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- The War Of Me
- Attention Grabing Title!!!!!
- Help me think of a title for my new instrumental!!!
- The meaning of life lies within!!!!!
- The Reminder
- No West (Crit to be Crit.)
- Different
- please, give your opinion on that poem
- Your typical "Oh please come back" song.
- A Rose from the Ashes - crit for crit
- "We're Sorry But Your Last Meal Was Called On Account Of Rain"
- 1-5-2-6 cliche
- I thought I'd try something different...
- I thought I'd try something different...
- Lie (It's Alright)
- So I thought I'd try writing a song.
- So I thought I'd try writing a song.
- I've been writing a lot lately
- Only On Account Of Villiany
- Leaving Town
- Where, oh where do I begin?
- the darkest winter
- lyrics need it want it - crit
- hurricane
- Trials Of The Faithful
- Impede Inclusively
- Cathedral Bells and Marionettes
- I'm 60 above the 25.
- It's true (crit for a crit)
- just for fun
- first piece please crit
- A moments peace - crit
- Sherry Lane Shuffle (Serious song)
- Ain't Too Proud
- Need crit for Metal Song
- "All I got" by me
- I just finished up two songs, and I'd appreciate input!
- Untitled - c4c
- Clobberin' Time
- A Bridge Gets Built for You (Please Critique)
- Vero
- New Song Please Input
- Life was so much better when you were a God...
- Mrs. Johnson (new for my solo punk CD)
- Untitled...first post in a LONG time.
- Iridescent Smears-a poem, possible song
- For my Father
- singing help please
- Agnostics are hxc.
- Oblivious (not the stupid game show)
- Just a little something I put together last week
- A Cold Autumn's Eve (another short one) - crit for crit
- The Last Letter
- second piece, crit 4 crit
- got no heroes now - lyrics
- Perfect Eyes
- "Welcome Home" -- Poem, maybe a song
- Stained Sincere Please Read
- Pick the lyrics you like the best
- Fall Away
- First MAIN post
- Lost and Found
- Inside Me...
- Fading Cognitive Explosions
- I'm saying CRIT just to get your attention
- necrotizing fasciitis - crit for crit -
- How to look ridiculous in three act
- City Lights
- Darling is Silk (mp3 included)
- An Incandescent Display of Shelf Life.
- The Foundry/Bad Guys Don't Always Wear Black
- A Parting Gift
- A bird, a window, and a sunrise
- Black & Grey
- God's Gift to Troubled Water
- "Burnt Out" (Crit for crit)
- Idle Hours
- Devil's on my Heels
- Chains
- Cultivation
- Hate Forever
- Censor
- so i wrote a poem
- no more gin and tonic
- Choices (You know what's right)
- Undertow Collapse brilliance
- the look in your eyes say "no" but the knife in my hand says "yes"
- The Wasted Trait-Please critique
- My wish
- Show them how its done...
- Slick Nerd - If you like good music, read this song!
- Our Love Remains the Same (Crit-4-Crit)
- Disengage My Mind
- death metal crisis.
- A b*tch i once called love.
- you push me away
- Con Phew Said - Crit 4 Crit
- The Official Fun Song Thread
- Grave Secrets (Please Crit!)
- On the Range
- Along, side you (crit for crit)
- From My Tounge To Your's
- If You Knew How Much I Hurt When You Hurt... You'd Stop Hurting Yourself
- speaking to the sky-written after a LONG writers block
- untitled right now
- Help continue a song?
- A Place Where Memories Lie
- We're meant to be
- "Your Problems Are The Worst"
- Your begging eyes are broken. - A.K.A - A B*tch i once called love
- plz help!!
- -no current title-
- greatest song in the world
- the mood of a song...
- Wise Man Jim (please crit)
- Cold Coffee Fission.
- Your broken angel (C4C)
- song i made
- redemption (c4c)
- First song. Be gentle.
- 2nd lyric - !please crit!
- Monkeys in Love
- Sanity Box
- Anemic
- And None but Fools Do Wear the Moonlight
- Pulp Fiction Challange!!!
- Waken Dream (Post-Mortem)
- help with a song
- Carotid Pulse (Can't You Feel This?)
