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- "Close to you"
- catharsis
- Punch Drunk
- how dangerous is it?
- Yesterdays (first song!)
- "As I Remember" opinions?
- The Angels Within
- Songwriting Strategies
- hidden
- final rights
- How I Feel
- Poem written....
- !Poem! By me :P
- Rapture tell me what you think seven sorrows first song
- Jane
- Terry Shiavo by The Pupitres
- My new orgasm inducing love-fest
- A new song
- Hollywood (crit for crit.
- Holding in my Hands (Edward Scissorhands Song)
- horn dog
- Game:poem
- Soul At Stake ( Not sure about title)
- Collapse Baby Collapse
- I'm a living example of 100% the opposite
- New punk song - Outlines
- Voices ...
- Endocardial: Plz Crit
- Better Days
- Butterflies
- Voodoo Doll
- Halloween
- "This All Looked Better From the Outside"
- Issues/Shattered Faith
- Need help finding music for this.
- Writing
- It Looked Better On Paper
- Song: Deceit and Lies
- Walk the Crooked Sidewalk
- At M. Dimler
- experience
- Flow to the sea (Please crit)
- my first song, please crit
- Stockholm, Sir
- Live to Die (CRIT!!)
- Does Anyone Know Where To Get A Rhymming Dictionary!?!?!?!? And How Much
- Misled based on the movie "the village" crit for crit
- A Half-Empty Case of Hypnosis
- My first complete song
- Lyric writing(song)
- untitled as of now crit for crit
- reflections (in the mirror)
- Sight of the Sleeping
- Two - go ahead and crit.
- Please leave comments "Natural Selection"
- cerebral, postmodern white rap - Axis and Allies
- Song writing Help
- she broke my heart
- Jabba Love
- Broken Dream
- What Did Everyone Start A Band For.....?
- ...
- Visages (You crit well, I crit back well)
- Broken Insomnia
- Absolution
- if only a while
- To Be Honest
- any ideas
- Space
- Shadow Man
- Bright Lights and Photographs (Crit, Crit back)
- a few songs to crit
- Two short poem- plz crit
- I Need This
- De-Escalation (working title)
- Alone On Repeat- Please crit
- "reflections" not looking for huge crit, just some comments, ill comment back.
- Animal (crit for crit)
- Live to Die (CRIT)
- Please Help Me, Inspiration Needed
- *NEW SONG* pleas critique,give advice
- The journey of a leaf through a windy fall
- Corrupt nation crit for crit
- Losing control
- The seventh sky
- Walk With Me
- a letter swallowed in fear
- A Warm Summer Bloodbath Awaits
- Roo - take a look, serious this time
- Goodnight To You, Mada'am Pudella
- A message to you
- indie rap
- the sun is out (bonus: not emo!!!!)
- Chain
- my latest *** kicking tear jerker that kicks ***
- Songwriting tips
- I love you(love me back)
- Can you believe it?
- Black Widow
- stream of conciousness
- all alone
- Corrupt Nation pleas crit
- matrimony in malice
- Wiping the Slate Clean- Please Crit
- Rejecting The Invitation
- Angst
- How much timw
- another untilted best yet crit for crit
- Animus (Crit for Crit)
- New Song *Goodbye Sunshine* Crit please.. i need some input
- Stringent Structure of Spirit CRIT 4 CRIT
- Blank Screen
- Would we get sued?
- Too Much
- Ride to Rise
- the basic skeleton for Decadence
- The Balcony (TITLE SUGGESTIONS TOO)
- Midnight Masquerade - You crit me, I'll crit you back!
- A Moving Image
- Goodbye Sunshine please crit...
- more cerebral white rap
- I'M BACK! AND THIS TIME FOR GOOD! Now please crit my song.
- The Forgotten Man (CRIT!!)
- political lyrics
- E.m.g.u.t.m.o.n.
- Fake (please crit)
- my political song...
