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- Another Nameless Love Song
- Reppin' the 'Ville
- I'm Not Worth It (I swear I will match your crit)
- Could a song writter help me out
- Just wrote it
- Untitled at the Moment (I swear I will match your crit)
- The Waiting Room Replay
- Burning
- Soul
- “Cold lips on your neck”
- Happy sad freaks
- 3rd Degree Burns
- The Scary Place
- Phantom Life
- Just got this copyrighted
- Whatch out, it's a poem!
- Cash or Card
- 'Oh my god, shut up' - he shouted
- A Beautiful Disposition
- I gave her a dollar
- Oh Why Mistress
- More crap
- The Casual Fall
- Untitled
- untitled
- New poem: "Pollution"
- Acoustique
- streetpunk song
- Drowned
- hearts apart
- Single Dream (please crit)
- Make your own mistake.. Critquee please
- NO TITLE, opinions are welcome
- Primitive Freedom (Crit4Crit)
- She - new song, please crit
- Nightmares
- Untitled song
- Semblance
- Individualistic by Nature
- Best Friend Syndrome
- "Heart on the window"
- Amaranthine
- World, All World People, People In the World Is Greatest!!
- Untitled Acoustic
- I need to learn how to not destroy my voice. plz help
- This Came to me in Bio class...
- She - updated (PLEASE READ AND CRIT!!!!)
- Apathy for the numb Crit please
- follow for the fire
- The End Is Near
- “Secstasy”
- My Forever Queen
- two kinds
- Got an idea for a song, but need YOUR CRIT!
- The various forms of chinese water torture- will match crit
- A Picture
- starting on a note of global fear.
- Corpocracy
- Dawning Lullibies
- crying breakup (plz crit)
- Red Coats
- Nothing Is Forever (rough)
- Left alone. Critque please.
- No, I Can't Swim Either
- Importance of rhyme and counting syllables
- need help with hardcore vocals
- Wow written in 4.5 minutes
- What song is this?!
- Physical Entity Typifying an Abstraction
- No title.... yet
- Dinner with a gentlemen
- Those Eyes... crit 4 crit... 1st song in weeks
- Saving you the trouble now.. Not a song, but an important warning..
- Nothin' to do. (please qritique)
- Loose Cuttings Of The Great Oak (poem)
- Coheed & Cambria Lyric
- First Post (Swift Hands Move)
- "Into The Deep" Please Crit
- Hickville
- Downtime is the name
- Inheritance
- Mic problems
- Soluble in tears
- Untitled Poem
- New song i wrote (help needed)
- Rebirth (comments greatly appreciated!)
- My bands newest song
- Untitled Any Potential?
- Modern Age
- Poem(song title)
- Dissent
- Fantasizing in Slow Motion. (In the Works)
- new song. needs title
- B I B
- Let me go
- addict life
- Heart for sale (my friends song)
- My Unchaste Heart (tell me what yethinks)
- "Cold Summer"
- question about songwriting
- Aggressive vocals
- song1
- I need help fixing these lyrics
- Congruent
- Only To Prolong the Heart-Touching
- We are sinking ships
- Unfinished Thing, help is welcome
- Oceans apart
- Valid circumstance
- Thralldom
- Random song being made exclusively for this post
- headbang the pain away
- We are all behind the jesters
- Underneath The Ink In Our Skin
- no one cares about you (title pending, cuz its real lame)
- Selena the Great
- advice on this song: Simple Pleasures
- needs a title
- Running Out Of Excuses For A Clockwork Routine (Crit 4 crit)
- 3 new metal vocal collaborations
- Day in the life of me( Madman )
- Caught on the Line (getting over it)
- Is This the Poison?
