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  1. We Promise, It’s All For the Thrill
  2. Colors In The Sky
  3. I Held An Angel
  4. Inside My Head (crit for crit) (please crit)
  5. New Song Please crit
  6. Poetry - Writes of Passage
  7. Jack and the giant (stupid ditty thing PLEASE CRIT)
  8. Ghosts With Machetes
  9. 'Acousti-kali' (rubbish name I know)
  10. First Lesson Of Falling
  11. Calling in all crits: Lucid
  12. Random Beautiful
  13. 1st song. crit for crit
  14. just a poem that i started please crit
  15. Harsh comments welcome!!!
  16. Whats So Wrong With Me? (crit 4 crit)
  17. "Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
  18. Love hits harder in smaller amounts
  19. new song
  20. Baptabysmal
  21. High Speed Thriller
  22. A Flowering Succubus
  23. I'm Not Complaining
  24. Goodbye, Bumblebee, Goodbye
  25. Song meant for a Concept band (No name)
  26. [B]New Song Very Dark Crit 4 Crit[B]
  27. 'Ever get the feeling youv'e been had' - Crit 4 crit
  28. Ice Preserves
  29. Share Your Lyrics
  30. S**t Town
  31. S**t Town
  32. Not sure on a title. PLEASE CRIT
  33. 6 bananas
  34. Revised "Canyon City Blues" crit 4 crit
  35. The Battle We Fight Everyday
  36. 1st song. crit for crit
  37. Flamingo: Queen of the Skies
  38. Here's My Hand......
  39. Altered (Please crit)
  40. awake and dreaming
  41. song, crit for crit
  42. Space and Time
  43. Ghosts With Machetes, prt. 2
  44. Underneath Old Skies
  45. How far the Fall
  46. untitled song, please crit
  47. Newer Song, Again its Crit for Crit so leave a link.
  48. Counting Crows
  49. Where O Where?
  50. Me vs. Me
  51. first song need crit
  52. I am the unkept candle that got tipped, yeah that's me.
  53. The Mushroom Store
  54. My Latest(CritqForCritq)
  55. Burning Roads (crit 4 crit)
  56. Leave The Past Behind, please crit
  57. Music - a poem I wrote
  58. Please Review Our Song
  59. Please Review Our Song
  60. Bubblegum Western
  61. Time, the great healer
  62. Dance below the stars crit 4 crit
  63. Just Move On - Crit
  64. Berceuse - please crit
  65. Jump, jump (swing, swing)
  66. S**t Town ~Edited and Final Edition~ (crit for crit)
  67. Now let me tell you (First draft)
  68. Rebellion into $Money$
  69. When love met pain.. ( not finished yet.)
  70. Revised-"Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
  71. Depress Me
  72. In London - 6 part song
  73. The Bride of Tantalus
  74. Running From Myself - Crit
  75. Ode to Odium
  76. Coldfire
  77. this is my first song
  78. Let me tell you - revised
  79. Song: The Ridge of the Earth's Spine
  80. Two Ghosts - (crit for crit)
  81. Citizen #24
  82. Concept Song #2 (Unfinished)
  83. A Heartache to Kill
  84. a revenge songlike thing
  85. Second Best
  86. Bloodletting
  87. Song
  88. Black Box
  89. S**t Town (I Finally Got It Right!!!)
  90. No One's Ever Affected Me Like This
  91. New here First song Crit plz (Long Live the King)
  92. our first song
  93. New song crit 4 crit please leave comment about song
  94. Streetlight Sees You Fall
  95. Time and Time
  96. please crit
  97. Silicon pie
  98. under your smoking gun crit fo crit
  99. Dancing Isn't So Hard
  100. Ultimate Solution (Crit4Crit) ^^
  101. Song: Perfect Acting
  102. Goodbye Butterfly
  103. As Will I- New Lyrics Please Crit
  104. This is the storm you create.
  105. A little songy wongy.
  106. A question for singers
  107. First try. Please Critique
  108. lyrics and guitar rifs/melodies
  109. Revised song-please crit
  110. Passion Town
  111. before time slips away
  112. ASDA (first song pls - suggest/crit)
  113. untitled-please crit
  114. The**OFFICIAL**Voice/Singing Help Thread
  115. Fading Grace (please crit)
  116. something or other
  117. Singing Question (This is not a song)
  118. Betray My Humanity - Crit
  119. My first song-Of Vindictivity...
  120. Edibal Injury
  121. ******* (crit for a crit)
  122. A poem concerning child molestation
  123. Daniel, Please...
  124. 'He to whom the memories' - crit for crit
  125. American Dream (working title) - Crit Please!
  126. When Your Down (You Only Get Kicked Some More)
  127. Letter of Goodbye (crit please)
  128. New Song
  129. Final v. of "State of me" crit 4 crit
  130. Lonely Summer (crit for a crit)
  131. Untitled
  132. Help please¡¡
  133. Last stop for a man named Joe (V2)
  134. Place by the roses
  135. F**k Thought Road
  136. lyric trouble
  137. Where o Where? (revisions)
  138. Losing It All...
  139. corner of niagra (crit for a crit plz)
  140. my first song ...
