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  1. We're Not Unbound
  2. Try again
  3. My first song CRIT FOR CRIT "UNTITLED"
  4. Let Me Tend 2 U (Underneath Your Cream)
  5. until I find you
  6. I Want to Have a Real Smile
  7. Crisis
  8. Something different
  9. Suicide of a Nymph
  10. Inescapable
  11. Waltz
  12. Need tips on writing a song (also crit this 1)
  13. The Rain Stick
  14. Cloud Shackles (You're a Hypocrite)
  15. An Old Joke
  16. Free
  17. Nothing Exeeds like excess
  18. living life by a fairy tale
  19. Screaming Pain(not quite finished)
  20. Hallmark (yes, I get it's kinda emo. Back off.)
  21. No working title, but please read (if you want)
  22. Dining with the Center of the Universe
  23. Falling In Love? (crit4crit)
  24. 'unladen swallow' First ever song (plz be gently)
  25. Not Convinced (crit-for-crit)
  26. Walk Away
  27. Need name for this song (also crit 4 crit)
  28. Is this a bad thing?.....
  29. Calling Out Screaming
  30. ahh my angry poem
  31. Shoot to Judge
  32. Hey it's thirdeye/ Believe
  33. My Muse has died
  34. Cant come up with a title
  35. Inspiration Page..
  36. Called In Sick With Envy
  37. no title (critq for critq)
  38. lusting for sally
  39. "Aria of Sorrow"
  40. Find this poem ---> Sandcastles
  41. Just Wait
  42. Goatsucker
  43. Going for a Swim
  44. "Death of a song writer" (u have to read this one)
  45. take it all
  46. Typical love poem (Release)
  47. Dull
  48. Worst Poem Ever. Complete Shat.
  49. Several shorts (Crit4Crit)
  50. Lord of The Flies
  51. Eva
  52. "Us v.s. Them (Taiwan v.s. Pakistan)"
  53. The fairies can keep my others, the wishes i'll never use. Crit for crit.
  54. In the Space Between Breaths (crit for crit)
  55. Blackness Strides
  56. made these up as i went along (crit 4 crit)
  57. pleas crit my song
  58. Vocals-Warming Up
  59. Winds of Revolution
  60. Help
  61. Poem/ Song Idea
  62. S&L File Transfer Thread
  63. Her Secret
  64. Angels smile
  65. overcome
  66. Defining Life backwards while walking into walls
  67. Marionettes (Crits Please)
  68. The Moon Over Minneapolis
  69. A.m.y.
  70. Lifeline
  71. Crit this and post a link and i'll give you a detailed critiscm.
  72. Spider (Crit for Crit)
  73. Follow You Down (Hit The Ground) - Please Crit
  74. Satisfy Yourself Lyrics
  75. Life is Rhythm
  76. Splatters words on a page
  77. Work in Progress
  78. some drafts, are any good?
  79. ATTN:mods, suggestion
  80. A Queen and a Fire
  81. Sea's Den
  82. Help the foreigner. Some language problems
  83. Maybe Just Maybe
  84. It's How Italy Polishes Their Shoes
  85. A King and a Dagger
  86. Revelations: The 6 Seals (Religious references ++)
  87. Paradise
  88. Creating an illusion of a 'chorus'
  89. Night Drive
  90. Southwest Rain Uprise (First one in here)
  91. The Storm
  92. Happy alone
  93. It's too late noow
  94. Closed Eye Visuals
  95. Your Deaf Mind
  96. first song
  97. Dawn of Deception (my latest lyrics)
  98. Perfect Alibi
  99. Armageddon's Battlefield-POETRY
  100. This Tower Isn't All That Tall
  101. begining of a new song crits appreciated
  102. "Temporary obsessions"
  103. "Hypnotised by Hurricanes"
  104. The Moon Isn't Made of Cheese Anymore (crit for crit)
  105. how to begin screaming
  106. the jerm
  107. The Nutmeg Country Blues
  108. They sang to us...
  109. Personification with Audio acompaniment
  110. Brought Up Right
  111. Im Stuck. HELP ME!
  112. A sad poem (thx 4 reading)
  113. Help!
  114. Development Ignites
  115. Comfortably Alone
  116. didnt see this is lyrics 101...
