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  1. Drunk - pleaseee crit.
  2. Wouldn't she notice the screw in her back?
  3. Vulnerable
  4. New song, no title yet.
  5. first post here
  6. inspiration
  7. I Exist (I Think?)
  8. Rock and roll "will match crit"
  9. song about wal-mart...crit 4 crit
  10. Withering Away (C4C)
  11. Nobody Knows
  12. That Night
  13. cause and effect
  14. trip "will match crit"
  15. something to easy your aching hearts
  16. I learned tonight....
  17. Yearning
  18. If your eyes are closed, it's not real.
  19. it needs some work but please tell me what you think!
  20. Lonely Room
  21. Reason of Doubt
  22. Ring Factory
  23. Forbearing (C4C)
  24. ill crit for crit please :)
  25. Back from hiatus... with a song called "Daily."
  26. Across the Pond is Clarity (Crit for crit)
  27. Monster - poem
  28. The Philadelphia Experiment
  29. Stop, drop and roll honey - Crit for crit
  30. The best years of our lives
  31. Things you can't buy
  32. PLace by the roses
  33. Default please crit
  34. Untitled
  35. Distorted Memories, my epic
  36. Zephania
  37. Cardiovascular Opiates
  38. help plz
  39. Sweet girl (the drink story)
  40. Manhunt!
  41. The reapers touch
  42. this storm is my masterpiece
  43. Gentleman are best left impressed
  44. zen of screaming
  45. Burning Anger - Please Crit.
  46. What's Love... Without Danger?
  47. Smoking Is Bad For You - kinda weird
  48. voce help
  49. "Pinned" touched up
  50. Chasing Games
  51. Coming Back To Life
  52. Smoke Signal
  53. Need help FAST!!
  54. River (crit for a crit)
  55. asdfasdfasdf
  56. Resonate
  57. need help in song writing
  58. Voice of Karma (redefine)
  59. Untitled (I swear I will match your crit)
  60. Lovers don't break up, they tear up (crit for crit)
  61. Onions, do they make you cry?
  62. Do you care about rhymes ?
  63. I know i was never quite what you bargained for.
  64. Sheila's not a madman
  65. ten cent love song
  66. new accoustic song titled "apreciation to music" (crits please) ill crit u back
  67. Golden Girl in a Plastic Box
  68. Some Lyricals...
  69. Fragments of a Nightmare...
  70. Who is Somoyua? (Crit 4 Crit)
  71. voice atmospheres?
  72. "This Medication Needs a Cure"
  73. Twisted Space Phenomena
  74. Let's put this conversation on ice.
  75. Angry letter to nestle - mark 2
  76. "narrow minded fools", ill crit for crit :)
  77. Paths
  78. Voices
  79. Drug Me
  80. A Social Crisis Song: Dead-End Curriculum
  81. "Served on the server" crit plz
  82. Your Window
  83. First Time Songwriter, criticism please
  84. Spineless
  85. Follow Her To Vegas
  86. Church Street
  87. My title sucked. Care to help?
  88. untitled plz crit
  89. Some Story This Is
  90. Scarecrow
  91. Help Me Please
  92. "KARENS Diary"
  93. ATTN S&L: Your input is needed for the future of this forum!(On the issue of S&L mod)
  94. Clarity of Static
  95. Natalie
  96. Confused In Life (C4C)
  97. Got Lyrics?
  98. "The world We see" Ill crit for crit as always :)
  99. Without Warning
  100. Zieg Hail
  101. Were we born to die?
  102. Spiders go to hell crit4crit
  103. Sixth Deliver
  104. Blood Red, some... different... lyrics.
  105. Scalpals and Smalltalk
  106. Couple Of My Friend's Lyrics
  107. Peace is not chaos
  108. ATTN: S&L etiquette guide, read before you post
  109. Yikes...
  110. Original Lyrics
  111. Inhale The Earth
  112. want me need me know me show me
  113. sorry i cheated on you
  114. Infinite Darkness
  115. Lost.
  116. Despondent Minds Cloudy Haze
  117. separation anxiety
  118. That's a little more time inside your head.
  119. Happy Chance
  120. 3 and a Fork
  121. Cry it out
  122. Wasted Time
  123. Dolls
  124. The Two in the Corduroy Jackets
  125. no place in particular (dream-inspired poem)
  126. the neon starlight
  127. cleansing the filth
  128. God Forsaken Eyes C4C
  129. 'EVERYONE' please crit.
