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- Royal Return
- One Day
- Kings And Queens
- Dampened Wings
- Need some help with this song! (Audio inside)
- The S&L Hall of Fame.
- My bands song, which i contibuted too..
- The Dead Will Follow(unfinished)
- first, polish your shoes
- Untitled 2
- me singin "hands down" please come
- Blood Drive
- A quick poem
- The Jaded; Who Live Lost, Faded
- The Pledge
- stay away/ crit please
- I Miss You (first song, please crit)
- in the moon light
- The Patriot
- first, polish your shoes (completed)
- Not sure what to call it yet (please crit)
- Everyone is going to die
- Emo "paragraphs"
- Quietus (working title)
- Just another chance
- Doublethink
- cracked
- Improving one's voice
- Help writing/critique first song
- Untitled 3
- Hit With Inspiration
- higher authority
- do you understand these lyrics?
- my would-be girlfriend
- How To Start A War / please crit.
- Suicidal Fascination
- Question (not a lyric)
- "Dead People Are So Selfish"
- rate my short poem please
- Pedestal (It sucks, but I'm posting it anyway. IT IS NOT EMO!)
- Apologies Remain
- fading away (crit)
- back again (crit)
- Stolen Mind
- Between The Eyes
- Here's a poem that isn't suicidal.
- Rose
- Untitled 4 (PART 1)
- Tonight
- quick lyric
- No name yet
- To Fast to love
- I Like Typing the Letter Q: A screwy little song i made up.
- No Escape
- Finished first song/critique
- The Beer Store
- "What if Sheep Drempt of Us"
- Lady Gray
- Song in E minor
- Original Song Not About Death
- Tragic Hero, or Lack Thereof
- Menology for the Martyr
- Life in Memories
- wounded knee start to a song tell me what you think of what i got so far
- As I Lie And Wander; All That Lays In Wonder
- The Bottle of Water Set Itself on Fire
- new to this thred but here it goes...
- Nos
- Game 001 - Love Songs
- Goodnight rock and roll Crit for crit
- The Ride - a crit for a crit
- Smokey Balcony
- Lay to rest(crit 4 crit)
- Memories in Life update
- It Went To Far
- Margie one mean old bitch
- 'Hail To You My Enemies'
- war is peace (crit for crit)
- Take These Pills...crit 4 crit... horrible song, but must read
- America the Utopia (resubmission?)
- Indulgence In A Prospective View
- Amidst The Screams Of Excitement A Lepar Breaks The Back Of Justice
- Margie
- Every Lie Dies
- The Horrid Stench
- Question On Vocals?
- I'm waiting... crit 4 crit
- Les Enfants Terribles
- Upon The Grave
- In Fear and Retrospective Calligraphy
- My first song plz critic
- plz crit original song not about death
- Rain Forever
- untitled
- Those Glorious Heroes (crit4crit)
- The Fall
- lead guitar part with this?
- What author/writer inspires you?
- no title yet
- Song
- The Final Walk
- Caffeine Love... free write turned song
- Token.
- Red Light
- Share your band names
- where to go
- Bringing us down
- Crit me/I'll crit u/need ideas for the name
- Oxygen
- 495
- Broken Guitar String Poem
- wrapped in fog...crit for crit
- May 10
- new poem: the moment you want to die
- Paradise of life
- no title yet -- need suggestions and criticism
- The Mosquito Song <__<
- My school is like a mountain ( New song : Plz Crit )
- - Corner of 29th and Biology 061 -
- I Wasn't Married Until Yesterday
- Soul Arcade (crit for crit)
- Disco Deadbeat
- Impact (title needs work)
- dreams of life...crit for a crit
- beginer...
- lifes a b**** (that's reality)
- Walk
- old poem i found
- Self
- Try
- The Make Out song
- "international terrorist", not another mindless rambling, i back my opinion with fact
- Security Blankets
- Copyright information
- The S&L Hall of Fame winners.
- "My Mask"
- Escape for an Evening
- pink mofos
- Collapse
- My bands songs
- im a n00b to lyrics, can u help?
- Apathy
- Another Lonely Morning - crits/title suggestions are welcome
- thoughts of my agnostic strange mind
- my first song (if i could make a wish)
- Song I just found, please crit
- Improving how high I can sing.
- If I Could (crit for crit)
- Trying And Failing
- Half-Breed (Pleast Critique)
- Black and White (temp)
- Prove Me Wrong
- Endorsement (crit 4 crit)
- America The Utopia (Edited/Resubmission)
- no idea bout the name
- Searching for the Sun
- Please crit, 3 kickass hard rock songs
- 2nd song : We are Rock n roll, please crit
- orthadox (working title) crit please.
- DEATHS CONSTRUCTION, ( based on nuclear war ) plz crit
- Shadows
- How do you come up with a title for a song with no lyrics?
- The Devils Wine
- new to the site
- Adam, to his mother
- untitled song (need suggestions/critisicm)
- Night Out
- Ironic War
- A Song About Love (please crit)
- Left Bleeding (crit!)
- sarcasm
- a song called "Little Tree"
- First post leave link and i'll crit back
- Drowning
- Your New Religion
- robert plant's harmonica
- AIM Screen Name
- Without A Cup
- Meters Feel Like Miles
- the angel you cant touch
- Photograph
- My Wound Is Deeper Than Yours
- Just wondering
- The Crit a Famouse Bands Lyrics Thread
- welcome to thawng island mon!
- Flutter Home
- Wanted
- Animal (original)
- BORN OF FIRE : plz crit, plz dont steal
- The Whole Pack
- Depression is Euphoric
- Turning Handles / Catalysts
- bike
- I will write music to your lyrics
- "Hardest
- "hardest hearts" please crit
- a little help?
- “Your laptop broke”
- untitled
- I'd throw a dolphin at you
- Unstated Fear
- moonscum
- The Life Of A Rock Star
- mothers lies
- Protest song-"Underwear on your laptop"
- Song of the Month - April
- Empty Magazines
- bliss (crit mine and ill crit urs)
- My songs - Instrumental Rock
- - I can see Hertzsprung from here. -
- Untitled at the moment
- needles and guns
- Incoherent Architecture of the Human Eyes
- etc.
- Corsica
- you know?
- Hole in his head ---CRIT FOR A CRIT...Check it out
- Last Goodbye
- The "Can't Touch ?Hitler or You will die in a concentration camp!" song
- "thinking about you"(wrote for girlfriend)
- Tides of trees
- 'Against All Odds' - Preliminary Lyrical Composition
- Some songs i wrote
- untitled, but crit please
- No Phantom (Crit For Crit!)
- Savage (crit for a crit)
- At first..
- 1200cc Romance
- Stand Up and Fight
- melody/lyrics
- Hated Helen (crit 4 crit)
- Why Crawl from the Womb to Witness the Death of the World?
- 'Daisy' (needs a chorus/crit for crit)
- Products You Wear
- "Hardest Hearts" revised, please crit this time, crit for crit
- Threat to you (crit for crit)
- Right and Wrong
- Destinys Found
- "Soliloquy" please crit.
- Tidings From The Blue Sphere
- The Certainty of Speculation
- The Graduation Song
- An appetite for actuality. Crit for crit.
- An Arguement With God
- song structure
- She Wore White
- Hey hey, goodbye. NEW SONG - crit for crit
- Read this and tell me what you think, please!
- A Toast to Confusion
- Un-named song, supposed to be nice like nothing else matters
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