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  1. Grey Skies
  2. A song about killing someone.
  3. What's he saying..?
  4. Lonely Loser
  5. And Then There Was Dancing
  6. i dont know
  7. a song wuthout a name.
  8. Hurricane
  9. Kisses mistaken as love
  10. carbon copys....(not sure yet, really rough)
  11. Please Crit This: "Undefined"
  12. "My Friend"...PLEASE CRIT THIS
  13. My Arachnid Lover
  14. Memory Kills the Atmosphere
  15. The Irritated Babysitter
  16. Cheitan's Girl
  17. Untitled, no beginning, no end, crits appreciated
  18. "Director Charities", please crit.
  19. My Love for you.
  20. Most disgusting, offensive type of lyrics
  21. my friend's pop punk song
  22. Arcadia
  23. Hollow God
  24. Triple Jump Fallout
  25. Mother, Can You Hear Me? crit for crit
  26. Drift Away
  27. Real Lovey-Dovey type poem for my girlfriend
  28. Psha The Red Velvet, crit for a crit
  29. Nothing but the Night
  30. The awkward silence
  31. Fool
  32. A Place For Me
  33. Their Shoulder, Crit please.
  34. The Art Of A Tragedy
  35. Sorta Demented Song I Rewrote
  36. Forsake Me
  37. End of the Road
  38. take me away (please crit this)
  39. ex best friend
  40. accidental war
  41. unnamed(please crit)
  42. The Tragedy Scene
  43. Cheap Pills
  44. Under The Floor, They Wait - crit for crit!
  45. Different Styles, Different Lyrics, Different Effect
  46. All I Had - plz crit
  47. Forever
  48. A Life Blinded By Moonbeams
  49. alive?
  50. infidelity
  51. Metaphysical
  52. The Permanent Mark
  53. Star Climber
  54. The Writers Curse
  55. Climb Blue, Fall Red
  56. Body By Charlie (Highly Offensive Joke Song)
  57. "kite"
  58. Sleep Well For Me Tonight
  59. Spinning Cycle
  60. New Song
  61. Say Goodbye And Goodnight
  62. Spinning Wheels
  63. another non-deceptive, street punk song i wrote that u can trash...
  64. First poem/song deal , please crit.
  65. Seek The Mistery - Critique 4 Critique
  66. Fresh Children
  67. less streetish, same non-deceptiveness, song name: Issue
  68. song structure
  69. look look!! please crit even though it isnt done.
  70. Second Chance
  71. Six Feet Above (Acoustic Song)
  72. The Disciple
  73. Crit Please - Reality Sucks
  74. Help with Lyrics
  75. world of nothing
  76. The Alchemist
  77. The Rose Realised
  78. I need YOU to crit this song!! PLZ!!!
  79. is this an "ok" structure for a song?
  80. So This Is The Product Of My Longstanding Writer's Block
  81. Another non-deceptive song. It's slower, its called Into The Unknown
  82. a "poem" i wrote a couple years ago - crits for this beginner would be appreciated!!
  83. fidelity vs. ancestry
  84. thirteen - plz help and crit
  85. untitled - please comment
  86. anyone want to donate some songs
  87. doG
  88. Yesterday's Heroes
  89. Tomb
  90. lyric writing
  91. Unnamed - Plz Crit
  92. [15]th
  93. Song Subjects
  94. Bottled Feelings
  95. ****ed Up With You. CRIT4CRIT
  96. Bleeding Heart's Poetry
  97. Resubmission of Into The Unknown, longer and improved crit/recrit please
  98. Into The Unknown, edited, resubmitted
  99. Cotton Candy Soul sharing, crit
  100. All But Fake - My First Try
  101. the end
  102. Adhedonia
  103. Bubblegum Western - its a work in progress
  104. [15]th crits please
  105. only Fools Choose to Lose
  106. If this sucks, tell me.
  107. My first poem to be posted
  108. ooh look...crit please
  109. a song about culture shock and racism and it rhymes.
  110. long time no write CRIT PLEASE!
  111. the corrupted crit for crit
  112. 45 Calibur Memories
  113. Dawn Breaks Dark (Havent written in awhile)
  114. Death Of A Rose
  115. Life gets better(rewritten)
  116. Pain Train(rewritten)
  117. not mine
  118. Tool for creating chord progressions
  119. Lines *crit for crit!!!*
  120. Frustrating Headache
  121. Critique some of my bands tunes
  122. The Wait
  123. Aesthetic Incarnate
  124. Young Songwriter
  125. trying to care
  126. Dirty Little Secret (Work In Progress)
  127. One Pin
  128. Getting Settled In
  129. Art Is Love
  130. free verse poem i wrote - crits appreciated!!
