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  1. A Flood Filled With Tears
  2. Help With Singing
  3. A work in progress..
  4. Five Chairs Elsewhere Aligned
  5. Obliviousness
  6. SB (Crit 4 Crit)
  7. first song please critic
  8. Lavender Tainted
  9. "Silent Screams" im back after almost 2 years!
  10. Left
  11. Sunny Day Ruin
  12. My First Lyrical Post...
  13. Left on the bed (please critique)
  14. Wishing Well
  15. Jimmy was a superhero
  16. Eulogy Of A Meaningless Flirtation
  17. Voices
  18. New song CRIT PLZ
  19. Lyrics from the half-asleep version of me.
  20. new chapbook out!
  21. A Field of Granite Flowers
  22. Sketched out -- Drug and love induced song
  23. New song, theme not of love,depression or death crit 4 crit
  24. Sleep Spindle. crit 4 crit
  25. Carboard Cut Out People (crit away)
  26. (untitled) Crit please
  27. Reasons. (Revised)
  28. My latest(Revised)
  29. First Post...
  30. Lullaby (BUSTED, Plagarism Alert!!!)
  31. I'll See The World For You
  32. The Teacher Stole My Motivation
  33. A Fallen Soldier.(new heavy song we wrote)
  34. awaiting eternity (a song my band is working on kinda opethish)
  35. Lark of the morning(critqforcritq)
  36. Just a quick lil thing
  37. Please Rate My song "A Portrait Upon Thee"
  38. Nothing Lasts Forever
  39. Stand Up And Fight (crits please)
  40. Crit this lyric please ^^
  41. New Lyrics- I Cant Do This
  42. Shell of a Surgeon
  43. Fragile
  44. perfect words/ help!!!
  45. A terrible twist of fate for Jimmy!
  46. Blacklight
  47. Cicade de Deus
  48. We Hid And They Sang From Afar
  49. Metalish ballad I wrote a few years back
  50. Another lyric (not real cheery, but not a slit your wrist-er!)
  51. My Song .. Give Suggestions
  52. Run
  53. "The Victim"
  54. Journal of the Unconscious - crit for crit
  55. The Buried And The Forgotten (Crit 4 Crit)
  56. "Crawl Out" Crit Me and Suggest
  57. A) Live in a dead car B) Sell Out, and our friends hate us
  58. ~Stampede~
  59. Life a second time around (crit please)
  60. New Lyric...ballad-ish.
  61. my first song (no name yet)..plz comment
  62. Touch.... read please
  63. My newest song (crits please)
  64. Battle Hymn of the Intellegensia (crit for crit)
  65. Should I keep or trash?
  66. The Walking Dead - crit for crit and whatnot
  67. song that randomly cropped up
  68. ..I'm Going To Sleep, But Never Coming Awake..PLZ CRIT
  69. The boy who died from unrequited love
  70. Through the Tip of a Fountain Pen
  71. First song (good morning)
  72. Concept idea
  73. "Heart of Glass" (alright, lay into it...>_> )
  74. New England Dreams Part II
  75. "Bloodwords"...crit please
  76. ~Unbuckled in the Driver's Seat~ (poem)
  77. "On The Run"
  78. A Breath Through Denial (Crit please)
  79. Girls do this
  80. Lyrics for a Metal Epic
  81. I Drive Better (long-time-no-post)
  82. Quarter Dream
  83. ***Age Check***
  84. A Ballad Of A Necromantic - We all have skeletons in our closet...don't we?
  85. Try and Hide (if you crit this, I WILL crit yours straight off)
  86. ideas that need to be put together
  87. Man-Eater
  88. Doe-like Brown Eyes Filled with Love
  89. Then you found it wasn't there?
  90. Tragedy Unfolding (crit 4 crit)
  91. "Adrenaline" crit please
  92. My second song attempt-please crit
  93. Don't Believe Me (I will match your crit)
  94. Time Tells All Lies
  95. Alone In The Darkness (crit 4 crit)
  96. Repute
  97. Tales of the fallen and the faded -revised-crit and i'll crit back
  98. I Laugh
  99. Back, With Four Shorties
  100. October
  101. Angels with dirty faces - My own worst enemy
  102. first song
  103. "Drowning" Please Crit
  104. Hey Po-rn Free!!!!
  105. State of Catalepsy (looking for some input for improvement)
  106. To Us
  107. It's inevitable like an outpouring from a blackened sky.
  108. critique my lyrics please :)
  109. "Would Anyone Come" - crit please
  110. lovely sylvia withers in these walls
  111. voice trianing
  112. I Don't Want to be There
  113. Deal (not sure of this title)
  114. Tree Dressed Like a Blackbird
  115. depending on perception
  116. Still Fighting (I used to be here years ago... haha IM BACK!)
  117. Las Cruces
  118. Modern Robin Hood
  119. There Is No Justice Here
  120. Shattered Faith (New Version)
  121. I know how you hate long song titles almost as much as you hate having......"
  122. "Shooting Star" please crit
  123. A Lover's Lament (Poetic Story)
  124. The Living Dead
  125. My apologize to those offended
  126. The inside - crt plzz
  127. The Victory Song
  128. The Shadows
  129. Executive Improval
  130. Hang 'em High
  131. Queen Mary
  132. Another One
  133. ?
