Album Rating: 4.0
Listen dude, gonna be a bit blunt. First of all, you gotta stop reacting so strongly to people critiquing your work. If you generally freak out because someone gives you a valid point, all of which are valid in this thread by the way, people WILL start to hate you and even make fun of you to the point of just negging your reviews on sight. My advice to you would be to change this and start working on improving your writing with the many helpful comments people gave you in here. No one was telling you in here to fuck off and leave or anything.
Now, first off, your review is honestly a mess. The paragraphs are not spaced properly, you have informal grammar, and you use yourself in the review quite often. If you want examples I could give you some. My suggestion is, stop typing so fast like you said, and treat reviewing with care. Proofread, re read it at least twice to see if it's ready to be posted, or even ask a friendly user, contributor or staff to read it over for you and they'll help you. If you want to become a better writer, this all needs to happen man. It's a hard truth, but becoming a seasoned writer takes time. Hell, I have 101 and I'm still not seasoned yet! Cheers.
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Album Rating: 4.0
^Everything Mongi said.
I STAND ATOP A SPIIIIRAL OF STAAAAIRS
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mongi is correct
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Have a pos laddie...
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Album Rating: 4.0
later man, and grow the fuck up.
Nice job on making stuff up too, you're quite the story teller :^)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dzUwrICxGCU
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Album Rating: 3.5
I think Mongi just drove him away... and good riddance
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Album Rating: 4.5
you dunno who hugh syme is seriously?
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Album Rating: 4.5
i didnt know his ass until i got into rush i gota admit
shoulda realised he did megadeth shit too when i was jammin em but i was 12
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Album Rating: 4.5
hugh symes my fuckin neighbor
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Album Rating: 4.5
nah i didnt know him til rush either but ya
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Album Rating: 4.5
sucks this dude left he was gonna do the discog
not that any new turds woulda checked but hey more rush reviews is always sweet
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Album Rating: 4.5
haha dude im glad these new kids dont know rock they could fuckin make judas priest gay
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Kids these days and their dubwalks!
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Negging cause you're dumb
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God, this review was so awful
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"Listen to side A, then listen to side B and tell me that they are not completely different" like, wtf does that even mean??????
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Album Rating: 4.5 | Sound Off
m'man is back
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Dude, I apologise for everything. God, wtf was I think back then?????
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OMG Please tell me my Sputnikmusic.com: Relevant Or Ridiculous video still exists
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Album Rating: 4.5
ssweet
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