  141. Anyone want to critique my song for me?
  142. Untitled (I miss you?) Crit for crit!
  143. Something about your eyes (Midwinter groove)
  144. Couple song starts, Please Crit.
  145. time is just a perception (crit me )
  146. My Black Metal voice
  147. Untitled (Crit for a Crit)
  148. ~Challenge~ 3 Weeks
  149. Wedding Disaster
  150. Beyond Repair (crit for crit)
  151. Holes, Maybe.
  152. Its a song
  153. untitled
  154. Cerebral Happenings In Fabricated Ambience
  155. Question.
  156. What do you think of these lyrics?
  157. Perhaps with a little imagination, i'd hide beneath the floorboards.
  158. A Flood Filled With Tears
  159. Help With Singing
  160. A matress and a sharp object
  161. MEDS (haven't been on line in a while be gental) ha
  162. A work in progress..
  163. The Baby Song
  164. Five Chairs Elsewhere Aligned
  165. together when I'm gone
  166. Obliviousness
  167. SB (Crit 4 Crit)
  168. first song please critic
  169. Lavender Tainted
  170. The Unknown
  171. my song rate it !
  172. "Silent Screams" im back after almost 2 years!
  173. Left
  174. White Sails On The Black Horizon
  175. Sunny Day Ruin
  176. What do you think of this lyrics?
  177. My First Lyrical Post...
  178. Don't Wanna Deal With You Today
  179. Genuinely fake
  180. Behind enemy lines
  181. My Girl (soppy, romance blah!)
  182. Left on the bed (please critique)
  183. Wolf in a sheep cloth
  184. Electric Locks
  185. song for someone who you lost to a suicide
  186. sheer boredom at its finest: part 2 (crit 4 crit)
  187. "Seasons"
  188. war story
  189. Wishing Well
  190. "Live by Night"
  191. Gonna Getchu Boi (Part 2)(With Music)
  192. Stalker-ish song
  193. The Fire (crit 4 crit)
  194. Jimmy was a superhero
  195. A poem.
  196. Eulogy Of A Meaningless Flirtation
  197. "Hotel California" NOT A SONG
  198. Eek! Its A Serious Emo/rap Song!! Augh!!!! Save The Children!!!
  199. No title yet...
  200. Pictures can say a million words...crit for crit
  201. Voices
  202. New song CRIT PLZ
  203. Lyrics from the half-asleep version of me.
  204. One of my first songs, crit for crit
  205. Away
  206. Cloud of Tears
  207. This Lift Only Goes Up
  208. new chapbook out!
  209. White
  210. A Field of Granite Flowers
  211. I got the Taco Bell Blues
  212. total writers block, advice?
  213. first time to post a poem on here...
  214. Sketched out -- Drug and love induced song
  215. My Escape
  216. i got a cool new song i wrote
  217. New song, theme not of love,depression or death crit 4 crit
  218. Sleep Spindle. crit 4 crit
  219. Carboard Cut Out People (crit away)
  220. A short lyric
  221. testiment of stephen hawkins
  222. (untitled) Crit please
  223. Reasons. (Revised)
  224. My latest(Revised)
  225. song, crit please.
  226. A song
  227. First Post...
  228. insomnia
  229. Mike question
  230. New song i wrote. i need criticizing please
  231. Lullaby (BUSTED, Plagarism Alert!!!)
  232. I'll See The World For You
  233. Pretty?
  234. The Teacher Stole My Motivation
  235. Use a Brother
  236. Genesis
  237. A Fallen Soldier.(new heavy song we wrote)
  238. Crit for Crit?
  239. awaiting eternity (a song my band is working on kinda opethish)
  240. The Family Next Door (Warning Explicit Content)
  241. Arrival & Departure
  242. Lark of the morning(critqforcritq)
  243. A Momentary Lapse of Psychedelic Drugs and Red Wine
  244. Rehabilitation
  245. Just a quick lil thing
  246. Please Rate My song "A Portrait Upon Thee"
  247. Nothing Lasts Forever
  248. Expectations - Critique It Plz
  249. Stand Up And Fight (crits please)
  250. Crit this lyric please ^^