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  1. Fragile
  2. perfect words/ help!!!
  3. Aurora Borealis
  4. Please Crit!! Untitled Song I like it so far
  5. Writing poetry from within someone else.
  6. A terrible twist of fate for Jimmy!
  7. Blacklight
  8. Just out of curiosity.....
  9. Old fart rock'n'roller
  10. I am starting to write my own stuff HELP
  11. Counterfeit
  12. Chicken
  13. Hello, i need some help
  14. Help Needed With Creativity Site
  15. Cicade de Deus
  16. Perfection (Pure Fiction)
  17. We Hid And They Sang From Afar
  18. [B]Metal songs. Ker-unch+Devil dance. Crit for crit.[/B]
  19. Metalish ballad I wrote a few years back
  20. Another lyric (not real cheery, but not a slit your wrist-er!)
  21. Please Crit my song
  22. 1st song since writers block
  23. My Song .. Give Suggestions
  24. Run
  25. Nothing incredibly but I needed to vent.
  26. "The Victim"
  27. Journal of the Unconscious - crit for crit
  28. The Buried And The Forgotten (Crit 4 Crit)
  29. Insane
  30. "Hog or Dog or Train", crit please
  31. "Crawl Out" Crit Me and Suggest
  32. A) Live in a dead car B) Sell Out, and our friends hate us
  33. ~Stampede~
  34. My throat hurts after I sing maiden...
  35. Life a second time around (crit please)
  36. New Lyric...ballad-ish.
  37. Hello! Remember me!
  38. As yet untitled
  39. Black
  40. I think "Hog, Dog or Train" needs a sequel!
  41. Sacrafice <read it
  42. FIrst Song - Warriors Story
  43. Foolish Girl. (crit please)
  44. my first song (no name yet)..plz comment
  45. Touch.... read please
  46. My newest song (crits please)
  47. Down here
  48. Moon's Lullaby (interpretations appreciated =))
  49. Insomnia
  50. First song, First post
  51. as yet untitled.
  52. Battle Hymn of the Intellegensia (crit for crit)
  53. Crit my song
  54. Untitled
  55. "Carbohydrates"
  56. Should I keep or trash?
  57. final revision(Finally)Critqforcritq
  58. my first song
  59. The Walking Dead - crit for crit and whatnot
  60. song that randomly cropped up
  61. ..I'm Going To Sleep, But Never Coming Awake..PLZ CRIT
  62. The boy who died from unrequited love
  63. An attemp at "songwriting"...
  64. Through the Tip of a Fountain Pen
  65. Tribute To Soldiers - Critique
  66. Untitled
  67. Every Hole (Please critic this one)
  68. First song (good morning)
  69. Title please
  70. Concept idea
  71. "Heart of Glass" (alright, lay into it...>_> )
  72. My Desire
  73. Abandoned Building
  74. Long Live
  75. Tell me what you think
  76. New England Dreams Part II
  77. "Bloodwords"...crit please
  78. Improving Vocals
  79. ~Unbuckled in the Driver's Seat~ (poem)
  80. Sunflower
  81. "On The Run"
  82. "see you"
  83. Please help me to improve a lyric
  84. A Breath Through Denial (Crit please)
  85. Girls do this
  86. My Letter
  87. Lyrics for a Metal Epic
  88. I Drive Better (long-time-no-post)
  89. Lyrics (READ) : Crit for Crit
  90. Newbie song Lyrics, crit4crit
  91. New song (READ) crit4crit
  92. Quarter Dream
  93. Black & White
  94. the eye of the storm
  95. ***Age Check***
  96. A Ballad Of A Necromantic - We all have skeletons in our closet...don't we?
  97. My Plenished Sorrow (Crit 4 Crit)
  98. Try and Hide (if you crit this, I WILL crit yours straight off)
  99. ideas that need to be put together
  100. Man-Eater
  101. Judgement Day
  102. Doe-like Brown Eyes Filled with Love
  103. A few short peoms/lyrics (is there potential?)
  104. Then you found it wasn't there?
  105. emptyness inside
  106. Please critique
  107. Tragedy Unfolding (crit 4 crit)
  108. "Adrenaline" crit please
  109. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  110. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  111. "Phantasm" - crit please
  112. My second song attempt-please crit
  113. Don't Believe Me (I will match your crit)
  114. Time Tells All Lies
  115. Alone In The Darkness (crit 4 crit)
  116. Train wreck
  117. Midnight Sunshine
  118. Repute
  119. Tales of the fallen and the faded -revised-crit and i'll crit back
  120. In Hell
  121. I Laugh
  122. Back, With Four Shorties
  123. possibly my best written song. u decide
  124. Closer to Home
  125. October
  126. Angels with dirty faces - My own worst enemy
  127. Withering Credence
  128. ???how to write songs???
