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  1. Dark Lightning
  2. In Memory
  3. Help Me With The Lyrics
  4. A Captain's Oath
  5. Something i wrote
  6. We're Not Unbound
  7. Try again
  8. My first song CRIT FOR CRIT "UNTITLED"
  9. Let Me Tend 2 U (Underneath Your Cream)
  10. until I find you
  11. I Want to Have a Real Smile
  12. Crisis
  13. Something different
  14. Suicide of a Nymph
  15. Inescapable
  16. Waltz
  17. Need tips on writing a song (also crit this 1)
  18. The Rain Stick
  19. Cloud Shackles (You're a Hypocrite)
  20. An Old Joke
  21. Free
  22. Nothing Exeeds like excess
  23. living life by a fairy tale
  24. Screaming Pain(not quite finished)
  25. Hallmark (yes, I get it's kinda emo. Back off.)
  26. No working title, but please read (if you want)
  27. Dining with the Center of the Universe
  28. Falling In Love? (crit4crit)
  29. 'unladen swallow' First ever song (plz be gently)
  30. Not Convinced (crit-for-crit)
  31. Walk Away
  32. Need name for this song (also crit 4 crit)
  33. Is this a bad thing?.....
  34. Calling Out Screaming
  35. ahh my angry poem
  36. Shoot to Judge
  37. Hey it's thirdeye/ Believe
  38. My Muse has died
  39. Cant come up with a title
  40. Inspiration Page..
  41. Called In Sick With Envy
  42. no title (critq for critq)
  43. lusting for sally
  44. "Aria of Sorrow"
  45. Find this poem ---> Sandcastles
  46. Just Wait
  47. Goatsucker
  48. Going for a Swim
  49. "Death of a song writer" (u have to read this one)
  50. take it all
  51. Typical love poem (Release)
  52. Dull
  53. Worst Poem Ever. Complete Shat.
  54. Several shorts (Crit4Crit)
  55. Lord of The Flies
  56. Eva
  57. "Us v.s. Them (Taiwan v.s. Pakistan)"
  58. The fairies can keep my others, the wishes i'll never use. Crit for crit.
  59. In the Space Between Breaths (crit for crit)
  60. Blackness Strides
  61. made these up as i went along (crit 4 crit)
  62. pleas crit my song
  63. Vocals-Warming Up
  64. Winds of Revolution
  65. Help
  66. Poem/ Song Idea
  67. S&L File Transfer Thread
  68. Her Secret
  69. Angels smile
  70. overcome
  71. Defining Life backwards while walking into walls
  72. Marionettes (Crits Please)
  73. The Moon Over Minneapolis
  74. A.m.y.
  75. Lifeline
  76. Crit this and post a link and i'll give you a detailed critiscm.
  77. Spider (Crit for Crit)
  78. Follow You Down (Hit The Ground) - Please Crit
  79. Satisfy Yourself Lyrics
  80. Life is Rhythm
  81. Splatters words on a page
  82. Work in Progress
  83. some drafts, are any good?
  84. ATTN:mods, suggestion
  85. A Queen and a Fire
  86. Sea's Den
  87. Help the foreigner. Some language problems
  88. Maybe Just Maybe
  89. It's How Italy Polishes Their Shoes
  90. A King and a Dagger
  91. Revelations: The 6 Seals (Religious references ++)
  92. Paradise
  93. Creating an illusion of a 'chorus'
  94. Night Drive
  95. Southwest Rain Uprise (First one in here)
  96. The Storm
  97. Happy alone
  98. It's too late noow
  99. Closed Eye Visuals
  100. Your Deaf Mind
  101. first song
  102. Dawn of Deception (my latest lyrics)
  103. Perfect Alibi
  104. Armageddon's Battlefield-POETRY
  105. This Tower Isn't All That Tall
  106. begining of a new song crits appreciated
  107. "Temporary obsessions"
  108. "Hypnotised by Hurricanes"
  109. The Moon Isn't Made of Cheese Anymore (crit for crit)
  110. how to begin screaming
  111. the jerm
  112. The Nutmeg Country Blues
  113. They sang to us...
  114. Personification with Audio acompaniment
  115. Brought Up Right
  116. Im Stuck. HELP ME!
  117. A sad poem (thx 4 reading)
  118. Help!
  119. Development Ignites
  120. Comfortably Alone
  121. didnt see this is lyrics 101...
