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- We Promise, It’s All For the Thrill
- Colors In The Sky
- I Held An Angel
- Inside My Head (crit for crit) (please crit)
- New Song Please crit
- Poetry - Writes of Passage
- Jack and the giant (stupid ditty thing PLEASE CRIT)
- Ghosts With Machetes
- 'Acousti-kali' (rubbish name I know)
- First Lesson Of Falling
- Calling in all crits: Lucid
- Random Beautiful
- 1st song. crit for crit
- just a poem that i started please crit
- Harsh comments welcome!!!
- Whats So Wrong With Me? (crit 4 crit)
- "Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
- Love hits harder in smaller amounts
- new song
- Baptabysmal
- High Speed Thriller
- A Flowering Succubus
- I'm Not Complaining
- Goodbye, Bumblebee, Goodbye
- Song meant for a Concept band (No name)
- [B]New Song Very Dark Crit 4 Crit[B]
- 'Ever get the feeling youv'e been had' - Crit 4 crit
- Ice Preserves
- Share Your Lyrics
- S**t Town
- S**t Town
- Not sure on a title. PLEASE CRIT
- 6 bananas
- Revised "Canyon City Blues" crit 4 crit
- The Battle We Fight Everyday
- 1st song. crit for crit
- Flamingo: Queen of the Skies
- Here's My Hand......
- Altered (Please crit)
- awake and dreaming
- song, crit for crit
- Space and Time
- Ghosts With Machetes, prt. 2
- Underneath Old Skies
- How far the Fall
- untitled song, please crit
- Newer Song, Again its Crit for Crit so leave a link.
- Counting Crows
- Where O Where?
- Me vs. Me
- first song need crit
- I am the unkept candle that got tipped, yeah that's me.
- The Mushroom Store
- My Latest(CritqForCritq)
- Burning Roads (crit 4 crit)
- Leave The Past Behind, please crit
- Music - a poem I wrote
- Please Review Our Song
- Please Review Our Song
- Bubblegum Western
- Time, the great healer
- Dance below the stars crit 4 crit
- Just Move On - Crit
- Berceuse - please crit
- Jump, jump (swing, swing)
- S**t Town ~Edited and Final Edition~ (crit for crit)
- Now let me tell you (First draft)
- Rebellion into $Money$
- When love met pain.. ( not finished yet.)
- Revised-"Using their Lives" CRIT 4 CRIT
- Depress Me
- In London - 6 part song
- The Bride of Tantalus
- Running From Myself - Crit
- Ode to Odium
- Coldfire
- this is my first song
- Let me tell you - revised
- Song: The Ridge of the Earth's Spine
- Two Ghosts - (crit for crit)
- Citizen #24
- Concept Song #2 (Unfinished)
- A Heartache to Kill
- a revenge songlike thing
- Second Best
- Bloodletting
- Song
- Black Box
- S**t Town (I Finally Got It Right!!!)
- No One's Ever Affected Me Like This
- New here First song Crit plz (Long Live the King)
- our first song
- New song crit 4 crit please leave comment about song
- Streetlight Sees You Fall
- Time and Time
- please crit
- Silicon pie
- under your smoking gun crit fo crit
- Dancing Isn't So Hard
- Ultimate Solution (Crit4Crit) ^^
- Song: Perfect Acting
- Goodbye Butterfly
- As Will I- New Lyrics Please Crit
- This is the storm you create.
- A little songy wongy.
- A question for singers
- First try. Please Critique
- lyrics and guitar rifs/melodies
- Revised song-please crit
- Passion Town
- before time slips away
- ASDA (first song pls - suggest/crit)
- untitled-please crit
- Fading Grace (please crit)
- something or other
- Singing Question (This is not a song)
- Betray My Humanity - Crit
- My first song-Of Vindictivity...
- Edibal Injury
- ******* (crit for a crit)
- A poem concerning child molestation
- Daniel, Please...
- 'He to whom the memories' - crit for crit
- American Dream (working title) - Crit Please!
