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  1. Lonely Loser
  2. And Then There Was Dancing
  3. i dont know
  4. a song wuthout a name.
  5. Hurricane
  6. Kisses mistaken as love
  7. carbon copys....(not sure yet, really rough)
  8. Please Crit This: "Undefined"
  9. "My Friend"...PLEASE CRIT THIS
  10. My Arachnid Lover
  11. Memory Kills the Atmosphere
  12. The Irritated Babysitter
  13. Cheitan's Girl
  14. Untitled, no beginning, no end, crits appreciated
  15. "Director Charities", please crit.
  16. My Love for you.
  17. Most disgusting, offensive type of lyrics
  18. my friend's pop punk song
  19. Arcadia
  20. Hollow God
  21. Triple Jump Fallout
  22. Mother, Can You Hear Me? crit for crit
  23. Drift Away
  24. Real Lovey-Dovey type poem for my girlfriend
  25. Psha The Red Velvet, crit for a crit
  26. Nothing but the Night
  27. The awkward silence
  28. Fool
  29. A Place For Me
  30. Their Shoulder, Crit please.
  31. The Art Of A Tragedy
  32. Sorta Demented Song I Rewrote
  33. Forsake Me
  34. End of the Road
  35. take me away (please crit this)
  36. ex best friend
  37. accidental war
  38. unnamed(please crit)
  39. The Tragedy Scene
  40. Cheap Pills
  41. Under The Floor, They Wait - crit for crit!
  42. Different Styles, Different Lyrics, Different Effect
  43. All I Had - plz crit
  44. Forever
  45. A Life Blinded By Moonbeams
  46. alive?
  47. infidelity
  48. Metaphysical
  49. The Permanent Mark
  50. Star Climber
  51. The Writers Curse
  52. Climb Blue, Fall Red
  53. Body By Charlie (Highly Offensive Joke Song)
  54. "kite"
  55. Sleep Well For Me Tonight
  56. Spinning Cycle
  57. New Song
  58. Say Goodbye And Goodnight
  59. Spinning Wheels
  60. another non-deceptive, street punk song i wrote that u can trash...
  61. First poem/song deal , please crit.
  62. Seek The Mistery - Critique 4 Critique
  63. Fresh Children
  64. less streetish, same non-deceptiveness, song name: Issue
  65. song structure
  66. look look!! please crit even though it isnt done.
  67. Second Chance
  68. Six Feet Above (Acoustic Song)
  69. The Disciple
  70. Crit Please - Reality Sucks
  71. Help with Lyrics
  72. world of nothing
  73. The Alchemist
  74. The Rose Realised
  75. I need YOU to crit this song!! PLZ!!!
  76. is this an "ok" structure for a song?
  77. So This Is The Product Of My Longstanding Writer's Block
  78. Another non-deceptive song. It's slower, its called Into The Unknown
  79. a "poem" i wrote a couple years ago - crits for this beginner would be appreciated!!
  80. fidelity vs. ancestry
  81. thirteen - plz help and crit
  82. untitled - please comment
  83. anyone want to donate some songs
  84. doG
  85. Yesterday's Heroes
  86. Tomb
  87. lyric writing
  88. Unnamed - Plz Crit
  89. [15]th
  90. Song Subjects
  91. Bottled Feelings
  92. ****ed Up With You. CRIT4CRIT
  93. Bleeding Heart's Poetry
  94. Resubmission of Into The Unknown, longer and improved crit/recrit please
  95. Into The Unknown, edited, resubmitted
  96. Cotton Candy Soul sharing, crit
  97. All But Fake - My First Try
  98. the end
  99. Adhedonia
  100. Bubblegum Western - its a work in progress
  101. [15]th crits please
  102. only Fools Choose to Lose
  103. If this sucks, tell me.
  104. My first poem to be posted
  105. ooh look...crit please
  106. a song about culture shock and racism and it rhymes.
  107. long time no write CRIT PLEASE!
  108. the corrupted crit for crit
  109. 45 Calibur Memories
  110. Dawn Breaks Dark (Havent written in awhile)
  111. Death Of A Rose
  112. Life gets better(rewritten)
  113. Pain Train(rewritten)
  114. not mine
  115. Tool for creating chord progressions
  116. Lines *crit for crit!!!*
  117. Frustrating Headache
  118. Critique some of my bands tunes
  119. The Wait
  120. Aesthetic Incarnate
  121. Young Songwriter
  122. trying to care
  123. Dirty Little Secret (Work In Progress)
  124. One Pin
  125. Getting Settled In
  126. Art Is Love
  127. free verse poem i wrote - crits appreciated!!
