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- CRIT4CRIT "The first rays of the rising sun" CRIT4CRIT
- crit for crit
- To You
- The Book Of Life On My Heart Ressurection Revisted Forever Peace And Bumhead Rules.
- The Terrors of Growing
- Puppet
- inspired by bad brains and SOAD
- Silence
- What You Don't Know Won't Kill You
- Heaven's Hell Bent(first draft crits please)
- "I'm a freak" (not what it sounds like, it's an acoustic song)
- Vitamins: A Lie
- Grow Old But Die Young. HAIKU. CRIT FOR CRIT
- New Song
- Uncertain Devastations
- - The Final Preparation of Sodium and Chloride -
- The Futility of Life/Existence as it Refers to Human Weakness and Suffering
- puddle of filth
- I made a song up but can't find the right lyrics to write for the song.
- Eyes In Stripes
- Will You Be There When Im Home
- Untitled (please crit)
- A poem called "Us"
- i wrote a song... need help...
- Plague.
- Infector
- 15 miles
- Abducted, As Am I
- * You Wont Ever Be Missed * Please crit!
- Us (Not an emo song...)
- My New Song Called CHicken
- Someone give me a title
- need feedback
- Need Help Writing Song for School Project
- fictional memories
- Stairs of Diamond
- Unfair Lies
- untitled
- Untitled
- dark sorta song (don't have a name yet) work in prog
- Nocturne of Shadows. Crit for crit, fo sho!!
- Molten Cheese
- New Piece; Need some feedback
- Love Hurts
- Vengeance
- Needs a title (and maybe some crit)
- The Divorce Crit For crit
- Well at least it'll make you feel better about yourself...
- Eating PLastic NEW SONG
- Pick this apart for me?
- The Wasted Harvest
- "Crash Course Through A Tragice Life"
- The Corruption of Mankind(unfinished)
- The Revised Revision
- My parody of 'Let Me Love You' by Mario
- No title as yet...
- Earthquake Waters
- what if someone
- Dark Sorta song
- Everybody Read
- Crit for crit. Wishful Thinking to Victory
- Brand New Song: Hail Goldstein
- Silent and Strong
- I Might As well Live
- free form life
- Can't Seem to Finish
- Bagdad
- Drummer who cant write
- Poetic lyrics and Music Question
- My Second Attempt
- Newbie! Check this OUT!
- Sentiment
- Graduation Song
- One Final Breath
- The Day Orange Raped Onyx
- Shipwreck (We're never letting go)
- I never knew (plz crit)
- Vote for the Top 20 Amateur List
- Vote for the Top 100 Professional List
- Creative Writing Help - Thread
- Winter Nights (help needed)
- King & Queen
- Grow in time,( my 2nd song)
- My First song ever
- Everyone read this one... cuz i don't know what it is about
- Off the top of my head
- The Red Sea
- Crash Test Dummies Have Hearts Too
- Coming Out Is Hard To Do
- The Suburban End of Nova Scotia
- Create a painting of my wishes, an elegant figure will soon appear. Crit for crit.
- Mirages: Have you had your valium today?
- Biting the Hand that Has Fed You
- Help with Song Writing
- Beau colère etrangle m'âme
- Please rate our newest song, Too late
- Songwriting Tips
- My First Song-Please Crit
- How to tell a friend that he sucks
- Specific Incidents of the Third Person Omnecient
- Reflections
- Punkish kind of song
- 1st lyrics
- First song (crit for crit)
- Happy little prison
- The Corruption Of Mankind(finished)
- Beating A Dead Horse
- 6:1
- Public Service Announcement Explaining to All of Her Ex-boyfriends That She And I Are
- Just a little well wishin
- Set In Stone
- Another Song
- confused "love"
- New member, 2 songs: "What's Born and Not", "Marisol"
- Troubles (tentative title) Crit4Crit
- A Soceity Of Cold Hands
- apathy from agony (crit for crit)
- Self Harm Lyrics
- School is Out
- Pizza Box
- song i wrote in detention
- Twelve Stories
- First, the Hat and Trench Coat
- I dunno where to post this...