- Monica (crit for crit)
- work in process
- August Never forgets
- Anyone have these lyrics
- Drumming
- gun shy
- Yellow Paper
- First Song
- Guitar Leads
- Love Torn Us Under
- Empty and Wishing
- Critique and Compare (please)
- Radiating Like the Sun In It's Finest Hour
- Killing Swans
- New song: Crit for Crit, and title suggestions
- Death Line
- song2 (needs a title)
- ~Profit(phet)~
- olivia newton john and bill cosby's jello
- Autumn Poem
- 'My Last Surprise' crit 4 crit
- hiding behind a daisy petal
- Publishing your music
- Addicted to the Thought (Crit welcome!)
- uhh
- No title yet
- Quarter Dream - Reposted with music!
- i just wrote this
- Untitled | New
- My first piece in a while....comment please
- Give me MY kleenex
- The complecations of ascending
- Every once in a while, I get to be completely dishonest with myself.
- Thirdeye's tips for writing a great song! (new writers should read)
- Theatre in the Sky
- "Sodium Underwater"
- We Promise It's All For the Thrill
- This is one serious song///crit plz!
- 'Sheer Boredom at it's Finest: Part 2" crit 4 crit
- news Stand - Critque wanted.
- It Begins...
- Crash (Give In)
- Grill a Warfare
- My hardcore bands song 'crash and burn' crit for crit...
- Just tell me if my song flat out sucks
- Satanical Suicide -- Crit for crit?!
- Hazel eyes - Critque come on. I need it .
- The Salt and the Sand
- Suicidal Opposites -- not my type of music but thats how it turned out...
- nothing matters
- Ring The Bells – It’s The End (and we were rebels to the end)
- moving on
- First time, crit's are welcomed
- Unfamiliar Self
- First shot at lyrics...go easy
- Placid Lake, MT (treason through the seasons)
- "Et Tu" (mark 2)
- something new
- Genuine Dreams of the Midwest
- The Jibber Song
- Opinion on my song please
- first post song called wasted season cfc
- Last minute song writing/producing help
- Fav Song
- Ideal for: Svart Målade Husvägg
- Attempt Two
- "Cut me Deep" plz critique
- Unforgotten past
- wutever i thought id take another stab at it
- The Extra's Last Line
- hey guys help
- The Blade and the Fate of Man
- Manimal Kingdom
- Screenplay of the Idyllic Country [Crit Please]
- There is...
- Candi
- The Trashed Fantasy is the Ending to the Tragedy
- Who I Am (Actual Song is posted as well) Crit to be crit.
- Sometimes...
- Help with these lyrics please.
- 2 songs I've made, please rate/crit
- First Song.. Criticism taken
- Confided
- Gentle Raper
- First Song In A while, Honest opinions, and how to end it please.
- pictures in my head
- Needs a title and possibly some help
- heaven can't wait for me
- Nerds
- Eat Dirt
- Corny Song - need help finishing
- When You're Walking on Bodies, the Holocaust is Over and You Starve - c fo' c
- Naked Flame
- Syringes and spoons
- Powers that Be (feedback welcomed)
- Slow Motion
- A Song. Haven't really thought of a name yet
- Your Cure c4c (leave a link please)
- Song-Please Crit
- Swan Song (Originally Eat Dirt)
- A Few Words From The Hidden
- All fall down...
- Vanquish-crit 4 crit
- The Black Balloon
- Mi dulce, amada Carolina
- Finding Me - First Song, Comments Appreciated
- Cold-Hearted Remorse
- Happiness Revisited
- White/Grey/Black
- The Sun Fights, the Sun Crys, the Sun Lights, the Sun Dies
- A State of Need
- I'
- "A friend or more" (not finished)
- Sumthin funky for the junkie ( re-write of s&s)
- 'The Way You Looked at Me' crit 4 crit
- New song (untitled)
- Sleep Is A Civil War Between The Weight On My Eyelids And The Corpse In My Bed Wa...
- The Love Life Of A Flame
- The storyline
- poppies in october.
- mildew-poison
- and so on......
- Some lyrics I wrote
- 2 new songs, crit for crit
- be-raped
- First song
- Death on the edge of a knife
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