  128. loud.
  129. HElp my lyrics
  130. Golden Pigtails ~Crit for a Crit~
  131. Pain Inside
  132. Lyric Battle
  133. Mr. Mason
  134. Stand in the dark - VERY rough
  135. Esoteric Dreams
  136. Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder
  137. Singing
  138. "I cut my wrist"
  139. Gimme Sumthin Ta Do!
  140. Suck me dry
  141. Amorphous
  142. Silent Signs Of Absolute Apocalypse
  143. Learn The Art Of Darkness
  144. [A Mahogany Apologue, Vol. 1-8]
  145. two resubmissions(?) Song 1: Hate Song 2: Issue
  146. Verse to my song
  147. diffrent no complete please crit drit for a crit
  148. Check it out
  149. In The Place Of A Shepherd
  150. Idiot
  151. should it stay or should it go?
  152. "I cut my wrist" ow!
  153. ok, heres the deal
  154. 66
  155. Sorry
  156. "the passing"
  157. The Devil's Arithmetic
  158. composition help please
  159. you're as fickle as a flipping coin
  160. Crysanthenums
  161. OK, you all like "emotionally heavy" songs, so here ya go.
  162. Misaki Love
  163. Third finished song. No structure whatsoever.
  164. My work...Poem's/Lyric's
  165. Cliffhanger
  166. ''Girl With The Pearl'' - (claptonesque, pleses crit)
  167. Infinity is your line up ---crit for crit i guess
  168. The Rose
  169. I wrote this in spanish class
  170. Making it to the 'bacco store
  171. Apologetic.
  172. Rain Cloud in the Moonlight
  173. Mmmhmmm
  174. Rinse, repeat
  175. Punk In The Sun
  176. Metal Song, even though I dislike Metal
  177. Untitled, and needs a lot of work.
  178. Crucifix
  179. Crystallographic Skyline
  180. Know Her Like The Back Of My Head
  181. Resubmission (Possibly last) of Hate...
  182. Living The Life of A Victim
  183. Frustrating headache (revised)
  184. "finally"
  185. I Need Help
  186. "Hunger" crit for crit
  187. The site that blinds
  188. No title yet, but wouldn't mind some crit.....
  189. Little Ditty (please crit)
  190. Fell In a Hole
  191. Creating the Tragedy Scene
  192. Go Grab the Remote For This Conversation
  193. all i'll ever know
  194. Break Up Poem!!!!
  195. For Tony...The Final Poem
  196. Funereal (Please Crit)
  197. Up then Down (I'll Get You On My Way Down)
  198. By The Time You Realise It, It's Probably Too Late
  199. lullaby - poem
  200. where do you start when writing songs?
  201. where do you start when writing songs?
  202. Diner for Two
  203. One Last Goodbye:What you think?
  204. Move on - please critique
  205. The City of Lost Amigos
  206. The Deepest Part Of Whatever
  207. Untitled(critq for critq)
  208. Safe From the World
  209. "just another puppet"
  210. The song title is too long to fit in here.....click and please crit.
  211. Best songwriter?
  212. Best Verses/Songs
  213. Same Old Same Old
  214. 12 Bar Blues
  215. Ive Been Hypnotized
  216. Misuse
  217. Close The Lyric Battle!
  218. A moment for your thoughts
  219. Critic please , i have no name for it yet.
  220. None
  221. The Useless Sum
  222. no title
  223. Please Crit, No Title.....
  224. My Own Holocaust
  225. Critique the new style
  226. Only if I were Sober
  227. Transition from traditional to Extreme vocals?
  228. am i as bad as i think i am
  229. A Request
  230. "Marys Grave"
  231. Happy F*cking Birthday
  232. Moonlit Burning
  233. the magician
  234. Escape
  235. Faces Behind The Mirror
  236. Vocal Melody, and songwriting question
  237. Sour
  238. Innocent Love
  239. Untitled(revised)
  240. lyrics, just a little bit out there
  241. [Regrets are Cheap]
  242. "My Atlas"
  243. Something i wrote in a few minutes..
  244. does anyone know how the chillis write their lyrics
  245. Drums/Percussion HELP IS HERE~!
  246. come again
  247. Poetry Forums
  248. The worst impression to send on a second date
  249. Automotive Garden
  250. Walk Through Wonderland