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- alaSKA
- Silent Forever
- Incinerate
- Highly Contagious (Crit 4 Crit) check it
- Question 'bout beat
- School days need crit please
- Shell of a Surgeon
- Fragile
- perfect words/ help!!!
- Aurora Borealis
- Please Crit!! Untitled Song I like it so far
- Writing poetry from within someone else.
- A terrible twist of fate for Jimmy!
- Blacklight
- Just out of curiosity.....
- Old fart rock'n'roller
- I am starting to write my own stuff HELP
- Counterfeit
- Chicken
- Hello, i need some help
- Help Needed With Creativity Site
- Cicade de Deus
- Perfection (Pure Fiction)
- We Hid And They Sang From Afar
- [B]Metal songs. Ker-unch+Devil dance. Crit for crit.[/B]
- Metalish ballad I wrote a few years back
- Another lyric (not real cheery, but not a slit your wrist-er!)
- Please Crit my song
- 1st song since writers block
- My Song .. Give Suggestions
- Run
- Nothing incredibly but I needed to vent.
- "The Victim"
- Journal of the Unconscious - crit for crit
- The Buried And The Forgotten (Crit 4 Crit)
- Insane
- "Hog or Dog or Train", crit please
- "Crawl Out" Crit Me and Suggest
- A) Live in a dead car B) Sell Out, and our friends hate us
- ~Stampede~
- My throat hurts after I sing maiden...
- Life a second time around (crit please)
- New Lyric...ballad-ish.
- Hello! Remember me!
- As yet untitled
- Black
- I think "Hog, Dog or Train" needs a sequel!
- Sacrafice <read it
- FIrst Song - Warriors Story
- Foolish Girl. (crit please)
- my first song (no name yet)..plz comment
- Touch.... read please
- My newest song (crits please)
- Down here
- Moon's Lullaby (interpretations appreciated =))
- Insomnia
- First song, First post
- as yet untitled.
- Battle Hymn of the Intellegensia (crit for crit)
- Crit my song
- Untitled
- "Carbohydrates"
- Should I keep or trash?
- final revision(Finally)Critqforcritq
- my first song
- The Walking Dead - crit for crit and whatnot
- song that randomly cropped up
- ..I'm Going To Sleep, But Never Coming Awake..PLZ CRIT
- The boy who died from unrequited love
- An attemp at "songwriting"...
- Through the Tip of a Fountain Pen
- Tribute To Soldiers - Critique
- Untitled
- Every Hole (Please critic this one)
- First song (good morning)
- Title please
- Concept idea
- "Heart of Glass" (alright, lay into it...>_> )
- My Desire
- Abandoned Building
- Long Live
- Tell me what you think
- New England Dreams Part II
- "Bloodwords"...crit please
- Improving Vocals
- ~Unbuckled in the Driver's Seat~ (poem)
- Sunflower
- "On The Run"
- "see you"
- Please help me to improve a lyric
- A Breath Through Denial (Crit please)
- Girls do this
- My Letter
- Lyrics for a Metal Epic
- I Drive Better (long-time-no-post)
- Lyrics (READ) : Crit for Crit
- Newbie song Lyrics, crit4crit
- New song (READ) crit4crit
- Quarter Dream
- Black & White
- the eye of the storm
- ***Age Check***
- A Ballad Of A Necromantic - We all have skeletons in our closet...don't we?
- My Plenished Sorrow (Crit 4 Crit)
- Try and Hide (if you crit this, I WILL crit yours straight off)
- ideas that need to be put together
- Man-Eater
- Judgement Day
- Doe-like Brown Eyes Filled with Love
- A few short peoms/lyrics (is there potential?)
- Then you found it wasn't there?
- emptyness inside
- Please critique
- Tragedy Unfolding (crit 4 crit)
- "Adrenaline" crit please
- "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
- "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
- "Phantasm" - crit please
- My second song attempt-please crit
- Don't Believe Me (I will match your crit)
- Time Tells All Lies
- Alone In The Darkness (crit 4 crit)
- Train wreck
- Midnight Sunshine
- Repute
- Tales of the fallen and the faded -revised-crit and i'll crit back
- In Hell
- I Laugh
- Back, With Four Shorties
- possibly my best written song. u decide
- Closer to Home
- October
- Angels with dirty faces - My own worst enemy
- Withering Credence
- ???how to write songs???
- How to approach rock instrumentals?
- first song
- "Drowning" Please Crit
- Hey Po-rn Free!!!!
- State of Catalepsy (looking for some input for improvement)
- To Us
- "Collarbomb"
- Losers
- It's inevitable like an outpouring from a blackened sky.
- critique my lyrics please :)
- help help help
- "Would Anyone Come" - crit please
- "Torn Inside Out" crit 4 crit!
- [no title yet] crit4crit
- Never be yours.
- Crit early workings of lyrics
- a lovely dream
- lovely sylvia withers in these walls
- voice trianing
- Melody
- I Don't Want to be There
- Deal (not sure of this title)
- Give me romance, Give me denial
- Hold on to Green.
- Tree Dressed Like a Blackbird
- depending on perception
- Right Back Here (I loved...) listen and critique it
- Still Fighting (I used to be here years ago... haha IM BACK!)
- Las Cruces
- Modern Robin Hood
- There Is No Justice Here
- Shattered Faith (New Version)
- “I know how you hate long song titles almost as much as you hate having......"
- the woman in the attic
- "Shooting Star" please crit
- The Raven
- A Lover's Lament (Poetic Story)
- The Living Dead
- Check Please
- My apologize to those offended
- The inside - crt plzz
- Man on fire - crt pleeease :)
- The Victory Song
- The Shadows
- Executive Improval
- Hang 'em High
- E.
- Queen Mary
- Messages in the Dark
- Another One
- ?
- Angry letter me and a mate wrote to nestle
- Untitled
- Red Rain - A Rain to Wash the Sins Away
- My first song :)
- lost about
- Everyday
- One Way Conversation To The Mirror - Get Fůcking Over It
- "My song to you"...
- No No (I will match your crit)
- cool band
- L'homme sans une visage.
- No idea what to title it
- Swinging
- intro pleaze crit and give suggestions
- I fell in love with a robot.
- Tommy Pulled the Trigger (crit please)
- Were?
- Where are you?
- Dark Clouds
- Taken By Himself
- Cigarettes
- next part of song need title and crit
- Kissing Your Bat (crit is appreciated)
- The Change In Your Pockets
- Can't You Feel
- omg lyrics... Highway Man
- Keep your dreams alive !
- Broken Sunrise
- Ring Factory
- Nothing Nothing <Critique Please>
- Pennsylvania Avenue
- can you tell where i stole this from?
- “RE: Can't think of anything to put here….”
- Title goes here....
- A Rhetoric That Doesn't Match The Facts Presented
- this is a short accoustic song i wrote. few lyrics but good instrumental parts,crits?
- Missionary Tea
- Dear Jade- the song crit pleasee! Dear Jade
- Wasted
- Give it some time Crit 4 Crit plz!!!
- now
- singing and playing
- love it
- How to write instrumentals.....
- Oblivion (The Observatory)
- Running away to black paradise
- Loway tunnel
- There's one tree left, let's start a fire
- Pinned
- Ahem...please crit! (C4C)
- This is not my Society
- End, Sweet End
- End, Sweet End
- Uphill Battle
- Out of Sight
- Different Type of SONG!
- To speak...
- Are you Listening?
- Blue Eyed Baby
- Untitled (crit please)
- Tragic Heights
- Need help with a song.
- Your Gonna Have To Ask
- Disappearing Ink..........Crit4Crit
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