  117. Asunder
  118. Rose
  119. The World I Live In [please crit]
  120. final revision(Finally)
  121. The Extra's Last Line
  122. Rolling Crazy
  123. It will be worth it, i swear it will. Crit for crit.
  124. Why cant I write mellow :(
  125. Yob Culture
  126. Out of the Pink
  127. The Wall Must Fall (repost)
  128. Tonight Love Sparks With A Cigarette
  129. Let Go
  130. The Funeral Of Our Undying Rose
  131. Screams Under The Sour Mind
  132. What happens when all you can do is fall?
  133. I Hold You In My Arms
  134. First Song Posted Please Crit
  135. Can't Flow
  136. Frankly, We’d Prefer a Window Seat.
  137. Will someone critique this for me?
  138. Picturesque Facades Eclipse This Dance Routine
  139. Incygnus
  140. United We Fall (The System)
  141. The Soapbox
  142. long time no post check me out- Nobody Survives
  143. Hallway of fantasies
  144. Summer sky
  145. Just for
  146. Good And Evil’s Duality’s Archetype Lost In Apathy(crits for crits as always)
  147. A note in the mist
  148. Compliments So Sweet
  149. Nothing Left
  150. Someone new
  151. Countdown to Happiness
  152. Im new at this, crit please
  153. 1,000
  154. No name..
  155. The Sick Sucomb
  156. Poems of Demise
  157. Angels Carrying A Thousand Knives
  158. "Eager to alter" (crit for crit )
  159. 'Supersize Me'
  160. Guns, Killers, and Mirrors
  161. Palm Fronds Remind Me of Maria's Rarely Worn Skirt.
  162. Song themes
  163. new song...untitled for now
  164. Hole in his head + MUSIC
  165. Online singing lessons?
  166. Writing an Instrumental
  167. Habits of the West (meh)
  168. Heavy man
  169. With A Burning Flame
  170. an eternity wasted crit for crit
  171. forsaken - from challenges but brought to the mainstream
  172. JUST DIE- Need songwiting tips
  173. Fake
  174. Black (ska tune)
  175. New song no title crit for crit
  176. How do you come up with topics?
  177. read me, you know you want to
  178. Different Days, Same Face
  179. Another song crit for crit
  180. Even Dolphins Get Lost In Open Waters
  181. Implosion
  182. Labyrinth of Time
  183. First Attempt
  184. Trading war for words.
  185. Please help us with a title. And maybe crit this while your at it?
  186. Random Poem
  187. Another Word
  188. <3<3<3We Used to be Giants<3<3<3
  189. Or law is crime
  190. A short one.
  191. Written A New Tune - Give It A Listen!
  192. A Song I Wrote, crit for crit
  193. Red and Blue
  194. With my sword drawn
  195. mood swings
  196. delete
  197. can't post song
  198. Desensitized
  199. Groove On Crit 4 Crit
  200. i wish i knew ( please read crit 4 crit)
  201. Rake
  202. First Song
  203. The crackled soundtrack to a glancing simpered smile.
  204. Help me write good songs
  205. Whisper
  206. Any love poems
  207. Terms and conditions
  208. hesitance (one of my first and need crits)
  209. Navigate Us: Distribute the Rest Accordingly
  210. Old song re-done.
  211. the knowledge to undo.
  212. Mr. Orange
  213. *No Title Yet* Crit For Crit
  214. No title yet
  215. You're no Superman (I'm not as bulletproof as I thought I was)
  216. Unconcious Manditory Segments
  217. maelstrom (c4c)
  218. Black metal-ish song...?
  219. Song, please crit. "Just Stay"
  220. White Picket Fence
  221. Please Honestly Rate My Songs-
  222. 'Tales of the fallen and the faded' acoustic song- plz crt
  223. An Open Letter To My Favorite Cashier
  224. crit, first poem
  225. New England Dreams (Crit 4 Crit)
  226. Competion
  227. Creeping in the dark on my own
  228. First piece, Crit 4 Crit
  229. Carjacking Happens At Stoplights
  230. How long has everyone been writing?
  231. Poetry Advice by Walt MacDonald
  232. out of order
  233. Twelve/Midnight
  234. A song to a friend
  235. Futon Rock
  236. i wrote some lyrics...
  237. It's Too Late, Crit For Crit
  238. 'Forgotten in concrete'- Any advice/ hatred?
  239. Stairway
  240. You can't trust me. (We're too far apart.)
  241. Tips On Music Writing
  242. Delusions
  243. Shanty of Dreams
  244. Eyes In Stripes
  245. "Harry"
  246. my fairy tale life (crits please!)
  247. Short song / poetry thing.
  248. Time Spent is Time Wasted
  249. Bad night last night, Please crit
  250. I will find myself out before I buy a stairwell