- A warm day
- Double Tap
- Last Goodbye
- my first song
- Someone needs to save this website!!!!
- Lyricists who think outside the box. Read this thread.
- The First Against The Wall
- Don't Stop Raining
- The Stranger and The Beast - Epic Poetic Adventure
- I See I Saw I Swear I Sat
- Go Up to a Lonely Stranger (crit for crit)
- The Fool's Hands Crit4Crit
- Molotov Cocktail Party
- Where Are You
- AHHH Someone please help me!
- Confidence Moses, We Need You Again
- MY very first song
- the problem song ( tell me wat u think)
- poison in my mind
- Communication ends the need for closure
- This title is not random.
- The Acrimony Of A Spiritual Leper
- You Won't Sleepwalk This Night
- wrote this when i was drunk
- My impossible Love
- Apocalypse
- Burst
- I've Got Five Years
- new song
- Poem please crit.
- new poem
- new song please readd and critique
- Will There Ever Be An Eye To Eye?
- My Sanctuary
- Death's Lullaby
- The Morning Tears(last time)
- still working on it
- blinding light
- Et Tu, Bruté?
- Lyrics? Where have they gone?
- You Need To Read This Thread
- My First Post
- three-lane (crit 4 crit)
- The Four String Blues
- questions about songwriting
- Are You...Me?
- As Long As You’re Frail, We’ll Laugh
- An untitled song
- Song-Surgery
- If John Was Dead (Poem)
- Nevermind - first in a while
- critique si vous plais
- I Must Be Insane
- untitled song - please crit
- Revenger - Please crit
- Effort
- Reach Me (old school rap song)
- Newbie: Confusion, crit
- You and I
- Genie of Bottle (Need help)
- screamo/hardcore vocalists?
- Quick Poem-
- Never Again
- "Hey Babe"
- I know you hate this
- Aware" New song! Please Crit!
- White Cliffs of Dover
- Tonight I’ll Sleep In Harmony, With Her In My Dreams
- ~~Save The Last Dance- New Song!!
- Gone but Not Forgotten
- Untitled
- please critique this song
- My Sandcastle Dreams
- Character Assassination
- Could someone tab this please??
- Deft(crit please)
- My Trouble
- Chesire Cat
- She Smiles
- Blind (crit for crit)
- Poem-An Asphodel, Please Crit
- This Be the Verse-Poem
- edited version
- Opinions please
- Twelve Hours A Day
- Where The Mountains Touch The Sky
- Poem-Wild Orphan
- Ignorance. A song I wrote. tell me what you think.
- Trigger Finger (first song I've posted)
- The Longest Line
- Live Revolution
- The Acrimony Of A Spiritual Leper(COMPLETELY revised)CRIT4CRIT
- Untitled
- The Place Where Means And Ends Meet
- stranger
- Fights to Be Won-Crits Please
- Dream Theater - Songs like Through Her Eyes
- Thursday
- Locket
- The Classic Pop-Punk Song
- only a drop [working title] (please crit)
- my poetic punk song
- "answer me" please crit!!!
- I am one, Who am I (I'm the Voice in your Head)
- Leaving Tonight (Goodbye with out a fight)
- Eric Draven/The Crow
- I Need A Title And Some Feedback!
- really short but crit
- ack mindless dribble...
- The carnival
- Please read it and let me know if you like it
- "Lucky day"
- Note To Self
- Hate To Do It
- We Bind
- "Hypnotised by Hurricanes"
- Foxtrot With Seduction
- Need this to get high again
- I Could Tell You A Story
- Here's just an example
- "Broken Heart"
- "Sad 3rd Eye" Crit for crit plz
- im new
- "Tango Down" Crits would be nice
- My first song posting..::crit4crit ye lads and lasses
- a little poem of mine (working title)
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