Adam Emeritus Thomas wrote reviews this short and they were wag .
Me too
Digging: Strictly Ballroom - Hide Here Forever
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Album Rating: 2.5
I'll keep it in mind. Never really struck me that those words would be considered complicated
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its not complicated, but you could use with a simplification of your language in general if you're going to go for shorter reviews. the general rule of journalism is to make it so a 4th grader can read your piece and at the very least generally understand it.
Digging: Captain, We're Sinking - The Future Is Cancelled
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A 4th grader tried to read a Klap review and he died
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Album Rating: 2.5
Writing shorter reviews is just as much about not writing more than you have to (i.e. repeating yourself) as it is about making it read better though
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I'm gonna ask my english teacher about this on monday, I'll get back to you
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Album Rating: 3.0
if u were to compare ur writing skills to slipknot
im waitin
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there is nothing wrong with repeating yourself within reason.
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It's ok to repeat things for emphasis...EMPHASIS
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Album Rating: 2.5
I'm just saying it's not like writing shorter reviews is pointless if you don't use simpler language
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well i mean also realize that all of your writing flourishes serve to artificially inflate a review whether intentional or not, and when writing a short review that means your review has even less content than you realize. thats generally applicable to any review, not this one in particular
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Album Rating: 2.5
More content doesn't necessarily make it better, it's often unnecessary. I guess it depends on what you look for in reading the review
And this one focuses solely on the music
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but i learned almost nothing besides how to use superfluous language in describing something that doesnt need it
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Album Rating: 2.5
ok then
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i mean im honestly trying to give you feedback you dont have to keep defending yourself im not trying to troll you like everyone else here. just think about, and read your future reviews over again and if it strikes you to consider my advice, do so.
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Album Rating: 2.5
I am considering it, I only reply back cos I'm trying to understand your perspective on it
thanks
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Album Rating: 3.0
iluvatar will u give feedback to 1 ov my rvws too plz
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Album Rating: 3.0
like real HARD feedback u no
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Album Rating: 3.0
everything in my musical side tells me i should like this.
why don't i like this?
Digging: Deafheaven - Sunbather |
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Album Rating: 3.0
props for giving it a 'good' rating then
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