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- The Odyssey of the Heart :crit crit crits:
- Brand new sun
- tytf... needs some work... be harsh
- Wintersong I wrote tonight
- The Three Verses Of Life
- From Diamonds To Coal
- Proclamation to a convinced crowd, a hymn
- Come One Come All...
- Van Houchi
- Beauty Fall
- Anyone know what song this is?
- can't put music to my lyrics...
- Heres a song i wrote called All on You
- Critq for Critq
- Your Eyes, The Sea - Please crit!
- Searching
- In Your Church I Suffer
- Crit my latest peice please (w/ audio!)
- The Soporific Monster Awakens
- Help Singing
- Sex and Still-Life
- The Soporific Monster Awakens (Sorry, the other thread of this got too nasty)
- Ungratified - crit-for-crit
- You'll Rue The Day You Crossed me Trebek
- Only In Our Death Can I Live
- The .44 Caliber
- "fast food hell"
- Southwest Rain Uprise...I think this is my 2nd on here?
- 2nd Song
- Hey all :) I wanna share this one w/you.
- Paranoia
- Another Stray : My 2nd attempt at lyrics : Please crit
- M.m.d.
- Help Me With Title Please
- It's like, cold outside.
- Borrowed Toy
- "Good Planets Are Hard To Find"- tribute to John Lennon
- The Four Seasons; Part one: Autumn
- Rebel Against the Future (Crit for Crit)
- New Short One: Weightless
- Designated: Idealistic
- [You never let me down] just done
- Beneath December, we mourn
- Waging a war against the nations of us.
- Boeing 747
- fading shades of crimson
- Orange Sherbert and Tuna Sandwiches
- death maze
- Mona Lisa with no smile
- River Haiku
- cut throat machinery
- Bitch
- A suggestion. (This isn't a song, this is an actual suggestion)
- ARIA: Progenies of Apocalyptic Sins
- my first song ever
- Robot Beta Omicron Sampi Version 2.0: The Beta Decay Of Neon Hearts.
- Knowledge (Unknown)
- Carmex For-Cold-Sores
- Ok....
- Root Beer Is Sexy!
- 6 Feet Under Fame (Please Crit!)
- The Feeling I Get (Please Crit)
- my first song
- The Perfect Time For a Pathetic Cliche is 12:59
- A song written in Five Minutes
- "your a bitch"
- A bunch of different songs.
- Oh Please Refrain
- Instrumental looking for lyrics!
- The slow trees
- Dream Her Free
- Porcelain, Water, Bricks
- Untitled (Crit for crit i promise)
- Just a verse (crit. for crit.)
- A songwriting question
- Check out my song!
- No title
- Amontillado
- Pure
- In Need (crit.for.crit)
- You destroy me.
- The Hunter's Grand Villa
- Revision of my old "wintersong" (crit for crit)inte
- Sunshine Was More Than You Are
- a final farewell
- hier moet je zijn!
- The Irony Of My Shadow (unfinished need some opinions)
- The Lost
- "Flashback"
- No title. Just my second song.
- New song : False Hero's - Crit for Crit
- Untitled.
- I'm back and I'm really not sure..
- Metaphor's for love
- You're not me crit4crit
- Candles, Oh Candles
- Friday (opinions please)
- First set of lyrics (please crit ill crit yours :)
- The Rainy Season
- Goodbye
- Grace Face
- "Anarchy"
- "But i was all like, Psh, no way"
- All The Double-Edged Blades Of Humanity Stopped Me
- - January 21st in Rome. -
- Threnody For A Daydream
- Two songs
- Orchestrated Train Wreck(for now)
- When the Bough Breaks (crit 4 crit)
- Gasoline Rainbow *crit*
- Memories
- 'cold ashes'
- "Cold Seeks Comfort, And Predicts A Plague"
- Untitled (as of yet) - crit 4 crit
- Do They Really In Reality?
- "First Time" crit for crit
- Wasnt sure where to post this...
- "Whose side are you on" - My first lyrics post, please crit.
