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- please crit, social commentary song
- Take-Off
- advice please?
- Let Go (The last Poet)
- song topic
- My New Song
- Lost at sea (plz crit)
- ending
- Apologize?? (New kinda song for me..PLEASE crit)
- vixens
- "Untitled" - Please crit, I'd like some help on this!
- fighting off the demons plz crit
- The tears of my soul
- Phone Calls To Your Own Heart. CRIT4CRIT
- I Hope you Get to where You're Going (Crit. Please)
- need material
- keep smiling , Still smiling
- Shakespear Should Have Wrote Play About You and Me (please crit)
- Voice In The Darkness
- hello dearest... (crit this and i'll crit you back)
- For You... crit for crit
- Constructive Criticism Needed
- A Song To Set You On Fire (mp3 inc.)
- The Evil Pony
- Beauty Is a Falsity
- Aabbcba
- Where do you look for inspiration?!?!
- Cmon now, everyone loves a love song
- Words you don’t believe, and words that don’t matter
- Pills and Pain/cit 4 crit/needs suggestions
- Leaving Man
- In the Wake of Delusion
- Puppet, Meet Puppeteer.
- Ad Astra Per Aspra...please crit...
- Huge work in progress :(
- Somewhat poltical song, critique it please
- Pressures
- "nothing and something more"
- The Last Rose of Summer
- Provoking All That Sings, Under A Sky of Green
- Information - crit for crit
- The Song
- Not what these people want.
- Crit for new song plz help.... new to writing
- Untitled
- The Last Kiss (End of Days) - Crit 4 Crit
- Possession-Depression-Regression -Dispassion
- A Short Story of Two Lovers End
- From the entire pebble dashed shore... Crit for crit.
- crit please- the controlled
- Song Writing Tips
- New song- please read and crit!!!
- Please read + crit!!
- lyrics that have been OVER done?
- Love Fraternity
- Angels
- Bland leading the bland
- Heretic, Crit fer crit
- Extended Range Vocals
- The bottom(crit for crit)
- Dear Myspace. (Crit for Crit.)
- The Dead Remain Dead
- A Good Nightmare
- everyone has their day
- untitled song, please crit
- My Heart Is Still Burning From The Fire You Ignited
- The Light Of My Heart
- untitled (crit for a crit)
- The Coming Curse
- Numb the Fear... Crit for Crit
- The Kase of Kathy Crit for Crit
- "Tomorrow" - Crit for crit, needs some work.
- Hold on for the last train out
- Untitled
- i need ideas 4 a song im writting 4 a girl i like
- welcome to the media (crit for crit)
- An Untitled piece. Please Critique.
- You thinks its funny
- Inspiration in the form of Words (Crit and i'll crit back)
- Current Times
- A Wasteful Hymn
- A little ditty I wrote
- Ashes
- This is for God
- “It's only a matter of time (before we get found out)”
- Another rewrite(The Coming Curse)
- And with honors. Read this now biznotches!
- Any thoughts on these lyrics?
- Cool new passive aggresive political song!
- Precious Moments
- Broken Memories
- "Untitled" Just A Start Please Crit
- Hmm..
- Muscling Heaven's Gate (Work in Progress)
- Writing songs...need help
- Sinergia
- Bulb-a poem Crit4Crit
- A Hill at Night-a poem Crit4Crit
- The morning tears shine
- I need somone to sing over Black Magic Women
- Kelly
- Hate cradles you! But... love humiliates you.
- In a sense our innocence (Strutting song)
- Insurgents Rush
- The first song i've written
- Scream - How do you do it?
- Repercussions
- Not This Night
- Back Underground Crit For Crit
- Manufactured on High Heels
- In The Middle
- Unseen Disillusion
- This is my 1st song so please crit
- here i stand CRIT for CRIT
- An Upside Down Map Leading To Me
- trying to make an metal intro
- What's Your Flaw? (crit please)
- pills and pain/crit 4 crit/needs work
- Sell Out--- Crit for Crit
- Your hands got cold (painting your thoughts)
- An emo song.