  122. Asunder
  123. Rose
  124. The World I Live In [please crit]
  125. final revision(Finally)
  126. The Extra's Last Line
  127. Rolling Crazy
  128. It will be worth it, i swear it will. Crit for crit.
  129. Why cant I write mellow :(
  130. Yob Culture
  131. Out of the Pink
  132. The Wall Must Fall (repost)
  133. Tonight Love Sparks With A Cigarette
  134. Let Go
  135. The Funeral Of Our Undying Rose
  136. Screams Under The Sour Mind
  137. What happens when all you can do is fall?
  138. I Hold You In My Arms
  139. First Song Posted Please Crit
  140. Can't Flow
  141. Frankly, We’d Prefer a Window Seat.
  142. Will someone critique this for me?
  143. Picturesque Facades Eclipse This Dance Routine
  144. Incygnus
  145. United We Fall (The System)
  146. The Soapbox
  147. long time no post check me out- Nobody Survives
  148. Hallway of fantasies
  149. Summer sky
  150. Just for
  151. Good And Evil’s Duality’s Archetype Lost In Apathy(crits for crits as always)
  152. A note in the mist
  153. Compliments So Sweet
  154. Nothing Left
  155. Someone new
  156. Countdown to Happiness
  157. Im new at this, crit please
  158. 1,000
  159. No name..
  160. The Sick Sucomb
  161. Poems of Demise
  162. Angels Carrying A Thousand Knives
  163. "Eager to alter" (crit for crit )
  164. 'Supersize Me'
  165. Guns, Killers, and Mirrors
  166. Palm Fronds Remind Me of Maria's Rarely Worn Skirt.
  167. Song themes
  168. new song...untitled for now
  169. Hole in his head + MUSIC
  170. Online singing lessons?
  171. Writing an Instrumental
  172. Habits of the West (meh)
  173. Heavy man
  174. With A Burning Flame
  175. an eternity wasted crit for crit
  176. forsaken - from challenges but brought to the mainstream
  177. JUST DIE- Need songwiting tips
  178. Fake
  179. Black (ska tune)
  180. New song no title crit for crit
  181. How do you come up with topics?
  182. read me, you know you want to
  183. Different Days, Same Face
  184. Another song crit for crit
  185. Even Dolphins Get Lost In Open Waters
  186. Implosion
  187. Labyrinth of Time
  188. First Attempt
  189. Trading war for words.
  190. Please help us with a title. And maybe crit this while your at it?
  191. Random Poem
  192. Another Word
  193. <3<3<3We Used to be Giants<3<3<3
  194. Or law is crime
  195. A short one.
  196. Written A New Tune - Give It A Listen!
  197. A Song I Wrote, crit for crit
  198. Red and Blue
  199. With my sword drawn
  200. mood swings
  201. delete
  202. can't post song
  203. Desensitized
  204. Groove On Crit 4 Crit
  205. i wish i knew ( please read crit 4 crit)
  206. Rake
  207. First Song
  208. The crackled soundtrack to a glancing simpered smile.
  209. Help me write good songs
  210. Whisper
  211. Any love poems
  212. Terms and conditions
  213. hesitance (one of my first and need crits)
  214. Navigate Us: Distribute the Rest Accordingly
  215. Old song re-done.
  216. the knowledge to undo.
  217. Mr. Orange
  218. *No Title Yet* Crit For Crit
  219. No title yet
  220. You're no Superman (I'm not as bulletproof as I thought I was)
  221. Unconcious Manditory Segments
  222. maelstrom (c4c)
  223. Black metal-ish song...?
  224. Song, please crit. "Just Stay"
  225. White Picket Fence
  226. Please Honestly Rate My Songs-
  227. 'Tales of the fallen and the faded' acoustic song- plz crt
  228. An Open Letter To My Favorite Cashier
  229. crit, first poem
  230. New England Dreams (Crit 4 Crit)
  231. Competion
  232. Creeping in the dark on my own
  233. First piece, Crit 4 Crit
  234. Carjacking Happens At Stoplights
  235. How long has everyone been writing?
  236. Poetry Advice by Walt MacDonald
  237. out of order
  238. Twelve/Midnight
  239. A song to a friend
  240. Futon Rock
  241. i wrote some lyrics...
  242. It's Too Late, Crit For Crit
  243. 'Forgotten in concrete'- Any advice/ hatred?
  244. Stairway
  245. You can't trust me. (We're too far apart.)
  246. Tips On Music Writing
  247. Delusions
  248. Shanty of Dreams
  249. Eyes In Stripes
  250. "Harry"