- Work in progess crit for critique
- some help maybe?
- puzzles of confusion
- The cake will bake
- Tape-worm
- cronulla
- 2nd Song in Prog Sequence
- The Basses That Blast Go Suddenly Flat
- no name yet but pleaz crit
- The Girl Whose Name Starts With K
- Sonnet of Masquerade
- Useless (First non-song lyrics in a while)
- Fireflies
- Apothy: flashbacks and regrets
- Zenith The Menace
- Today
- The Oak Canopy
- First song, untitled.. Please crit - Cheers
- Untitled/Unfinished.
- Should I keep going with this?
- Here's one.
- The Atheist, The Radical And Handmaidens redone, delete the old one if you want mods)
- A song about winter
- Dead Are the Dreams
- End Of The World (poetry)
- "Cold Feet"
- Taken Over
- Gott Ist Tot
- Close my eyes
- A Broken Portrait
- Battery Powered Hero
- The Air That Washed Away Everything
- song thing did it real quick
- Some Koan
- Upon The Black Hills
- The Guy No-One Knows
- Swings and Slides
- I'm back beezies
- Please comment on my song
- God Of Deception - Crit (for a crit), Rip, Whatever
- I Wrote This For You
- Dim-lighted letter
- Black Shadow Rising - Please Crit
- Waiting.
- Grave robbing
- Wired Fence
- - Lost In You Like Saturday Nights -
- Silence Is Like the Moonlight (Please Critique!)
- guitar pro 5!!!
- Last War
- Needs a name and some crits!! Christmas related!.
- Little Albert (Where Is He Held?)
- The Hungarian Gypsy
- Bury the night
- the way things go...
- Confess
- The Badly Executed Good Idea (Pt. I)/The New and The Old: The New
- "Cocente"
- poem inspired by candle light and a thought
- Untitled due to Laziness
- >> A poem about Emery
- Who Said it Wasn't Snowing?
- A Love Song that needs a name.
- Sick and Tired
- Flames of the Crucifixion
- Change of Heart
- No Title
- Book Lyrics
- America, England, Switzerland, Germany and Japan
- Like Angels Ought to Smell
- Midnight Breeze
- Short and sweet
- Endings.
- My first poem. (Critiques and Advice please?)
- Ablaze
- Im still in a writers block, plz crit
- really not sure about this one
- Mr. Palahniuk, You Chambers
- Join The Mushrooms
- left for dead
- Valiant Gray
- Lyrics and their value
- The Darkness
- No More
- Look Towards the Shoreline
- Car Rides From City to Country
- A trophy type post [crit 4 crit]
- Long Live The Dead
- "Shoot From the Hip, Aim For the Heart"
- lyrics for rating
- A Quick Stab at Uncomfortable Teens
- Cliche
- New Song, Needs some work and a good title
- Littoral Epigram
- Predictable
- Two Poems
- pariah
- When Im Gone, by Eminem
- Loose Writing Themes
- Hibernation On The Planet Nymg
- please crit.
- Virus (Crit for Crit)
- Motivation for writing??
- Lines
- Crit 4 crit..please
- Johnny Lowlife
- Escaped Memories
- Battle of the bands
- Teenagers
- a pen with ink and a heartbeat...
- Don't Flame Us
- Great disguise, crit for crit amigos
- Paradox
- My Song, "Only Good".
- Leave me, wishing (Crit. for Crit)
- very very rough draft of a currently unnamed song
- Leave The Light On
- not another set of lyrics
- 'Sup Songwriting & Lyrics forum?
- "Intergallactic Fisticuffs"
- My Song, "Where Are My Letters".
- My Song, "Forget You".
- Wonder words
- give up
- Nine Pound Time-Bomb
- "Cocente" (rewrite)
- Feeling Lonely In Oblivion
- "The End of the World" crit plz
- please comment my song City Limits
- Punk band from montreal looking for a singer
- How to develop a "metal voice"
- Same Old New Year (new song)
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