- new song-new at writing-heavy metal
- Fading Images (Please Crit)
- finally added some material
- AIM sucks yo.
- stuck with sticking *drums*
- loose rule critique
- music writing
- Movie Challenge!!!
- Grave Secrets Edited (Crit Please)
- My Demise (long time no post tell me what you think)
- No Title, But please Crit
- "Entwined With Silver (The Red Ribbons Shiver)"
- Throwing away The days
- december
- my first attempt at song writing
- The Delay: Between Dusk and Dawn
- Some Don't End(c4c please give me your feedback)
- "A Modern Day Plague"
- oh you know
- "Angel Of " Poem
- What should I name this song?
- Angel Tree
- Just finished: Under the influence of moonlight
- Rize - Gunshot
- 'Some Where' and 'I can draw more than trees'-im new
- Uncouth
- To Death on Sunday (It's a love song, not a suicide song)
- First Song Please Crit.
- Have not done this in awhile...
- some songs
- Paper Armor for the Weak
- Re-Mastered
- Poem-I May Not Know Poetry-PLZ CRIT
- **new teen writer** song is called "The End, Again"
- no name yet, please crit
- yea i just wrote this like RIGHT NOW so crits would be appreciated!
- untitled (please crit)
- Blood pressure
- The Mood Swings Were Fun, But I'd Rather Play on the Emotional See-Saw
- Start of a Song
- We Dance (The Ritual)
- Moonlit Theivery
- I return - With a lazy song C4c
- Our Birthday, Starring Me and the Heart Breaker
- shattered perfection
- Hoarding blasphemy
- never admitting your faults doesnt make you brave
- Choose your Poison
- Lets try this one then
- Otea
- help!!!!!!!
- steal a moment
- Lyrical Story
- “You said you still have every e-mail I ever wrote”
- You're Still here
- untitled (crit4 crit)
- Untitled
- I Bought My Heart From Wal-Mart
- Channel Power
- Lyrical Integrity
- October's Beckoning
- This is crap.
- Squeeze Tightly
- Clumsy, Awkward, Broken
- None More True (Crit to be crit.)
- not the greatest but still crit please...
- Drunkenly Crys
- New Tide
- New Tide
- not the greatest but still crit please...
- not the greatest but still crit please...
- Surrender (political punk)
- Another Casualty
- Employee of the month
- From My Tounge To Yours (Revised)
- "Prize" I guess, Crit For Crit
- please crit !!! urgent for a newbie!
- Come gimme crit for my latest prog rock song
- When I Dream crit4crit
- Saw Pulp Fiction Fight Club The Machinist
- Disengage My Mind (Edited) Please crit.
- I'll Never Order Love,PLEASE CRIT
- unfinished song crit :)Please Please Please
- A White-Knuckle Love
- Chains
- Queen of Sorrow, Crit 4 Crit
- Music for your Lyrics
- song i wrote on train
- :Crit:Front Seat:Crit:
- NEW SONG WRITER+SONG crit plz
- Any black metal vocalists?
- Another Guy (crit for crit)
- Help me with a name Great song
- Open Wide... please crit and i will do the same for you
- This Song Came From My Drunken Heart - Please Tell Me What You Think
- Oh and One ---c4c---
- Bored and Tired
- Currently un-titled. Best yet.
- Moon-Sets and Full-Suns
- the box (the first peace of writing im actually proud of)
- Dont have a title...
- Well, I'm sure this song sucks.
- The Broken White House
- Words on the Ceiling Fan
- A walking song
- when the time calls
- Dirty old man
- ::untitled:: this is my first one! please crit!
- Illiterate Journalist
- Tips for someone without much to write about.
- Dallas Metal Vocalists
- What's popular....
- Follow Her To Vegas - Pt. 2
- Voiceless Labial Fricative
- “J.e.T”
- No One Can Care
- Double feature; if not enlightened poetry then maybe comedy
- Streetcar Named Desire Challenge!!
- Another Untitled Song - Crit For Crit ( guarauntee)
- Newbs first lyrics posted, feel free to abuse at will!
- I hate you
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