- I Find Myself (crit for crit)
- The first song I have wrote in a while. *Crit* Grundge style
- Sometimes It's OK to Give Up
- Lab Rats
- Good Writing Colleges
- My problem
- death of innocence (please crit)
- fear to the moon , the red moon
- cerebral hip-hop (with a deliciously anti-poppunk vibe)
- A song about something
- One Reckless Candle
- murder
- saHappy another song *crit*
- Summer Falls
- What'sbetter
- Move On - updated
- Nothing. Please crit
- Song the singer in my band wrote
- black widow (crit for crit)
- "The Dangers of Sleepwalking"
- Stern Of Stone (crit me, leave a link for one back)
- Help me improve my bad voice.
- Stella Cruentus
- Hold On
- Organized Confusion
- Shallow Waters
- the story of a tale untold (hopefully bands third song) need crits
- When my last song is over, i know i'm over
- betrayed
- Lonely as Me...crit for crit
- Artificial Steps of Freedom (Crit Please)
- you could be anyone...please crit
- I am not who I am (Honestly this is my masterpiece delivered in perfection!)
- Jagged Edges. Please Critique
- "Beautiful Houses"
- Untitled. Crit for Crit
- Killing Me. advice is neeed
- Bilateral Butterfly
- Highway
- I need help writing a meaningful song
- recomend me some jazz pianists
- garden of dark roses
- Definitely more to say
- I Wrote Your Number On A Napkin
- Need help with 2 songs
- untitled. although I'm thinking: "Little Bo Peep in a World of Synthetic Wool"
- "Two-Faced Woman", crit for crit
- Death Of Immortal Fear
- Fire
- Nothing Sings
- worth your time to crit!
- in darkness (come back jessica)
- song with no name
- Spontaneous Combustion
- untitled song
- My first song ever (crit. please)
- "i just wanna be me"
- Fading Dry
- Help with amp settings when singing
- Endless funeral portrait.
- Tied to Tight
- The Fields of Iowa
- first lines needs help though
- And then it rained on me...
- another song with no title
- my song
- Please Help - having trouble
- How I Feel
- Pieces on the Floor (crit for crit, as always)
- Broken Hearts Make For Good Conversation (Crit4Crit)
- No More Blood (Please Crit)
- looking for critiscism
- Serum of Shrapnel
- Forced Rhymes
- Heavenly Crush
- "fortune teller" crit for crit
- The Devil's Side
- Don't Go
- New Blade (crit 4 crit)
- Burning Nights
- simple minds HELP!!!! (crit)
- Ink Doesn't Lie
- Ibanez GAX30
- Devious Girl...
- first song, "What do they know?"
- The Devil's ride
- "Bridge of Dreams, River of Hate"
- first song ever (please crit)
- Flames
- The Updated Writer's Guide To What Makes A Great Song (tips That You Can Use! Again!)
- Dead on the Ground
- Party On!(Tribute to Andrew WK)
- Score
- Empty Summer
- Even Killers Cry
- there really is a brightside
- "Didn't Think You Would Come" please crit (and also try to find a better name for it)
- One Sided Love in D minor (crit for crit)
- love, will never fade away (unfinished) plz crit
- A Crooked Spine Wins Every Woman's Heart
- Buoys Can't Save Capsized Souls
- The Jaded; Who Live Lost And Fade
- The Closet...needs new name suggestions
- Because its Raining - Poem
- "Sail of Hope"
- Smoky Bar
- Bandit Country
- Tearddrop Stained Paper (Please Crit)
- !!!need A Name!!!
- Higher Level
- Thou Shalt Not
- Untitled
- My kingdom
- The Emerald Man- crit 4 a crit
- "Bones and Steam"
- Time Expelling Time (I Cannot Live Without My Heart)
- Saturday Night Bonfire
- the ritalin kid
- tell me what you think
- Even angels commit suicide -- Please Crit
- Singing Tabs?
- The walk of a gambler
- *The Thoughts That Kill*
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