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  1. alaSKA
  2. Silent Forever
  3. Incinerate
  4. Highly Contagious (Crit 4 Crit) check it
  5. Question 'bout beat
  6. School days need crit please
  7. Shell of a Surgeon
  8. Fragile
  9. perfect words/ help!!!
  10. Aurora Borealis
  11. Please Crit!! Untitled Song I like it so far
  12. Writing poetry from within someone else.
  13. A terrible twist of fate for Jimmy!
  14. Blacklight
  15. Just out of curiosity.....
  16. Old fart rock'n'roller
  17. I am starting to write my own stuff HELP
  18. Counterfeit
  19. Chicken
  20. Hello, i need some help
  21. Help Needed With Creativity Site
  22. Cicade de Deus
  23. Perfection (Pure Fiction)
  24. We Hid And They Sang From Afar
  25. [B]Metal songs. Ker-unch+Devil dance. Crit for crit.[/B]
  26. Metalish ballad I wrote a few years back
  27. Another lyric (not real cheery, but not a slit your wrist-er!)
  28. Please Crit my song
  29. 1st song since writers block
  30. My Song .. Give Suggestions
  31. Run
  32. Nothing incredibly but I needed to vent.
  33. "The Victim"
  34. Journal of the Unconscious - crit for crit
  35. The Buried And The Forgotten (Crit 4 Crit)
  36. Insane
  37. "Hog or Dog or Train", crit please
  38. "Crawl Out" Crit Me and Suggest
  39. A) Live in a dead car B) Sell Out, and our friends hate us
  40. ~Stampede~
  41. My throat hurts after I sing maiden...
  42. Life a second time around (crit please)
  43. New Lyric...ballad-ish.
  44. Hello! Remember me!
  45. As yet untitled
  46. Black
  47. I think "Hog, Dog or Train" needs a sequel!
  48. Sacrafice <read it
  49. FIrst Song - Warriors Story
  50. Foolish Girl. (crit please)
  51. my first song (no name yet)..plz comment
  52. Touch.... read please
  53. My newest song (crits please)
  54. Down here
  55. Moon's Lullaby (interpretations appreciated =))
  56. Insomnia
  57. First song, First post
  58. as yet untitled.
  59. Battle Hymn of the Intellegensia (crit for crit)
  60. Crit my song
  61. Untitled
  62. "Carbohydrates"
  63. Should I keep or trash?
  64. final revision(Finally)Critqforcritq
  65. my first song
  66. The Walking Dead - crit for crit and whatnot
  67. song that randomly cropped up
  68. ..I'm Going To Sleep, But Never Coming Awake..PLZ CRIT
  69. The boy who died from unrequited love
  70. An attemp at "songwriting"...
  71. Through the Tip of a Fountain Pen
  72. Tribute To Soldiers - Critique
  73. Untitled
  74. Every Hole (Please critic this one)
  75. First song (good morning)
  76. Title please
  77. Concept idea
  78. "Heart of Glass" (alright, lay into it...>_> )
  79. My Desire
  80. Abandoned Building
  81. Long Live
  82. Tell me what you think
  83. New England Dreams Part II
  84. "Bloodwords"...crit please
  85. Improving Vocals
  86. ~Unbuckled in the Driver's Seat~ (poem)
  87. Sunflower
  88. "On The Run"
  89. "see you"
  90. Please help me to improve a lyric
  91. A Breath Through Denial (Crit please)
  92. Girls do this
  93. My Letter
  94. Lyrics for a Metal Epic
  95. I Drive Better (long-time-no-post)
  96. Lyrics (READ) : Crit for Crit
  97. Newbie song Lyrics, crit4crit
  98. New song (READ) crit4crit
  99. Quarter Dream
  100. Black & White
  101. the eye of the storm
  102. ***Age Check***
  103. A Ballad Of A Necromantic - We all have skeletons in our closet...don't we?
  104. My Plenished Sorrow (Crit 4 Crit)
  105. Try and Hide (if you crit this, I WILL crit yours straight off)
  106. ideas that need to be put together
  107. Man-Eater
  108. Judgement Day
  109. Doe-like Brown Eyes Filled with Love
  110. A few short peoms/lyrics (is there potential?)
  111. Then you found it wasn't there?
  112. emptyness inside
  113. Please critique
  114. Tragedy Unfolding (crit 4 crit)
  115. "Adrenaline" crit please
  116. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  117. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  118. "Phantasm" - crit please
  119. My second song attempt-please crit
  120. Don't Believe Me (I will match your crit)
  121. Time Tells All Lies
  122. Alone In The Darkness (crit 4 crit)
  123. Train wreck
  124. Midnight Sunshine
  125. Repute
  126. Tales of the fallen and the faded -revised-crit and i'll crit back
  127. In Hell
  128. I Laugh
  129. Back, With Four Shorties
  130. possibly my best written song. u decide
  131. Closer to Home
  132. October
  133. Angels with dirty faces - My own worst enemy
  134. Withering Credence
  135. ???how to write songs???