  134. Angry letter me and a mate wrote to nestle
  135. My first song :)
  136. One Way Conversation To The Mirror - Get Fcking Over It
  137. "My song to you"...
  138. No No (I will match your crit)
  139. L'homme sans une visage.
  140. No idea what to title it
  141. Tommy Pulled the Trigger (crit please)
  142. Where are you?
  143. The Change In Your Pockets
  144. omg lyrics... Highway Man
  145. Pennsylvania Avenue
  146. Title goes here....
  147. A Rhetoric That Doesn't Match The Facts Presented
  148. Wasted
  149. How to write instrumentals.....
  150. Running away to black paradise
  151. Loway tunnel
  152. There's one tree left, let's start a fire
  153. Pinned
  154. Different Type of SONG!
  155. To speak...
  156. Disappearing Ink..........Crit4Crit
  157. - Conversations in Short Sleeves and Blue Flip-flops
  158. Halogenic Misery (will gladly C4C)
  159. Night Eyes Glisten
  160. Smile...
  161. Butterfly - please crit.
  162. Wouldn't she notice the screw in her back?
  163. New song, no title yet.
  164. first post here
  165. Rock and roll "will match crit"
  166. Withering Away (C4C)
  167. That Night
  168. something to easy your aching hearts
  169. I learned tonight....
  170. Yearning
  171. ill crit for crit please :)
  172. Across the Pond is Clarity (Crit for crit)
  173. Monster - poem
  174. The Philadelphia Experiment
  175. Stop, drop and roll honey - Crit for crit
  176. help plz
  177. Gentleman are best left impressed
  178. voce help
  179. "Pinned" touched up
  180. Chasing Games
  181. River (crit for a crit)
  182. Resonate
  183. need help in song writing
  184. Lovers don't break up, they tear up (crit for crit)
  185. Do you care about rhymes ?
  186. I know i was never quite what you bargained for.
  187. Sheila's not a madman
  188. ten cent love song
  189. Golden Girl in a Plastic Box
  190. "This Medication Needs a Cure"
  191. Let's put this conversation on ice.
  192. Drug Me
  193. Follow Her To Vegas
  194. Some Story This Is
  195. Scarecrow
  196. ATTN S&L: Your input is needed for the future of this forum!(On the issue of S&L mod)
  197. Natalie
  198. Confused In Life (C4C)
  199. Spiders go to hell crit4crit
  200. Sixth Deliver
  201. Peace is not chaos
  202. ATTN: S&L etiquette guide, read before you post
  203. Lost.
  204. Despondent Minds Cloudy Haze
  205. That's a little more time inside your head.
  206. Happy Chance
  207. Dolls
  208. the neon starlight
  209. Derailed, a fun metal song
  210. Bleeding Trees in the Mist
  211. Steel resides
  212. "Never meant to shine" ill crit for crit as always :)
  213. Mad Props for Pops
  214. Can't Buy The Bomb.
  215. Steven - read it *shakes fist at you*
  216. Yikes.
  217. Freakin' sweet! Haha, read it! C4C
  218. Ethereal conspiracy - you know the drill, crit for crit
  219. Manipulated Light
  220. The Warmth
  221. someone like to comment an italian glam song?
  222. Manipulated Light (finished version) c4c
  223. Jonny's tale - No brainer punk song, crit for crit
  224. Condemned
  225. new song, no title yet
  226. Our wick is burning low
  227. Better Things
  228. Just a new name
  229. A Dark And Lonely Road (C4C) ...yep
  230. not pure
  231. The Demons of August
  232. The Balcony
  233. a kinetic jaw of asphalt
  234. "lost" ill crit for crit as always :)
  235. Postmortem
  236. song i wrote a while back..
  237. It's the shadows
  238. Emo Lyrics Please Read
  239. "her" C4C
  240. Am I Alone?
  241. first song, please critique
  242. Vocals
  243. A Tree, A Car, A Night, A Regret
  244. dug out an old one...
  245. 125 miles at 110 degrees true.
  246. Lights
  247. The Delinquency Song
  248. Ad Infinitum Sentencing
  249. "Sparklez" <---Its a W.I.P.
  250. ya.. where do i improve