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  1. - Conversations in Short Sleeves and Blue Flip-flops –
  2. Halogenic Misery (will gladly C4C)
  3. Night Eyes Glisten
  4. how do i write like sonic youth
  5. Smile...
  6. Butterfly - please crit.
  7. Time To Die
  8. Drunk - pleaseee crit.
  9. Wouldn't she notice the screw in her back?
  10. Vulnerable
  11. New song, no title yet.
  12. first post here
  13. inspiration
  14. I Exist (I Think?)
  15. Rock and roll "will match crit"
  16. song about wal-mart...crit 4 crit
  17. Withering Away (C4C)
  18. Nobody Knows
  19. That Night
  20. cause and effect
  21. trip "will match crit"
  22. something to easy your aching hearts
  23. I learned tonight....
  24. Yearning
  25. If your eyes are closed, it's not real.
  26. it needs some work but please tell me what you think!
  27. Lonely Room
  28. Reason of Doubt
  29. Ring Factory
  30. Forbearing (C4C)
  31. ill crit for crit please :)
  32. Back from hiatus... with a song called "Daily."
  33. Across the Pond is Clarity (Crit for crit)
  34. Monster - poem
  35. The Philadelphia Experiment
  36. Stop, drop and roll honey - Crit for crit
  37. The best years of our lives
  38. Things you can't buy
  39. PLace by the roses
  40. Default please crit
  41. Untitled
  42. Distorted Memories, my epic
  43. Zephania
  44. Cardiovascular Opiates
  45. help plz
  46. Sweet girl (the drink story)
  47. Manhunt!
  48. The reapers touch
  49. this storm is my masterpiece
  50. Gentleman are best left impressed
  51. zen of screaming
  52. Burning Anger - Please Crit.
  53. What's Love... Without Danger?
  54. Smoking Is Bad For You - kinda weird
  55. voce help
  56. "Pinned" touched up
  57. Chasing Games
  58. Coming Back To Life
  59. Smoke Signal
  60. Need help FAST!!
  61. River (crit for a crit)
  62. asdfasdfasdf
  63. Resonate
  64. need help in song writing
  65. Voice of Karma (redefine)
  66. Untitled (I swear I will match your crit)
  67. Lovers don't break up, they tear up (crit for crit)
  68. Onions, do they make you cry?
  69. Do you care about rhymes ?
  70. I know i was never quite what you bargained for.
  71. Sheila's not a madman
  72. ten cent love song
  73. new accoustic song titled "apreciation to music" (crits please) ill crit u back
  74. Golden Girl in a Plastic Box
  75. Some Lyricals...
  76. Fragments of a Nightmare...
  77. Who is Somoyua? (Crit 4 Crit)
  78. voice atmospheres?
  79. "This Medication Needs a Cure"
  80. Twisted Space Phenomena
  81. Let's put this conversation on ice.
  82. Angry letter to nestle - mark 2
  83. "narrow minded fools", ill crit for crit :)
  84. Paths
  85. Voices
  86. Drug Me
  87. A Social Crisis Song: Dead-End Curriculum
  88. "Served on the server" crit plz
  89. Your Window
  90. First Time Songwriter, criticism please
  91. Spineless
  92. Follow Her To Vegas
  93. Church Street
  94. My title sucked. Care to help?
  95. untitled plz crit
  96. Some Story This Is
  97. Scarecrow
  98. Help Me Please
  99. "KARENS Diary"
  100. ATTN S&L: Your input is needed for the future of this forum!(On the issue of S&L mod)
  101. Clarity of Static
  102. Natalie
  103. Confused In Life (C4C)
  104. Got Lyrics?
  105. "The world We see" Ill crit for crit as always :)
  106. Without Warning
  107. Zieg Hail
  108. Were we born to die?
  109. Spiders go to hell crit4crit
  110. Sixth Deliver
  111. Blood Red, some... different... lyrics.
  112. Scalpals and Smalltalk
  113. Couple Of My Friend's Lyrics
  114. Peace is not chaos
  115. ATTN: S&L etiquette guide, read before you post
  116. Yikes...
  117. Original Lyrics
  118. Inhale The Earth
  119. want me need me know me show me
  120. sorry i cheated on you
  121. Infinite Darkness
  122. Lost.
  123. Despondent Minds Cloudy Haze
  124. separation anxiety
  125. That's a little more time inside your head.
  126. Happy Chance
  127. 3 and a Fork
  128. Cry it out
  129. Wasted Time
  130. Dolls
  131. The Two in the Corduroy Jackets
  132. no place in particular (dream-inspired poem)
  133. the neon starlight
  134. cleansing the filth
  135. God Forsaken Eyes C4C
  136. 'EVERYONE' please crit.