  136. How to approach rock instrumentals?
  137. first song
  138. "Drowning" Please Crit
  139. Hey Po-rn Free!!!!
  140. State of Catalepsy (looking for some input for improvement)
  141. To Us
  142. "Collarbomb"
  143. Losers
  144. It's inevitable like an outpouring from a blackened sky.
  145. critique my lyrics please :)
  146. help help help
  147. "Would Anyone Come" - crit please
  148. "Torn Inside Out" crit 4 crit!
  149. [no title yet] crit4crit
  150. Never be yours.
  151. Crit early workings of lyrics
  152. a lovely dream
  153. lovely sylvia withers in these walls
  154. voice trianing
  155. Melody
  156. I Don't Want to be There
  157. Deal (not sure of this title)
  158. Give me romance, Give me denial
  159. Hold on to Green.
  160. Tree Dressed Like a Blackbird
  161. depending on perception
  162. Right Back Here (I loved...) listen and critique it
  163. Still Fighting (I used to be here years ago... haha IM BACK!)
  164. Las Cruces
  165. Modern Robin Hood
  166. There Is No Justice Here
  167. Shattered Faith (New Version)
  168. “I know how you hate long song titles almost as much as you hate having......"
  169. the woman in the attic
  170. "Shooting Star" please crit
  171. The Raven
  172. A Lover's Lament (Poetic Story)
  173. The Living Dead
  174. Check Please
  175. My apologize to those offended
  176. The inside - crt plzz
  177. Man on fire - crt pleeease :)
  178. The Victory Song
  179. The Shadows
  180. Executive Improval
  181. Hang 'em High
  182. E.
  183. Queen Mary
  184. Messages in the Dark
  185. Another One
  186. ?
  187. Angry letter me and a mate wrote to nestle
  188. Untitled
  189. Red Rain - A Rain to Wash the Sins Away
  190. My first song :)
  191. lost about
  192. Everyday
  193. One Way Conversation To The Mirror - Get Fůcking Over It
  194. "My song to you"...
  195. No No (I will match your crit)
  196. cool band
  197. L'homme sans une visage.
  198. No idea what to title it
  199. Swinging
  200. intro pleaze crit and give suggestions
  201. I fell in love with a robot.
  202. Tommy Pulled the Trigger (crit please)
  203. Were?
  204. Where are you?
  205. Dark Clouds
  206. Taken By Himself
  207. Cigarettes
  208. next part of song need title and crit
  209. Kissing Your Bat (crit is appreciated)
  210. The Change In Your Pockets
  211. Can't You Feel
  212. omg lyrics... Highway Man
  213. Keep your dreams alive !
  214. Broken Sunrise
  215. Ring Factory
  216. Nothing Nothing <Critique Please>
  217. Pennsylvania Avenue
  218. can you tell where i stole this from?
  219. “RE: Can't think of anything to put here….”
  220. Title goes here....
  221. A Rhetoric That Doesn't Match The Facts Presented
  222. this is a short accoustic song i wrote. few lyrics but good instrumental parts,crits?
  223. Missionary Tea
  224. Dear Jade- the song crit pleasee! Dear Jade
  225. Wasted
  226. Give it some time Crit 4 Crit plz!!!
  227. now
  228. singing and playing
  229. love it
  230. How to write instrumentals.....
  231. Oblivion (The Observatory)
  232. Running away to black paradise
  233. Loway tunnel
  234. There's one tree left, let's start a fire
  235. Pinned
  236. Ahem...please crit! (C4C)
  237. This is not my Society
  238. End, Sweet End
  239. End, Sweet End
  240. Uphill Battle
  241. Out of Sight
  242. Different Type of SONG!
  243. To speak...
  244. Are you Listening?
  245. Blue Eyed Baby
  246. Untitled (crit please)
  247. Tragic Heights
  248. Need help with a song.
  249. Your Gonna Have To Ask
  250. Disappearing Ink..........Crit4Crit