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- The worst impression to send on a second date
- Automotive Garden
- Walk Through Wonderland
- confident words without a care
- Tears in a sea of sorrow , critic please
- Victum of Circumstances
- "If It's Ment To Be" A revised song that I posted on here awhile ago...PLZ CRIT!!!
- The Cadaver Escaped
- You hear them upon waking
- "frozen in time"
- My bands first song, Please critique
- Search For Perfection
- Growing Season Of Autumn
- My Martyr - a poem
- Falling out of love : CLICK!
- I don't know what I was thinking
- "pills or pain" (crit for crit)
- Sh!t of the City
- The Voice of Hastur
- The Filthy Collapse Of Love
- (No Title)
- Inject Your Love (w/ Recording)
- I wrote this for my girlfriend
- Eternal - Let me know what u think
- My Rolling Cell
- Eternal - Let me know what u think
- Universal Factor
- Drift out, this is my end.
- City Lights
- Keep Your Eyes Closed
- free verse poem - quite long, but critique it and i'll critique your next TWO songs
- Where We Met
- Love Is Your Whore
- How bad does my singer suck?
- Pictures Of Paradise , please i need critic
- The 35-Minute Opera Solo
- no idea for a title...crit for a crit
- Food for Thought
- Ordinary Man
- "Getting Nowhere At a Somewhat Plausible Rate"
- Shadow
- Swimming in a Straitjacket
- no title yet
- If Only We Both Knew
- the Sun
- [Insert Catchy Title Here] please crit
- My Rolling Cell
- Your worst nightmare
- Burn & Fade
- Ashes In Winter
- Ruins please Crit
- Decisions
- Wandering Spirit
- My Second Song
- Sometimes I just dunno wtf I'm thinking.... seriously.
- Trying And Failing...
- need help
- Democracy's Hypocracy
- Hanged By The Time
- Pills For Brains (Typical Rock Song)
- ::Guide Me Gretta::
- Blinding Love
- Old Fortress
- Edward Scissor hands song
- Bow To The King
- no title yet
- As the Lines Fold
- This one's better ;)
- Who do you hurt now?
- Some songz
- songwriting vs. stage fright
- Need vocalist for online band!
- Bonfire Reveries
- "Fatale"
- nevaeh (dont know about the title) need your help thanks
- We walked on GLASS
- [U]The Bride and the Butcher[/U]
- Some songs
- read if you wish
- Dredged Memories
- childhood
- untitled as of now plz crit
- Severe lack of ideas but here's a song anyway
- "Moonlight Dance" by Jaime Villarreal
- Emo Poem
- I'm better than you (and I know it!), my new art I am allowing you to view
- Two-faced
- Stop posting emo
- The Hate Within
- How to put music to lyrics I wrote?
- an emotianly deep ballad (read if you want orgasm)
- Rough Draft:Death March
- Bullet Holes In Glass
- This Falling Veil , CRITIC PLEASE.
- which do you liek the soudn of more/??
- hmm
- My First Time in S&L...What Do I Do?
- With Thoughts Unorganized and a Tangled Heart
- Forgive
- Help!
- Thursday
- Paper Lanterns
- When Black and White Killed the Colors
- offensive white rap
- untitled at the moment Crit4Crit
- Disangelist ( Omen )
- Singer/Songwriter Steffanie Christi'an
- I'd Rather Get To Know You
- Can I Take You (Repetitive Anti-Drug Song)
- Turn Down the Music
- mx lyricist photo album!
- My one last love song
- Left and Right (Crit4crit)
- I'll join you
- Inspiration for lyrics
- 'Reverse my Eyes' - what'd you all think?
- Lost-a poem
- A Sucker For Sweet Words
- A Storm of Entropy
- Midnight Meeting CRIT FOR CRIT
- Up beat songs
- Time Machine (You owe me crits, pay up)
- a song that i posted a while ago and then tweaked a bit.
- Dear America
- March In Gotterdammerung
- Untitled..
