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  1. Disappearing Ink..........Crit4Crit
  2. - Conversations in Short Sleeves and Blue Flip-flops –
  3. Halogenic Misery (will gladly C4C)
  4. Night Eyes Glisten
  5. how do i write like sonic youth
  6. Smile...
  7. Butterfly - please crit.
  8. Time To Die
  9. Drunk - pleaseee crit.
  10. Wouldn't she notice the screw in her back?
  11. Vulnerable
  12. New song, no title yet.
  13. first post here
  14. inspiration
  15. I Exist (I Think?)
  16. Rock and roll "will match crit"
  17. song about wal-mart...crit 4 crit
  18. Withering Away (C4C)
  19. Nobody Knows
  20. That Night
  21. cause and effect
  22. trip "will match crit"
  23. something to easy your aching hearts
  24. I learned tonight....
  25. Yearning
  26. If your eyes are closed, it's not real.
  27. it needs some work but please tell me what you think!
  28. Lonely Room
  29. Reason of Doubt
  30. Ring Factory
  31. Forbearing (C4C)
  32. ill crit for crit please :)
  33. Back from hiatus... with a song called "Daily."
  34. Across the Pond is Clarity (Crit for crit)
  35. Monster - poem
  36. The Philadelphia Experiment
  37. Stop, drop and roll honey - Crit for crit
  38. The best years of our lives
  39. Things you can't buy
  40. PLace by the roses
  41. Default please crit
  42. Untitled
  43. Distorted Memories, my epic
  44. Zephania
  45. Cardiovascular Opiates
  46. help plz
  47. Sweet girl (the drink story)
  48. Manhunt!
  49. The reapers touch
  50. this storm is my masterpiece
  51. Gentleman are best left impressed
  52. zen of screaming
  53. Burning Anger - Please Crit.
  54. What's Love... Without Danger?
  55. Smoking Is Bad For You - kinda weird
  56. voce help
  57. "Pinned" touched up
  58. Chasing Games
  59. Coming Back To Life
  60. Smoke Signal
  61. Need help FAST!!
  62. River (crit for a crit)
  63. asdfasdfasdf
  64. Resonate
  65. need help in song writing
  66. Voice of Karma (redefine)
  67. Untitled (I swear I will match your crit)
  68. Lovers don't break up, they tear up (crit for crit)
  69. Onions, do they make you cry?
  70. Do you care about rhymes ?
  71. I know i was never quite what you bargained for.
  72. Sheila's not a madman
  73. ten cent love song
  74. new accoustic song titled "apreciation to music" (crits please) ill crit u back
  75. Golden Girl in a Plastic Box
  76. Some Lyricals...
  77. Fragments of a Nightmare...
  78. Who is Somoyua? (Crit 4 Crit)
  79. voice atmospheres?
  80. "This Medication Needs a Cure"
  81. Twisted Space Phenomena
  82. Let's put this conversation on ice.
  83. Angry letter to nestle - mark 2
  84. "narrow minded fools", ill crit for crit :)
  85. Paths
  86. Voices
  87. Drug Me
  88. A Social Crisis Song: Dead-End Curriculum
  89. "Served on the server" crit plz
  90. Your Window
  91. First Time Songwriter, criticism please
  92. Spineless
  93. Follow Her To Vegas
  94. Church Street
  95. My title sucked. Care to help?
  96. untitled plz crit
  97. Some Story This Is
  98. Scarecrow
  99. Help Me Please
  100. "KARENS Diary"
  101. ATTN S&L: Your input is needed for the future of this forum!(On the issue of S&L mod)
  102. Clarity of Static
  103. Natalie
  104. Confused In Life (C4C)
  105. Got Lyrics?
  106. "The world We see" Ill crit for crit as always :)
  107. Without Warning
  108. Zieg Hail
  109. Were we born to die?
  110. Spiders go to hell crit4crit
  111. Sixth Deliver
  112. Blood Red, some... different... lyrics.
  113. Scalpals and Smalltalk
  114. Couple Of My Friend's Lyrics
  115. Peace is not chaos
  116. ATTN: S&L etiquette guide, read before you post
  117. Yikes...
  118. Original Lyrics
  119. Inhale The Earth
  120. want me need me know me show me
  121. sorry i cheated on you
  122. Infinite Darkness
  123. Lost.
  124. Despondent Minds Cloudy Haze
  125. separation anxiety
  126. That's a little more time inside your head.
  127. Happy Chance
  128. 3 and a Fork
  129. Cry it out
  130. Wasted Time
  131. Dolls
  132. The Two in the Corduroy Jackets
  133. no place in particular (dream-inspired poem)
  134. the neon starlight
  135. cleansing the filth
  136. God Forsaken Eyes C4C
  137. 'EVERYONE' please crit.
