Dark: Power Switches
- Twin Telepathy.
- Trying again
- Cajun Mary...Read and Help
- Skeletons~~~Please Crit!
- A girl named Nicole
- silence of the night
- Just clothes
- Purpoise (crit)
- Will I see light, december lesson. please Crit
- Lyric NOOB!
- To forgive is no longer our business
- Theater of the Mind (crit fer crit)
- Bullets And Bombs re-write
- Defence Force
- Carte Blanche
- A Moment; the Conquest
- Lightly Dark (Pt. II): The Reveled Scripture
- Sometimes A Man Gets Carried Away
- The Horrible Truth
- Still untitled.
- RFID (mind control)
- Perfect Insanity
- Memories Forbid
- Learning is Too Late
- Tired After Seven Years
- The ongoing decline in the state of reason
- First song in a very long time...PLEASE CRIT
- "Bird's Eye View" - new acoustic song - crit 4 crit
- Lethologica
- Wipe That Content Look off Your Face crit for crit
- ...And The Beast She Layed Within
- Lightly Dark (Pt. III): Anthropoid Army
- This Horror In The House Of Abrams
- BSP- Slaughter shed pig - Balthazaar
- Remember to Forget ~ *Crit4Crit, leave a link in this thread (see inside for details)
- Alchemy (Please Critique)
- Need A Bit Of Help
- begining of song, tell me what u think
- Lyrics i Wrote
- Love in an Instant
- Where is my mind?
- book-front to-do lists
- The Optimist (edit)
- Cant complain (pls check it out)
- A Perfect Sonnet
- lyrics i wrote one day......
- guitar riffs
- I saw some deer at work.
- hawaii
- To The Seven Churches:
- "Presidential System".
- Time
- Need Help With This Song!!!!
- rabbits and wolves
- Serendipity c4c
- No Title (Unfinished) - Please Critique!
- First Song Figured I'd Give It A Try
- My Love Song Crit 4 Crit
- 3. It Feels, Only Hollow.3
- All must see!!!!~~~~~
- Sweet Innocence - new song, help wanted
- Uninspired :(
- Unsure, please critique
- Untitled, critique please
- Pleasure and Pain (Please Critique)
- new to this...
- something I wrote
- Hey guys
- Closing the Curtain
- Here i lie (crit plz)
- Watches, Drinks, Movie Theaters, and Nuclear Reactors
- Where Did Things Go Wrong? crit please
- A Podium And A Rock Will Make You Holy
- Graceful as a starlit sky
- and im back after years so please crit the comeback
- words of a suspicious mind pt.1
- some honest opinions please...
- green money burns
- Cyclical Existence(crit this)
- Natasha [incomplete/one verse]
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