  130. what's the meaning game
  131. Derailed, a fun metal song
  132. Bleeding Trees in the Mist
  133. not sure if this belongs in this forum,
  134. A Song With Meaning!!!!!
  135. Steel resides
  136. Can I Sing
  137. "Never meant to shine" ill crit for crit as always :)
  138. Take a look around
  139. Mad Props for Pops
  140. “So many love letters should just say ‘I hate you’”
  141. Can't Buy The Bomb.
  142. Steven - read it *shakes fist at you*
  143. Yikes.
  144. Grunge/Punk songs
  145. The Pine Needle
  146. Freakin' sweet! Haha, read it! C4C
  147. Ethereal conspiracy - you know the drill, crit for crit
  148. Manipulated Light
  149. Alarm-Crit 4 Crit please
  150. some new recordings/new album
  151. 2 poems(crit4crit)
  152. The Warmth
  153. Billy Has A Mohawk
  154. someone like to comment an italian glam song?
  155. Happy ending
  156. Manipulated Light (finished version) c4c
  157. My first song
  158. Jonny's tale - No brainer punk song, crit for crit
  159. Condemned
  160. new song, no title yet
  161. "Untitled" my brand new song.. CRIT and I'll crit back.
  162. Our wick is burning low
  163. Better Things
  164. Delete thread
  165. Just a new name
  166. A Dark And Lonely Road (C4C) ...yep
  167. poem / song maybe?
  168. not pure
  169. Variety of short punk songs.
  170. Untitled, as of now
  171. Follow me
  172. Demise
  173. The Demons of August
  174. The Balcony
  175. The Power Of Belief
  176. a kinetic jaw of asphalt
  177. "lost" ill crit for crit as always :)
  178. Postmortem
  179. Goodbye To Interlocking Fingers
  180. Exhale And Then Rise Again
  181. song i wrote a while back..
  182. Crusade
  183. How Pros compose
  184. It's the shadows
  185. Emo Lyrics Please Read
  186. Toxic - Crit for crit
  187. please help me analyse this song
  188. "her" C4C
  189. 1st post so be easy.
  190. Song Structure
  191. Am I Alone?
  192. Out of Sight
  193. Critique my lyrics
  194. Dear White Lady
  195. first song, please critique
  196. "If only" :)
  197. Vocals
  198. A Tree, A Car, A Night, A Regret
  199. Back Seat
  200. dug out an old one...
  201. 125 miles at 110 degrees true.
  202. the Gallows
  203. Feel High CRIT 4 CRIT
  204. Soaring Over Streetlights
  205. First song post. Song titled Reflection
  206. Never Out Gunned
  207. Limited Utopia, the perfect land
  208. First posted song, tell me what you think
  209. Last Light (older song rewritten) C4C
  210. Lights
  211. Morning Paper--new piece, crit 4 crit
  212. The Delinquency Song
  213. Take Your Hand In Mine
  214. Clouds Scream My Name
  215. Ad Infinitum Sentencing
  216. "Sparklez" <---Its a W.I.P.
  217. ya.. where do i improve
  218. Place by the roses Crit for crit, if it is a good crit
  219. Advice on a Song i wrote for my Band: SAFTEY AND COMFORT ARE CASUALTIES IN THIS PLACE
  220. Midnight Eyes
  221. Help Me PLEASE: Look what I done did
  222. contest winning lyrics
  223. Tea With The Moon
  224. 113
  225. no title
  226. ... A Portrait Upon Thee ...
  227. Help me with this one
  228. Cap d' Hostel Hostage (Crit for Crit)
  229. Gamblin' Man Blues
  230. She Sang of Shallow Hymnals
  231. Refraction(of my love)
  232. Color of you Love
  233. My Sunday's Best-NEW SONG, PLEASE CRITIQUE
  234. A Dollar Says I Don't Care....wip
  235. "passing out" :)
  236. Six Days! please view!
  237. singing and playing at the same time
  238. *Behemoth*
  239. Sober???? any 1 have a Alcoholic dad
  240. leet song for y'all.
  241. word salad
  242. We need help.....bad.
  243. Untitled, written for a friend
  244. The Perfect Color White
  245. favorite themes?
  246. Electric Reincarnation
  247. i need help finding lyrics
  248. The First Breath of Autumn
  249. A whale C o c k for a chicken's C u n t
  250. Soul Of A Vampire