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- Renaissance
- my friends lyrics... plz rate
- Distant Hearts(*CRIT. 4 CRIT.*)
- Never Saw The End
- Mind, Body and Soul
- hypocrit denial
- You Are Drinking Root Beer And Water
- Whirlwind Of Destruction
- just a simple saying/lyric for a song
- please crit this
- I didnt write this :(
- Yesterday
- uh oh! UH OH!!! WTF?!
- Messiah
- ***Post-It Notes Cover My Walls, If Only I Could Read All of Them..
- Fate of Many
- Untitled, Please Crit, Give sugg for title
- screamo song
- Still untitled ,.......?
- Shattered (Crit 4 Crit)
- Tough Goodbyes\The Leaving Song - Crits PLZ!
- alright i got another one....
- amazing lyrics i wrote
- ***My Piano Plays Itself at an Attempt to Gain My Attention***Crit for a Crit
- Broken Mirrors
- So Far Away (First Song!!)
- First Song need help
- midnight suicide
- Stupid Question
- Irreality
- "Porno & Donuts"
- Spinning Again
- Devil's Break (Tell me what you think)
- Exotic Girl
- Waiting For You(Crit4Crit)
- What about your crit4crit thing????
- I Think This Means What I Think I'm Not Sure Crit Me Please
- eeeehh..... it's called- blah blah blah?
- ~Inspired Journey~
- Horrible Parody... why did i write this?
- first song ever written -please crit
- First song (I felt was worth posting)
- My Antidote
- Black & White (Crit 4 Crit)
- 12" Voice
- Songwriter needed......
- What Is Beauty? (written on the bus) crits needed
- Untitled (PLEASE CRIT!)
- "Animal (Set me free)" by Jaime Villarreal
- Shadows Fall (i will crit back)
- Lock the Doors, the Salesmen are Coming!
- Farewell (a 2-part epic)...tell me what you think...
- Ramsey
- Darkness Falls For Me
- Ocean sky. New song. Crit or die.
- Love Letters Look Better On Fire(please crit)
- Trade Crits..."Dragoon of corruption"
- Untitled(so far...crit 4 crit please!)
- "The Unfortunate Feeling of Being Me"
- Nintendo song
- Third Song - Looking for input
- Snowmen
- imaginary friends
- jack in the box
- "A Lycanthropic Tale"
- Metal Songs
- Sunflowers
- Where are the waves - new song with an Mp3 recording
- Falling to hell or marked by the devil
- Singing Through the Lampost.
- Punk Rock Anthem - Please Crit
- I watch
- Rain Drops That Never Fall
- Followed by Failure((CRIT! PLEASE!))
- Journalism.
- Reality (Revised)
- untitled
- Im kinda stuck here
- Always Be There (*Crit 4 Crit*)
- No Comfort In Sorrys. (My first song in over a month. Crit 4 a Crit.)
- Moulded Pain
- No Name Yet
- Generic Love song (Crit for Crit)
- Blasphemer (Perverseverance)---crit please!!
- One Last Time---crit please!
- Lets Write A Song Together
- ....this one is about a funeral...
- Nov. 22
- I need a little help
- Lead Flippers -- a haiku (crit for crit)
- my first attempt at writing lyrics
- Forgive and forget
- Song I wrote at school, might call it Radio but that seems kinda boring.
- My First Poem about Happiness and The Way It Makes Us Green*******Crit for a Crit
- Untitled Love Song
- Writing a happy song
- "Meet Me at Brighton"
- Dregs
- What Angel
- I tell you the truth
- A Poor Farewell
- Afterlife Ill
- untitled
- Fear of Living-Please CRIT
- The Faltering of a Friendship
- Ten Times
- Take me away
- Then came daybreak.