  138. what's the meaning game
  139. Derailed, a fun metal song
  140. Bleeding Trees in the Mist
  141. not sure if this belongs in this forum,
  142. A Song With Meaning!!!!!
  143. Steel resides
  144. Can I Sing
  145. "Never meant to shine" ill crit for crit as always :)
  146. Take a look around
  147. Mad Props for Pops
  148. “So many love letters should just say ‘I hate you’”
  149. Can't Buy The Bomb.
  150. Steven - read it *shakes fist at you*
  151. Yikes.
  152. Grunge/Punk songs
  153. The Pine Needle
  154. Freakin' sweet! Haha, read it! C4C
  155. Ethereal conspiracy - you know the drill, crit for crit
  156. Manipulated Light
  157. Alarm-Crit 4 Crit please
  158. some new recordings/new album
  159. 2 poems(crit4crit)
  160. The Warmth
  161. Billy Has A Mohawk
  162. someone like to comment an italian glam song?
  163. Happy ending
  164. Manipulated Light (finished version) c4c
  165. My first song
  166. Jonny's tale - No brainer punk song, crit for crit
  167. Condemned
  168. new song, no title yet
  169. "Untitled" my brand new song.. CRIT and I'll crit back.
  170. Our wick is burning low
  171. Better Things
  172. Delete thread
  173. Just a new name
  174. A Dark And Lonely Road (C4C) ...yep
  175. poem / song maybe?
  176. not pure
  177. Variety of short punk songs.
  178. Untitled, as of now
  179. Follow me
  180. Demise
  181. The Demons of August
  182. The Balcony
  183. The Power Of Belief
  184. a kinetic jaw of asphalt
  185. "lost" ill crit for crit as always :)
  186. Postmortem
  187. Goodbye To Interlocking Fingers
  188. Exhale And Then Rise Again
  189. song i wrote a while back..
  190. Crusade
  191. How Pros compose
  192. It's the shadows
  193. Emo Lyrics Please Read
  194. Toxic - Crit for crit
  195. please help me analyse this song
  196. "her" C4C
  197. 1st post so be easy.
  198. Song Structure
  199. Am I Alone?
  200. Out of Sight
  201. Critique my lyrics
  202. Dear White Lady
  203. first song, please critique
  204. "If only" :)
  205. Vocals
  206. A Tree, A Car, A Night, A Regret
  207. Back Seat
  208. dug out an old one...
  209. 125 miles at 110 degrees true.
  210. the Gallows
  211. Feel High CRIT 4 CRIT
  212. Soaring Over Streetlights
  213. First song post. Song titled Reflection
  214. Never Out Gunned
  215. Limited Utopia, the perfect land
  216. First posted song, tell me what you think
  217. Last Light (older song rewritten) C4C
  218. Lights
  219. Morning Paper--new piece, crit 4 crit
  220. The Delinquency Song
  221. Take Your Hand In Mine
  222. Clouds Scream My Name
  223. Ad Infinitum Sentencing
  224. "Sparklez" <---Its a W.I.P.
  225. ya.. where do i improve
  226. Place by the roses Crit for crit, if it is a good crit
  227. Advice on a Song i wrote for my Band: SAFTEY AND COMFORT ARE CASUALTIES IN THIS PLACE
  228. Midnight Eyes
  229. Help Me PLEASE: Look what I done did
  230. contest winning lyrics
  231. Tea With The Moon
  232. 113
  233. no title
  234. ... A Portrait Upon Thee ...
  235. Help me with this one
  236. Cap d' Hostel Hostage (Crit for Crit)
  237. Gamblin' Man Blues
  238. She Sang of Shallow Hymnals
  239. Refraction(of my love)
  240. Color of you Love
  241. My Sunday's Best-NEW SONG, PLEASE CRITIQUE
  242. A Dollar Says I Don't Care....wip
  243. "passing out" :)
  244. Six Days! please view!
  245. singing and playing at the same time
  246. *Behemoth*
  247. Sober???? any 1 have a Alcoholic dad
  248. leet song for y'all.
  249. word salad
  250. We need help.....bad.