  129. How to approach rock instrumentals?
  130. first song
  131. "Drowning" Please Crit
  132. Hey Po-rn Free!!!!
  133. State of Catalepsy (looking for some input for improvement)
  134. To Us
  135. "Collarbomb"
  136. Losers
  137. It's inevitable like an outpouring from a blackened sky.
  138. critique my lyrics please :)
  139. help help help
  140. "Would Anyone Come" - crit please
  141. "Torn Inside Out" crit 4 crit!
  142. [no title yet] crit4crit
  143. Never be yours.
  144. Crit early workings of lyrics
  145. a lovely dream
  146. lovely sylvia withers in these walls
  147. voice trianing
  148. Melody
  149. I Don't Want to be There
  150. Deal (not sure of this title)
  151. Give me romance, Give me denial
  152. Hold on to Green.
  153. Tree Dressed Like a Blackbird
  154. depending on perception
  155. Right Back Here (I loved...) listen and critique it
  156. Still Fighting (I used to be here years ago... haha IM BACK!)
  157. Las Cruces
  158. Modern Robin Hood
  159. There Is No Justice Here
  160. Shattered Faith (New Version)
  161. “I know how you hate long song titles almost as much as you hate having......"
  162. the woman in the attic
  163. "Shooting Star" please crit
  164. The Raven
  165. A Lover's Lament (Poetic Story)
  166. The Living Dead
  167. Check Please
  168. My apologize to those offended
  169. The inside - crt plzz
  170. Man on fire - crt pleeease :)
  171. The Victory Song
  172. The Shadows
  173. Executive Improval
  174. Hang 'em High
  175. E.
  176. Queen Mary
  177. Messages in the Dark
  178. Another One
  179. ?
  180. Angry letter me and a mate wrote to nestle
  181. Untitled
  182. Red Rain - A Rain to Wash the Sins Away
  183. My first song :)
  184. lost about
  185. Everyday
  186. One Way Conversation To The Mirror - Get Fůcking Over It
  187. "My song to you"...
  188. No No (I will match your crit)
  189. cool band
  190. L'homme sans une visage.
  191. No idea what to title it
  192. Swinging
  193. intro pleaze crit and give suggestions
  194. I fell in love with a robot.
  195. Tommy Pulled the Trigger (crit please)
  196. Were?
  197. Where are you?
  198. Dark Clouds
  199. Taken By Himself
  200. Cigarettes
  201. next part of song need title and crit
  202. Kissing Your Bat (crit is appreciated)
  203. The Change In Your Pockets
  204. Can't You Feel
  205. omg lyrics... Highway Man
  206. Keep your dreams alive !
  207. Broken Sunrise
  208. Ring Factory
  209. Nothing Nothing <Critique Please>
  210. Pennsylvania Avenue
  211. can you tell where i stole this from?
  212. “RE: Can't think of anything to put here….”
  213. Title goes here....
  214. A Rhetoric That Doesn't Match The Facts Presented
  215. this is a short accoustic song i wrote. few lyrics but good instrumental parts,crits?
  216. Missionary Tea
  217. Dear Jade- the song crit pleasee! Dear Jade
  218. Wasted
  219. Give it some time Crit 4 Crit plz!!!
  220. now
  221. singing and playing
  222. love it
  223. How to write instrumentals.....
  224. Oblivion (The Observatory)
  225. Running away to black paradise
  226. Loway tunnel
  227. There's one tree left, let's start a fire
  228. Pinned
  229. Ahem...please crit! (C4C)
  230. This is not my Society
  231. End, Sweet End
  232. End, Sweet End
  233. Uphill Battle
  234. Out of Sight
  235. Different Type of SONG!
  236. To speak...
  237. Are you Listening?
  238. Blue Eyed Baby
  239. Untitled (crit please)
  240. Tragic Heights
  241. Need help with a song.
  242. Your Gonna Have To Ask
  243. Disappearing Ink..........Crit4Crit
  244. - Conversations in Short Sleeves and Blue Flip-flops –
  245. Halogenic Misery (will gladly C4C)
  246. Night Eyes Glisten
  247. how do i write like sonic youth
  248. Smile...
  249. Butterfly - please crit.
  250. Time To Die