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  1. New Lyrics- I Cant Do This
  2. alaSKA
  3. Silent Forever
  4. Incinerate
  5. Highly Contagious (Crit 4 Crit) check it
  6. Question 'bout beat
  7. School days need crit please
  8. Shell of a Surgeon
  9. Fragile
  10. perfect words/ help!!!
  11. Aurora Borealis
  12. Please Crit!! Untitled Song I like it so far
  13. Writing poetry from within someone else.
  14. A terrible twist of fate for Jimmy!
  15. Blacklight
  16. Just out of curiosity.....
  17. Old fart rock'n'roller
  18. I am starting to write my own stuff HELP
  19. Counterfeit
  20. Chicken
  21. Hello, i need some help
  22. Help Needed With Creativity Site
  23. Cicade de Deus
  24. Perfection (Pure Fiction)
  25. We Hid And They Sang From Afar
  26. [B]Metal songs. Ker-unch+Devil dance. Crit for crit.[/B]
  27. Metalish ballad I wrote a few years back
  28. Another lyric (not real cheery, but not a slit your wrist-er!)
  29. Please Crit my song
  30. 1st song since writers block
  31. My Song .. Give Suggestions
  32. Run
  33. Nothing incredibly but I needed to vent.
  34. "The Victim"
  35. Journal of the Unconscious - crit for crit
  36. The Buried And The Forgotten (Crit 4 Crit)
  37. Insane
  38. "Hog or Dog or Train", crit please
  39. "Crawl Out" Crit Me and Suggest
  40. A) Live in a dead car B) Sell Out, and our friends hate us
  41. ~Stampede~
  42. My throat hurts after I sing maiden...
  43. Life a second time around (crit please)
  44. New Lyric...ballad-ish.
  45. Hello! Remember me!
  46. As yet untitled
  47. Black
  48. I think "Hog, Dog or Train" needs a sequel!
  49. Sacrafice <read it
  50. FIrst Song - Warriors Story
  51. Foolish Girl. (crit please)
  52. my first song (no name yet)..plz comment
  53. Touch.... read please
  54. My newest song (crits please)
  55. Down here
  56. Moon's Lullaby (interpretations appreciated =))
  57. Insomnia
  58. First song, First post
  59. as yet untitled.
  60. Battle Hymn of the Intellegensia (crit for crit)
  61. Crit my song
  62. Untitled
  63. "Carbohydrates"
  64. Should I keep or trash?
  65. final revision(Finally)Critqforcritq
  66. my first song
  67. The Walking Dead - crit for crit and whatnot
  68. song that randomly cropped up
  69. ..I'm Going To Sleep, But Never Coming Awake..PLZ CRIT
  70. The boy who died from unrequited love
  71. An attemp at "songwriting"...
  72. Through the Tip of a Fountain Pen
  73. Tribute To Soldiers - Critique
  74. Untitled
  75. Every Hole (Please critic this one)
  76. First song (good morning)
  77. Title please
  78. Concept idea
  79. "Heart of Glass" (alright, lay into it...>_> )
  80. My Desire
  81. Abandoned Building
  82. Long Live
  83. Tell me what you think
  84. New England Dreams Part II
  85. "Bloodwords"...crit please
  86. Improving Vocals
  87. ~Unbuckled in the Driver's Seat~ (poem)
  88. Sunflower
  89. "On The Run"
  90. "see you"
  91. Please help me to improve a lyric
  92. A Breath Through Denial (Crit please)
  93. Girls do this
  94. My Letter
  95. Lyrics for a Metal Epic
  96. I Drive Better (long-time-no-post)
  97. Lyrics (READ) : Crit for Crit
  98. Newbie song Lyrics, crit4crit
  99. New song (READ) crit4crit
  100. Quarter Dream
  101. Black & White
  102. the eye of the storm
  103. ***Age Check***
  104. A Ballad Of A Necromantic - We all have skeletons in our closet...don't we?
  105. My Plenished Sorrow (Crit 4 Crit)
  106. Try and Hide (if you crit this, I WILL crit yours straight off)
  107. ideas that need to be put together
  108. Man-Eater
  109. Judgement Day
  110. Doe-like Brown Eyes Filled with Love
  111. A few short peoms/lyrics (is there potential?)
  112. Then you found it wasn't there?
  113. emptyness inside
  114. Please critique
  115. Tragedy Unfolding (crit 4 crit)
  116. "Adrenaline" crit please
  117. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  118. "Point Blank" (crit 4 crit)
  119. "Phantasm" - crit please
  120. My second song attempt-please crit
  121. Don't Believe Me (I will match your crit)
  122. Time Tells All Lies
  123. Alone In The Darkness (crit 4 crit)
  124. Train wreck
  125. Midnight Sunshine
  126. Repute
  127. Tales of the fallen and the faded -revised-crit and i'll crit back
  128. In Hell
  129. I Laugh
  130. Back, With Four Shorties
  131. possibly my best written song. u decide
  132. Closer to Home
  133. October
  134. Angels with dirty faces - My own worst enemy
  135. Withering Credence
  136. ???how to write songs???