  137. what's the meaning game
  138. Derailed, a fun metal song
  139. Bleeding Trees in the Mist
  140. not sure if this belongs in this forum,
  141. A Song With Meaning!!!!!
  142. Steel resides
  143. Can I Sing
  144. "Never meant to shine" ill crit for crit as always :)
  145. Take a look around
  146. Mad Props for Pops
  147. “So many love letters should just say ‘I hate you’”
  148. Can't Buy The Bomb.
  149. Steven - read it *shakes fist at you*
  150. Yikes.
  151. Grunge/Punk songs
  152. The Pine Needle
  153. Freakin' sweet! Haha, read it! C4C
  154. Ethereal conspiracy - you know the drill, crit for crit
  155. Manipulated Light
  156. Alarm-Crit 4 Crit please
  157. some new recordings/new album
  158. 2 poems(crit4crit)
  159. The Warmth
  160. Billy Has A Mohawk
  161. someone like to comment an italian glam song?
  162. Happy ending
  163. Manipulated Light (finished version) c4c
  164. My first song
  165. Jonny's tale - No brainer punk song, crit for crit
  166. Condemned
  167. new song, no title yet
  168. "Untitled" my brand new song.. CRIT and I'll crit back.
  169. Our wick is burning low
  170. Better Things
  171. Delete thread
  172. Just a new name
  173. A Dark And Lonely Road (C4C) ...yep
  174. poem / song maybe?
  175. not pure
  176. Variety of short punk songs.
  177. Untitled, as of now
  178. Follow me
  179. Demise
  180. The Demons of August
  181. The Balcony
  182. The Power Of Belief
  183. a kinetic jaw of asphalt
  184. "lost" ill crit for crit as always :)
  185. Postmortem
  186. Goodbye To Interlocking Fingers
  187. Exhale And Then Rise Again
  188. song i wrote a while back..
  189. Crusade
  190. How Pros compose
  191. It's the shadows
  192. Emo Lyrics Please Read
  193. Toxic - Crit for crit
  194. please help me analyse this song
  195. "her" C4C
  196. 1st post so be easy.
  197. Song Structure
  198. Am I Alone?
  199. Out of Sight
  200. Critique my lyrics
  201. Dear White Lady
  202. first song, please critique
  203. "If only" :)
  204. Vocals
  205. A Tree, A Car, A Night, A Regret
  206. Back Seat
  207. dug out an old one...
  208. 125 miles at 110 degrees true.
  209. the Gallows
  210. Feel High CRIT 4 CRIT
  211. Soaring Over Streetlights
  212. First song post. Song titled Reflection
  213. Never Out Gunned
  214. Limited Utopia, the perfect land
  215. First posted song, tell me what you think
  216. Last Light (older song rewritten) C4C
  217. Lights
  218. Morning Paper--new piece, crit 4 crit
  219. The Delinquency Song
  220. Take Your Hand In Mine
  221. Clouds Scream My Name
  222. Ad Infinitum Sentencing
  223. "Sparklez" <---Its a W.I.P.
  224. ya.. where do i improve
  225. Place by the roses Crit for crit, if it is a good crit
  226. Advice on a Song i wrote for my Band: SAFTEY AND COMFORT ARE CASUALTIES IN THIS PLACE
  227. Midnight Eyes
  228. Help Me PLEASE: Look what I done did
  229. contest winning lyrics
  230. Tea With The Moon
  231. 113
  232. no title
  233. ... A Portrait Upon Thee ...
  234. Help me with this one
  235. Cap d' Hostel Hostage (Crit for Crit)
  236. Gamblin' Man Blues
  237. She Sang of Shallow Hymnals
  238. Refraction(of my love)
  239. Color of you Love
  240. My Sunday's Best-NEW SONG, PLEASE CRITIQUE
  241. A Dollar Says I Don't Care....wip
  242. "passing out" :)
  243. Six Days! please view!
  244. singing and playing at the same time
  245. *Behemoth*
  246. Sober???? any 1 have a Alcoholic dad
  247. leet song for y'all.
  248. word salad
  249. We need help.....bad.
  250. Untitled, written for a friend