- When Your Down (You Only Get Kicked Some More)
- Letter of Goodbye (crit please)
- New Song
- Final v. of "State of me" crit 4 crit
- Lonely Summer (crit for a crit)
- Untitled
- Help please¡¡
- Last stop for a man named Joe (V2)
- Place by the roses
- F**k Thought Road
- lyric trouble
- Where o Where? (revisions)
- Losing It All...
- corner of niagra (crit for a crit plz)
- my first song ...
- Anyone want to critique my song for me?
- Untitled (I miss you?) Crit for crit!
- Something about your eyes (Midwinter groove)
- Couple song starts, Please Crit.
- time is just a perception (crit me )
- My Black Metal voice
- Untitled (Crit for a Crit)
- ~Challenge~ 3 Weeks
- Wedding Disaster
- Beyond Repair (crit for crit)
- Holes, Maybe.
- Its a song
- untitled
- Cerebral Happenings In Fabricated Ambience
- Question.
- What do you think of these lyrics?
- Perhaps with a little imagination, i'd hide beneath the floorboards.
- A Flood Filled With Tears
- Help With Singing
- A matress and a sharp object
- MEDS (haven't been on line in a while be gental) ha
- A work in progress..
- The Baby Song
- Five Chairs Elsewhere Aligned
- together when I'm gone
- Obliviousness
- SB (Crit 4 Crit)
- first song please critic
- Lavender Tainted
- The Unknown
- my song rate it !
- "Silent Screams" im back after almost 2 years!
- Left
- White Sails On The Black Horizon
- Sunny Day Ruin
- What do you think of this lyrics?
- My First Lyrical Post...
- Don't Wanna Deal With You Today
- Genuinely fake
- Behind enemy lines
- My Girl (soppy, romance blah!)
- Left on the bed (please critique)
- Wolf in a sheep cloth
- Electric Locks
- song for someone who you lost to a suicide
- sheer boredom at its finest: part 2 (crit 4 crit)
- "Seasons"
- war story
- Wishing Well
- "Live by Night"
- Gonna Getchu Boi (Part 2)(With Music)
- Stalker-ish song
- The Fire (crit 4 crit)
- Jimmy was a superhero
- A poem.
- Eulogy Of A Meaningless Flirtation
- "Hotel California" NOT A SONG
- Eek! Its A Serious Emo/rap Song!! Augh!!!! Save The Children!!!
- No title yet...
- Pictures can say a million words...crit for crit
- Voices
- New song CRIT PLZ
- Lyrics from the half-asleep version of me.
- One of my first songs, crit for crit
- Away
- Cloud of Tears
- This Lift Only Goes Up
- new chapbook out!
- White
- A Field of Granite Flowers
- I got the Taco Bell Blues
- total writers block, advice?
- first time to post a poem on here...
- Sketched out -- Drug and love induced song
- My Escape
- i got a cool new song i wrote
- New song, theme not of love,depression or death crit 4 crit
- Sleep Spindle. crit 4 crit
- Carboard Cut Out People (crit away)
- A short lyric
- testiment of stephen hawkins
- (untitled) Crit please
- Reasons. (Revised)
- My latest(Revised)
- song, crit please.
- A song
- First Post...
- insomnia
- Mike question
- New song i wrote. i need criticizing please
- Lullaby (BUSTED, Plagarism Alert!!!)
- I'll See The World For You
- Pretty?
- The Teacher Stole My Motivation
- Use a Brother
- Genesis
- A Fallen Soldier.(new heavy song we wrote)
- Crit for Crit?
- awaiting eternity (a song my band is working on kinda opethish)
- The Family Next Door (Warning Explicit Content)
- Arrival & Departure
- Lark of the morning(critqforcritq)
- A Momentary Lapse of Psychedelic Drugs and Red Wine
- Rehabilitation
- Just a quick lil thing
- Please Rate My song "A Portrait Upon Thee"
- Nothing Lasts Forever
- Expectations - Critique It Plz
- Stand Up And Fight (crits please)
- Crit this lyric please ^^
- New Lyrics- I Cant Do This
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