  137. How to approach rock instrumentals?
  138. first song
  139. "Drowning" Please Crit
  140. Hey Po-rn Free!!!!
  141. State of Catalepsy (looking for some input for improvement)
  142. To Us
  143. "Collarbomb"
  144. Losers
  145. It's inevitable like an outpouring from a blackened sky.
  146. critique my lyrics please :)
  147. help help help
  148. "Would Anyone Come" - crit please
  149. "Torn Inside Out" crit 4 crit!
  150. [no title yet] crit4crit
  151. Never be yours.
  152. Crit early workings of lyrics
  153. a lovely dream
  154. lovely sylvia withers in these walls
  155. voice trianing
  156. Melody
  157. I Don't Want to be There
  158. Deal (not sure of this title)
  159. Give me romance, Give me denial
  160. Hold on to Green.
  161. Tree Dressed Like a Blackbird
  162. depending on perception
  163. Right Back Here (I loved...) listen and critique it
  164. Still Fighting (I used to be here years ago... haha IM BACK!)
  165. Las Cruces
  166. Modern Robin Hood
  167. There Is No Justice Here
  168. Shattered Faith (New Version)
  169. “I know how you hate long song titles almost as much as you hate having......"
  170. the woman in the attic
  171. "Shooting Star" please crit
  172. The Raven
  173. A Lover's Lament (Poetic Story)
  174. The Living Dead
  175. Check Please
  176. My apologize to those offended
  177. The inside - crt plzz
  178. Man on fire - crt pleeease :)
  179. The Victory Song
  180. The Shadows
  181. Executive Improval
  182. Hang 'em High
  183. E.
  184. Queen Mary
  185. Messages in the Dark
  186. Another One
  187. ?
  188. Angry letter me and a mate wrote to nestle
  189. Untitled
  190. Red Rain - A Rain to Wash the Sins Away
  191. My first song :)
  192. lost about
  193. Everyday
  194. One Way Conversation To The Mirror - Get Fůcking Over It
  195. "My song to you"...
  196. No No (I will match your crit)
  197. cool band
  198. L'homme sans une visage.
  199. No idea what to title it
  200. Swinging
  201. intro pleaze crit and give suggestions
  202. I fell in love with a robot.
  203. Tommy Pulled the Trigger (crit please)
  204. Were?
  205. Where are you?
  206. Dark Clouds
  207. Taken By Himself
  208. Cigarettes
  209. next part of song need title and crit
  210. Kissing Your Bat (crit is appreciated)
  211. The Change In Your Pockets
  212. Can't You Feel
  213. omg lyrics... Highway Man
  214. Keep your dreams alive !
  215. Broken Sunrise
  216. Ring Factory
  217. Nothing Nothing <Critique Please>
  218. Pennsylvania Avenue
  219. can you tell where i stole this from?
  220. “RE: Can't think of anything to put here….”
  221. Title goes here....
  222. A Rhetoric That Doesn't Match The Facts Presented
  223. this is a short accoustic song i wrote. few lyrics but good instrumental parts,crits?
  224. Missionary Tea
  225. Dear Jade- the song crit pleasee! Dear Jade
  226. Wasted
  227. Give it some time Crit 4 Crit plz!!!
  228. now
  229. singing and playing
  230. love it
  231. How to write instrumentals.....
  232. Oblivion (The Observatory)
  233. Running away to black paradise
  234. Loway tunnel
  235. There's one tree left, let's start a fire
  236. Pinned
  237. Ahem...please crit! (C4C)
  238. This is not my Society
  239. End, Sweet End
  240. End, Sweet End
  241. Uphill Battle
  242. Out of Sight
  243. Different Type of SONG!
  244. To speak...
  245. Are you Listening?
  246. Blue Eyed Baby
  247. Untitled (crit please)
  248. Tragic Heights
  249. Need help with a song.
  250. Your Gonna Have To Ask