- Human Relations
- need crit/editor for song... The Enemy Is Night
- Surfs Up
- Surfs up
- Hey There Alexa. CRIT4CRIT
- A time so cold and darkening
- Fate (PLEASE CRIT AND I'LL CRIT FOR YOU!)
- steering wheel not included
- Your Beautiful Desire
- How to scream?
- song in prog. crit and help please
- Tears From 1988 (crit 4 crit)
- Dust for Dust
- Pulled into the station last night
- I need inspiration
- A Captured Whisper
- no name song...
- "answer me" please crit
- It's been a while.
- untitled so far...
- "Painkillers"
- Silence
- "Nights like this"
- What's Wrong With Me/crit 4 crit
- For all you vocaliststststs
- Musical Lovers
- Silica Gel!
- the hunt
- I Can't Stay True Crit4Crit
- I noted
- Another's opinion would be appreciated
- My First Song
- I Don't Care About the Weather
- I Don't Care About the Weather
- I have a question
- A couple songs
- Pleeeease rate my song
- "answer me" please crit
- You've started a war
- buddhist reprimand
- lyre strings
- i need help really badly
- "worthless"
- The Fine Line Crit For Crit
- Radioactive Prophylactic
- lyrics that i need opinions on nothing more........
- A Light In August
- A snippet of song
- Dry Towel
- Suzie is a Killer (Please Crit)
- Songwriting Funk
- Metallized Lifestyle
- Human
- "When I was about twelve or thirteen I was so sure I wanted to be an engineer"
- Doctrine of an Atheist
- The Silent Man (Crit For Crit)
- "You have no life" crit plz
- My Ecstasy
- Religious Hate
- "Mike" c4c
- The Best Things That Never Happened
- Timed Chances
- **** Straight A's & Call to Arms.
- My Addiction (crit please)
- Night of my Life
- If i were anorexic, would she take the blame? (please crit, ill get you back)
- don't read!!!!!!please do not click on this!!!
- Should we have
- Blow My Mind (Crit please)
- My first attempt, opinions?
- Weed in the Garden
- My Favorite Nightmare
- Devastation. Crit for Crit
- Lyrical Help
- Blind Truancy (recording included!)
- Help Me Out
- Time
- silent (crit 4 crit as always)
- No Ones A Saint, Crit For Crit
- No title yet...crit for crit
- need help written a love song
- I need some help with songwriting
- A message red with a golden glow. Crit for crit.
- dictionary?
- Help on my English please
- need crit/editor for song... Lies
- Hurts So Bad
- Medicate Me
- Passer By - New Song
- Waves of Delta (crit 4 crit)
- The Goblin King
- I Quit
- Beautiful Ashes c4c
- Nominate Top 100 Professional Lyricists
- Nominate Top 20 Amateur Lyricists
- This Sweet Thing
- "Black Widow" new revised
- The Morning Tears Shine(revised)critq for critq
- crit4crit untitled work
- This Face, How Lovely
- *Last Chance*
- (Untitled) Crit4Crit
- Everlasting sleep in the arms of a stranger
- So, It's an eight line song, that's not about depression but about revolution, YAY!!!
- Violent Sleep
- It Comes With The Territory CRIT4CRIT
- Death of a Mechanic (Temporary title)
- Lyric project
- My work
- Fraudulent Purity
- thrown down a well for every second that you breathe a step out of line
- Ugh...this needs a ton of work
- Ugh...this needs a ton of work
- Any help?
- Lovesong
- If you don't like Emo, stay the hell outta my thread.
- Graffiti Kiss
- Influence
- Green Heaven
- Post_your_lyrics_here!!
- My Song
- Wintersight (Dedicated to Sabbath)
- Nightress in Shinning Armour
- Green and rotten
- The Burden of the Scythe
- A Guide For All The Newbies
- please help with title crit for a crit
- Power On/Off
- Red Lights
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