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  1. Like rain drops on window sills
  2. The Ropes That Bind Us; The Walls That Set The Boundaries
  3. I'll Wait (please crit)
  4. Power Struggle
  5. Nearly an Hour (Crit to be crit)
  6. Strong Stench Of Night, In An Urbanized Battlefield
  7. -last will-
  8. Gazers
  9. Liquid Suicide
  10. the outsider
  11. Hey! (song title)
  12. Girl (Beatles lawsuit)
  13. your breath is taken
  14. I'm trying new writing styles. I'll crit for crit.
  15. New Years Day- 3rd song in prog set
  16. Phantom
  17. "paper in-house"
  18. A Perfect Picture
  19. Cereal Without Milk
  20. Its thats bad....please crit
  21. Two Empty Bottles
  22. Sung Softly
  23. So good in blue
  24. Work in progress
  25. toy soldiers (re-post)
  26. Seconds
  27. Sorry... >crit for crit<
  28. Song
  29. My New Song, "Thrown Around".
  30. "Cupid: The Crook"
  31. Here I Stand
  32. Obit Resolution #11
  33. help
  34. help
  35. Black and White
  36. Feeling this Regret
  37. Off Scot-Free
  38. Hideously Vicious Elegance
  39. rock oprea writting tips?
  40. Cry Out, Holy Recollection
  41. The Veteran
  42. Sorry repost
  43. First lyrics posted on here.
  44. Lies in You.
  45. need ideas for a title, crits anyone?
  46. Something of a Triumph (crit-4-crit)
  47. Song
  48. Pinpricks
  49. "My Wife, The Arsonist"
  50. Any Tips on screamer?
  51. please critique
  52. "Papercut"
  53. 1Andsoitbegins1
  54. Pious Atheist
  55. need some kind crit.
  56. Compliment
  57. Suspended
  58. "go snow"
  59. Breakthrough
  60. For my father. Title, anyone? 2nd revision.
  61. Vin Diesel
  62. The Longest Day
  63. Please crit my first song
  64. Simply A Humanoid
  65. A new song by Adrian-Tyler Jenkins
  66. a couple jingles. tell me what you think.
  67. Our Religion (Crit for Crit)
  68. Sponge bath
  69. metaphor
  70. another day, another song
  71. Trevor
  72. Lost
  73. crit4crit please
  74. giving up me
  75. "...is the only reason to live"
  76. something i wrote some time ago (Eternal sunset)
  77. It could be our last moment together
  78. please crit ''the past''
  79. my first song, please crit
  80. 1st draft 'Pass the bong' c4c
  81. The CLock Is Ticking crit-4-crit
  82. hey please write some thing about this: Giving Up Me
  83. Oh The Crying Beauty.....
  84. I'd Settle for Fire and Brimstone
  85. SOng about a girl
  86. go on! i can take it!
  87. Ode To a Cowboy - Please Crit!
  88. Stay Spring...Please
  89. Love Failure please tell me what you think
  90. So i made this poem........(crit please)
  91. Atomic Wings
  92. unfinished song...tell me what you think
  93. My bitter heart's resentment and the games you play
  94. Another Epigram
  95. Wide Awake At One
  96. Pueblo
  97. Satirical Folk-Punk Anyone?
  98. Love Sonnet for the Street
  99. this is not a song just a question
  100. Your Bullets and Statements of love...opinions please!
  101. Atomic Wings (Edit)
  102. Fading Photos: Hope you like it
  103. My new piece - Question
  104. Leave me alone - song me n my step bro wrote
  105. The Edge of Brilliant Lights ~Crits Please~
  106. another try..maybe worse but see.
  107. The Clock Is Ticking, revisted, c4c
  108. in need of serious feedback
  109. The Priest, The Lie And The Representative (first real thread comments would be ace)
  110. Growing up, falling down -please crit
  111. not done, not titled, not great, not horrible
  112. Photoshop Can Make Scarborough look pretty(Crits please)
  113. Idea for a song, tell me what you think of it
  114. "clam idea"
  115. Need Help!
  116. Mortal Prophets
  117. Gone Tomorrow (crit for crit)
  118. The Council Of Elders (Edited Mortal Prophets)
  119. Watergate
  120. Bubble, a song about a mate.
  121. These forum rules are wrong.
  122. Yeah so i wrote an acoustic song with violin, guitar and voice...
  123. hellbent
  124. Pause For Life (please crit)
  125. Finally, this piece is finished (I think!)
  126. "Emerald Eyes and Lullabies"