  131. loud.
  132. HElp my lyrics
  133. Golden Pigtails ~Crit for a Crit~
  134. Pain Inside
  135. Lyric Battle
  136. Mr. Mason
  137. Stand in the dark - VERY rough
  138. Esoteric Dreams
  139. Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder
  140. Singing
  141. "I cut my wrist"
  142. Gimme Sumthin Ta Do!
  143. Suck me dry
  144. Amorphous
  145. Silent Signs Of Absolute Apocalypse
  146. Learn The Art Of Darkness
  147. [A Mahogany Apologue, Vol. 1-8]
  148. two resubmissions(?) Song 1: Hate Song 2: Issue
  149. Verse to my song
  150. diffrent no complete please crit drit for a crit
  151. Check it out
  152. In The Place Of A Shepherd
  153. Idiot
  154. should it stay or should it go?
  155. "I cut my wrist" ow!
  156. ok, heres the deal
  157. 66
  158. Sorry
  159. "the passing"
  160. The Devil's Arithmetic
  161. composition help please
  162. you're as fickle as a flipping coin
  163. Crysanthenums
  164. OK, you all like "emotionally heavy" songs, so here ya go.
  165. Misaki Love
  166. Third finished song. No structure whatsoever.
  167. My work...Poem's/Lyric's
  168. Cliffhanger
  169. ''Girl With The Pearl'' - (claptonesque, pleses crit)
  170. Infinity is your line up ---crit for crit i guess
  171. The Rose
  172. I wrote this in spanish class
  173. Making it to the 'bacco store
  174. Apologetic.
  175. Rain Cloud in the Moonlight
  176. Mmmhmmm
  177. Rinse, repeat
  178. Punk In The Sun
  179. Metal Song, even though I dislike Metal
  180. Untitled, and needs a lot of work.
  181. Crucifix
  182. Crystallographic Skyline
  183. Know Her Like The Back Of My Head
  184. Resubmission (Possibly last) of Hate...
  185. Living The Life of A Victim
  186. Frustrating headache (revised)
  187. "finally"
  188. I Need Help
  189. "Hunger" crit for crit
  190. The site that blinds
  191. No title yet, but wouldn't mind some crit.....
  192. Little Ditty (please crit)
  193. Lookin for serious collaboration on lyrics with musician(s)
  194. Fell In a Hole
  195. Creating the Tragedy Scene
  196. Go Grab the Remote For This Conversation
  197. all i'll ever know
  198. Break Up Poem!!!!
  199. For Tony...The Final Poem
  200. Funereal (Please Crit)
  201. Up then Down (I'll Get You On My Way Down)
  202. By The Time You Realise It, It's Probably Too Late
  203. lullaby - poem
  204. where do you start when writing songs?
  205. where do you start when writing songs?
  206. Diner for Two
  207. One Last Goodbye:What you think?
  208. Move on - please critique
  209. The City of Lost Amigos
  210. The Deepest Part Of Whatever
  211. Untitled(critq for critq)
  212. Safe From the World
  213. "just another puppet"
  214. The song title is too long to fit in here.....click and please crit.
  215. Best songwriter?
  216. Best Verses/Songs
  217. Same Old Same Old
  218. 12 Bar Blues
  219. Ive Been Hypnotized
  220. Misuse
  221. Close The Lyric Battle!
  222. A moment for your thoughts
  223. Critic please , i have no name for it yet.
  224. None
  225. The Useless Sum
  226. no title
  227. Please Crit, No Title.....
  228. My Own Holocaust
  229. Critique the new style
  230. Only if I were Sober
  231. Transition from traditional to Extreme vocals?
  232. am i as bad as i think i am
  233. A Request
  234. "Marys Grave"
  235. Happy F*cking Birthday
  236. Moonlit Burning
  237. the magician
  238. Escape
  239. Faces Behind The Mirror
  240. Vocal Melody, and songwriting question
  241. Sour
  242. Innocent Love
  243. Untitled(revised)
  244. lyrics, just a little bit out there
  245. [Regrets are Cheap]
  246. "My Atlas"
  247. Something i wrote in a few minutes..
  248. does anyone know how the chillis write their lyrics
  249. Drums/Percussion HELP IS HERE~!
  250. come again