- Weird song #5: moody
- Smoke Screen Serenade
- Bands With Awesome Lyrics
- "A Night Sky Introspective"
- hey check these lyrics tell me what u think.. please!!
- Pretend I Was In a Fashion Show Seven Years Ago.
- please critique
- Drama scene. CRITFORCRIT
- "Stars 'n' Glitter (Trash Queen)"
- Poem for a Dead Rose.
- but i can still ask why (probably more of a poem than a song check it out anway)
- Dognose
- When the lights go down...
- "Honest Like Wine"
- 3 songs i wrote (opinions??)
- a song about a sad song
- Murder By Truth CRIT FOR CRIT
- Tonight will be the start of this
- Snowglobe
- "Rumors of L.A."
- Piece Of Courage
- HELP!!! How do I Write a rock/metal/punk song?
- HELP!!! How Do I Write A Punk/Rock/Metal song?
- i took my time but we dont seem to get along
- Deviation In Sacrality
- need some opinions
- "Get on it"
- "White Roses and Vodka Blessed Kisses"
- Black Tie
- Media Fingertraps
- Roses - plz read
- Favorite lyrical moments
- The United States, a much better song, i think, much less street attitude...
- Another song called Religion....
- Untitled(crit 4 crit. please!)
- The Keeper
- "One Nil" - Critisism please
- Welcome Home Companion
- Even In Pain, One Can Sleep (I am a vet, crit me, i do it back)
- naming a band?
- Psyychotic Life (Awful title but I can't think of anything better for now)
- Marx Arcade
- A Faint Light (in a bright one)
- No title yet. please read
- Beyond The Darkness There Is Light.
- Sunday Morning Sobriety Test
- Detach
- You Made Yourself Cry - Please Crit
- "all eternity"
- Copyrighting your songs in the UK
- my best yet---plz read
- the sun goes down again (respond please)
- Piece Of Courage (Revised)
- In the Darkness
- Untitled Song (my first posted here)
- The Professors' Son
- Snaggle-Tooth Rock
- Faithless strife
- "Flashback"
- "Secrecy in Silence"
- Kill The President
- "Walk Away"
- distance
- Washed & Faded, plz crit / rate.
- Butter Fingers
- my lyrics...
- MY FIRST LOVE SONG, KINDA, My Iniquitous Dreams
- -A Murder Story- crit plz
- Sapor Fructus
- "Over"
- "When Tomorrow Comes"
- Beat in Music?
- One-Way Ticket to Clarksburg - crit for crit, of course!
- give way to gas
- New song, untitled as of now
- Can you here my soul cry (crit please!!)
- important, need this song done by saturday!!!
- An Anthem for the Tired and Downtrodden (Poem)
- Ace Of Spade
- rate this lyricist:brandon boyd
- this is the end
- Glutten For Punishment
- help me!
- a little weary...
- Check Please
- please crit
- dark blue.
- the whip (please crit)
- Days Of Our Lives
- "Jesus Christ, Modern Day Superman"
- Mystic Haze (CRIT!)
- The Love Song (Pain and Pleasure)
- Failed Again..Please Crit...
- Pause | Cut | Paste | Play
- My two newest songs
- zoned out
- Hypocritic Betrayals
- you sould, uhhh, read this
- Dear America (edit)
- The Anthem of Armageddon
- If This House Was Roofed, I'd Put in a Ceiling Fan
- (You will) Become Evil
- The Angels Within
- Bruised (or bloody, not sure which) please crit
- Help Me Write A Song!
- no limit - ~rockabilly song~(not sure of name yet) CRIT FOR CRIT
- (untitled as of now) crit for crit, not emo i swear
- gives way to gas
- self medicate
- Screw Up..... First song
- "poison"
- Scum of the Earth
- Divinity- plz crit
- Nicotine
- arm of war
- Larion
- East to Shoreline Killed Us Both
- First posted song lyric version 1.2
- first song I'v posted here so please criticise
- Bye.
- song with bass intro i wrote for it.
- i think they're amazing...
- Pin Your Wings
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