  127. There's A 747 (Revised)
  128. I'll Pick You Up In Fifteen...Don't Forget The Gasoline.
  129. Declaration of independants
  130. New thing i wrote Crit plz (Fade)
  131. If none of you object i'd like to post a song
  132. Something New
  133. Wrecked
  134. Truffle Train
  135. Moonlight Tide(or some such)
  136. More Than a Baby (Please Critique)
  137. From What Remains, I'm Sure It Wont Take Much
  138. Untitled.
  139. Dream On, Galahad
  140. Spur of the Moment
  141. Black Star
  142. Understanding Rocket Science
  143. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts
  144. To Forget Life's Beauty
  145. 2.It Walks Only To Be Reborn.2
  146. Ashes to ashes (Hello Goodbye)
  147. Circles(friends work, please critique.)
  148. i need help quickly...
  149. Skating on Thin Ice is like Walking on Water
  150. Song, would like critics
  151. Fade
  152. untitled
  153. Bleed So Well
  154. I salvage the moss, she gathers the stone
  155. Lifeless
  156. Why Is It That All My Lyrics Are So Depressing ?!!
  157. No title.
  158. I Can See Your Forked Tongue
  159. I suck with titles...
  160. 1000 Memories Of 1000 Bloodied Hearts (Revised)
  161. Losing Love to Time (crit for crit)
  162. Bullets And Bombs
  163. Lightly Dark: Power Switches
  164. Twin Telepathy.
  165. Trying again
  166. Cajun Mary...Read and Help
  167. Skeletons~~~Please Crit!
  168. A girl named Nicole
  169. silence of the night
  170. Just clothes
  171. Purpoise (crit)
  172. Will I see light, december lesson. please Crit
  173. Lyric NOOB!
  174. To forgive is no longer our business
  175. Theater of the Mind (crit fer crit)
  176. Bullets And Bombs re-write
  177. Defence Force
  178. Carte Blanche
  179. A Moment; the Conquest
  180. Lightly Dark (Pt. II): The Reveled Scripture
  181. Sometimes A Man Gets Carried Away
  182. The Horrible Truth
  183. Still untitled.
  184. RFID (mind control)
  185. Perfect Insanity
  186. Memories Forbid
  187. Learning is Too Late
  188. Tired After Seven Years
  189. The ongoing decline in the state of reason
  190. First song in a very long time...PLEASE CRIT
  191. "Bird's Eye View" - new acoustic song - crit 4 crit
  192. Lethologica
  193. Wipe That Content Look off Your Face crit for crit
  194. ...And The Beast She Layed Within
  195. Lightly Dark (Pt. III): Anthropoid Army
  196. This Horror In The House Of Abrams
  197. BSP- Slaughter shed pig - Balthazaar
  198. Remember to Forget ~ *Crit4Crit, leave a link in this thread (see inside for details)
  199. Alchemy (Please Critique)
  200. Need A Bit Of Help
  201. begining of song, tell me what u think
  202. Lyrics i Wrote
  203. Love in an Instant
  204. Where is my mind?
  205. book-front to-do lists
  206. The Optimist (edit)
  207. Cant complain (pls check it out)
  208. A Perfect Sonnet
  209. lyrics i wrote one day......
  210. guitar riffs
  211. I saw some deer at work.
  212. hawaii
  213. To The Seven Churches:
  214. "Presidential System".
  215. Time
  216. Need Help With This Song!!!!
  217. rabbits and wolves
  218. Serendipity c4c
  219. No Title (Unfinished) - Please Critique!
  220. First Song Figured I'd Give It A Try
  221. My Love Song Crit 4 Crit
  222. 3. It Feels, Only Hollow.3
  223. All must see!!!!~~~~~
  224. Sweet Innocence - new song, help wanted
  225. Uninspired :(
  226. Unsure, please critique
  227. Untitled, critique please
  228. Pleasure and Pain (Please Critique)
  229. new to this...
  230. something I wrote
  231. Hey guys
  232. Closing the Curtain
  233. Here i lie (crit plz)
  234. Watches, Drinks, Movie Theaters, and Nuclear Reactors
  235. Where Did Things Go Wrong? crit please
  236. A Podium And A Rock Will Make You Holy
  237. Graceful as a starlit sky
  238. and im back after years so please crit the comeback
  239. words of a suspicious mind pt.1
  240. some honest opinions please...
  241. green money burns
  242. Cyclical Existence(crit this)
  243. Natasha [incomplete/one verse]
  244. "Evidence of A Broken Heart".
  245. New guy some song
  246. One Gun Salute
  247. Adrifting
  248. My Own Political Punk Lyrics
  249. Boy with Lyre Forms Liaison
  250. "Europe: For Whores In Training"