- Starting Over, Wanting Out (CRIT FOR CRIT)
- the dead can masturbate(a lot more thoughful than it seems)
- twinkle twinkle
- Better Something Than Nothing (Please Crit)
- A poem i wrote - working title is encore
- Shadow Of You
- Favorable Outcome(crit will be appreciated)
- Fairytale
- I Am Immortal
- Worth Hearts - Song...need music help
- Longer/Fueled Damage (2 songs)
- Just rest in
- Obscurity
- my pen
- new song please crit guys :D
- Untitled (as of now)
- a song i wrote
- afeared
- Break The Routine
- Chess
- Courage
- Courage
- mistaken
- Untitled crit 4 crit
- thoughts of my twisted mind
- this time it's addiction
- vocals
- Lose Your Faith
- Tips on getting more inflection in my voice...
- just a poem
- Broken Promise, Broken Face
- Reality-seriously, someone crit this
- Short Stories with Happy Endings
- ID... crit 4 a crit
- "Gunfire Lullabies"
- totally ingraved
- Grimalkin
- a poem...i guess
- Read Me!
- Patchwork (rough draft metal song)
- Blasphemy Be Thy Name (crit please)
- Words you don’t believe, and words that doesn’t matter
- Shadow Puppet, my first complete song
- Without You
- Lyrics I've written (pls crit)
- let me know wat u think
- tell me wot u think
- a tip...
- R.I.P (Rest In Pieces)
- --Untitled--
- a poem i wrote at math class i was bored so this was what i made....
- These Promises
- i need help to write my first song
- Disease
- Sunsets and Swingsets
- my only--working title
- Critique my song please...
- Even from Life
- this inside story-- CRIT!
- Nightmare
- Ocean Euphoria
- Painting The Map Red
- Updated Version Of Older Song
- Love to Hate you(crit for crit)
- lyrics please crit Can't find a way
- a rose to the dead
- Untitled lyrics_pls crit
- "Dear You,"
- That one night
- Spiteful
- "Taken Girl" New Version...
- Somnium.... crit 4 a crit
- first song please crit.
- son of satan (not satanic just a song about well ull see if you read it thanks
- Bad Poetry
- When It Hits You (Looks Aren't Everything), crit and i'll crit back
- Christmas Day
- I Wish You Were Me
- Not sure what to title this..its just spur of the moment
- The Disruption of Harmony
- The Reflection Off a Passer-By
- Final Chance (Part 1) needs crits
- "Like An Angel"
- Emblem of Demise
- Certain Flawed Individuals
- Angel of Death
- Your seven days
- Years
- Prog Epic... rough draft that needs a name.
- Dark Butterfly
- I need help!!!
- These Promises (Totally Redone Thanks 2 UR Crits)
- Stand to fight
- Where have all the fish gone? - (A metaphorical piece)
- I ******* hate you
- Breathing (crit please) :)
- Sex Drive
- helpless
- Stench of betrayal...whatever
- Ripping Holes in Orange Trash Bags, for Poncho Use
- untitled(CRIT PLEASE!!)
- untitled:it is like black metal i guess:(please crit)
- What all things become. (please crit.)
- New song crit 4 crit
- Some good music
- Where Dreams Die And Bodies Lie (poem)
- Just Smile (Opinions/onions, please)
- sarah
- Guess the lyrics game!
- “You know this already” No i'm not dead... not yet anway
- Flew Too High
- What do you think of my lyrics? I'm new at this.
- Mask of Purity
- crit 4 a crit
- The Awful Sin, The Depression Within
- 'Trapped' plz crit
- Thought that I was over you
- My Rules on giving other people crits.
- fissures in the sky.
- Contrition(crit for a crit)
- The best way to find home is just to create your own
- Darken
- 1111....my song
- a new song..needs alittle work so please crit
- Just wrote...
- Nothing Last Forever
- Awake - pls (as ever)....
- Something To Bitch About
- The Name Across My Chest..another spur of the moment
- Ball and Chain
- Silence Of The Night
- “Mornings’ Half Tones”
- Gone For Good
- Quality Oak (48 second Grindcore Song)
- Scatter the Shadows
- "NO ONE" ...a lyric a friend of mine wrote...
- A Matter Of Mind
- I am so truly goth, crit plz
- thinkin o callin it "mirror"
- The City of Summer and Winter
- Drama Queen
- Here's the music to some of my songs
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