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  1. Poetry - Writes of Passage
  2. Jack and the giant (stupid ditty thing PLEASE CRIT)
  3. Ghosts With Machetes
  4. 'Acousti-kali' (rubbish name I know)
  5. First Lesson Of Falling
  6. Calling in all crits: Lucid
  7. Random Beautiful
  8. 1st song. crit for crit
  9. just a poem that i started please crit
  10. Harsh comments welcome!!!
  11. Whats So Wrong With Me? (crit 4 crit)
  12. "Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
  13. Love hits harder in smaller amounts
  14. new song
  15. Baptabysmal
  16. High Speed Thriller
  17. A Flowering Succubus
  18. I'm Not Complaining
  19. Goodbye, Bumblebee, Goodbye
  20. Song meant for a Concept band (No name)
  21. [B]New Song Very Dark Crit 4 Crit[B]
  22. 'Ever get the feeling youv'e been had' - Crit 4 crit
  23. Ice Preserves
  24. Share Your Lyrics
  25. S**t Town
  26. S**t Town
  27. Not sure on a title. PLEASE CRIT
  28. 6 bananas
  29. Revised "Canyon City Blues" crit 4 crit
  30. The Battle We Fight Everyday
  31. 1st song. crit for crit
  32. Flamingo: Queen of the Skies
  33. Here's My Hand......
  34. Altered (Please crit)
  35. awake and dreaming
  36. song, crit for crit
  37. Space and Time
  38. Ghosts With Machetes, prt. 2
  39. Underneath Old Skies
  40. How far the Fall
  41. untitled song, please crit
  42. Newer Song, Again its Crit for Crit so leave a link.
  43. Counting Crows
  44. Where O Where?
  45. Me vs. Me
  46. first song need crit
  47. I am the unkept candle that got tipped, yeah that's me.
  48. The Mushroom Store
  49. My Latest(CritqForCritq)
  50. Burning Roads (crit 4 crit)
  51. Leave The Past Behind, please crit
  52. Music - a poem I wrote
  53. Please Review Our Song
  54. Please Review Our Song
  55. Bubblegum Western
  56. Time, the great healer
  57. Dance below the stars crit 4 crit
  58. Just Move On - Crit
  59. Berceuse - please crit
  60. Jump, jump (swing, swing)
  61. S**t Town ~Edited and Final Edition~ (crit for crit)
  62. Now let me tell you (First draft)
  63. Rebellion into $Money$
  64. When love met pain.. ( not finished yet.)
  65. Revised-"Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
  66. Depress Me
  67. In London - 6 part song
  68. The Bride of Tantalus
  69. Running From Myself - Crit
  70. Ode to Odium
  71. Coldfire
  72. this is my first song
  73. Let me tell you - revised
  74. Song: The Ridge of the Earth's Spine
  75. Two Ghosts - (crit for crit)
  76. Citizen #24
  77. Concept Song #2 (Unfinished)
  78. A Heartache to Kill
  79. a revenge songlike thing
  80. Second Best
  81. Bloodletting
  82. Song
  83. Black Box
  84. S**t Town (I Finally Got It Right!!!)
  85. No One's Ever Affected Me Like This
  86. New here First song Crit plz (Long Live the King)
  87. our first song
  88. New song crit 4 crit please leave comment about song
  89. Streetlight Sees You Fall
  90. Time and Time
  91. please crit
  92. Silicon pie
  93. under your smoking gun crit fo crit
  94. Dancing Isn't So Hard
  95. Ultimate Solution (Crit4Crit) ^^
  96. Song: Perfect Acting
  97. Goodbye Butterfly
  98. As Will I- New Lyrics Please Crit
  99. This is the storm you create.
  100. A little songy wongy.
  101. A question for singers
  102. First try. Please Critique
  103. lyrics and guitar rifs/melodies
  104. Revised song-please crit
  105. Passion Town
  106. before time slips away
  107. ASDA (first song pls - suggest/crit)
  108. untitled-please crit
  109. Fading Grace (please crit)
  110. something or other
  111. Singing Question (This is not a song)
  112. Betray My Humanity - Crit
  113. My first song-Of Vindictivity...
  114. Edibal Injury
  115. ******* (crit for a crit)
  116. A poem concerning child molestation
  117. Daniel, Please...
  118. 'He to whom the memories' - crit for crit
  119. American Dream (working title) - Crit Please!
  120. When Your Down (You Only Get Kicked Some More)
  121. Letter of Goodbye (crit please)
  122. New Song
  123. Final v. of "State of me" crit 4 crit
  124. Lonely Summer (crit for a crit)
  125. Untitled
  126. Help pleaseĦĦ
  127. Last stop for a man named Joe (V2)
  128. Place by the roses
  129. F**k Thought Road
  130. lyric trouble
  131. Where o Where? (revisions)
  132. Losing It All...
  133. corner of niagra (crit for a crit plz)
  134. my first song ...
  135. Anyone want to critique my song for me?
  136. Untitled (I miss you?) Crit for crit!
  137. Something about your eyes (Midwinter groove)
  138. Couple song starts, Please Crit.
  139. time is just a perception (crit me )
  140. My Black Metal voice
  141. Untitled (Crit for a Crit)
  142. ~Challenge~ 3 Weeks
  143. Wedding Disaster
  144. Beyond Repair (crit for crit)
  145. Holes, Maybe.
  146. Its a song
  147. untitled
  148. Cerebral Happenings In Fabricated Ambience
  149. Question.
  150. Perhaps with a little imagination, i'd hide beneath the floorboards.
  151. A Flood Filled With Tears
  152. Help With Singing
  153. A matress and a sharp object
  154. MEDS (haven't been on line in a while be gental) ha
  155. A work in progress..
  156. The Baby Song
  157. Five Chairs Elsewhere Aligned
  158. together when I'm gone
  159. Obliviousness
  160. SB (Crit 4 Crit)
  161. first song please critic
  162. Lavender Tainted
  163. The Unknown
  164. my song rate it !
  165. "Silent Screams" im back after almost 2 years!
  166. Left
  167. White Sails On The Black Horizon
  168. Sunny Day Ruin
  169. What do you think of this lyrics?
  170. My First Lyrical Post...
  171. Don't Wanna Deal With You Today
  172. Genuinely fake
  173. Behind enemy lines
  174. My Girl (soppy, romance blah!)
  175. Left on the bed (please critique)
  176. Wolf in a sheep cloth
  177. Electric Locks
  178. song for someone who you lost to a suicide
  179. sheer boredom at its finest: part 2 (crit 4 crit)
  180. "Seasons"
  181. war story
  182. Wishing Well
  183. "Live by Night"
  184. Gonna Getchu Boi (Part 2)(With Music)
  185. Stalker-ish song
  186. The Fire (crit 4 crit)
  187. Jimmy was a superhero
  188. A poem.
  189. Eulogy Of A Meaningless Flirtation
  190. "Hotel California" NOT A SONG
  191. Eek! Its A Serious Emo/rap Song!! Augh!!!! Save The Children!!!
  192. No title yet...
  193. Pictures can say a million words...crit for crit
  194. Voices
  195. New song CRIT PLZ
  196. Lyrics from the half-asleep version of me.
  197. One of my first songs, crit for crit
  198. Away
  199. Cloud of Tears
  200. This Lift Only Goes Up
  201. new chapbook out!
  202. White
  203. A Field of Granite Flowers
  204. I got the Taco Bell Blues
  205. total writers block, advice?
  206. first time to post a poem on here...
  207. Sketched out -- Drug and love induced song
  208. My Escape
  209. i got a cool new song i wrote
  210. New song, theme not of love,depression or death crit 4 crit
  211. Sleep Spindle. crit 4 crit
  212. Carboard Cut Out People (crit away)
  213. A short lyric
  214. (untitled) Crit please
  215. Reasons. (Revised)
  216. My latest(Revised)
  217. song, crit please.
  218. A song
  219. First Post...
  220. insomnia
  221. Mike question
  222. New song i wrote. i need criticizing please
  223. Lullaby (BUSTED, Plagarism Alert!!!)
  224. I'll See The World For You
  225. Pretty?
  226. The Teacher Stole My Motivation
  227. Use a Brother
  228. Genesis
  229. A Fallen Soldier.(new heavy song we wrote)
  230. Crit for Crit?
  231. awaiting eternity (a song my band is working on kinda opethish)
  232. The Family Next Door (Warning Explicit Content)
  233. Arrival & Departure
  234. Lark of the morning(critqforcritq)
  235. A Momentary Lapse of Psychedelic Drugs and Red Wine
  236. Rehabilitation
  237. Just a quick lil thing
  238. Please Rate My song "A Portrait Upon Thee"
  239. Nothing Lasts Forever
  240. Expectations - Critique It Plz
  241. Stand Up And Fight (crits please)
  242. Crit this lyric please ^^
  243. New Lyrics- I Cant Do This
  244. alaSKA
  245. Silent Forever
  246. Incinerate
  247. Highly Contagious (Crit 4 Crit) check it
  248. Question 'bout beat
  249. School days need crit please
  250. Shell of a Surgeon