i didnt understand what they are in the middle of or what the thing is that is special maybe im just being dim
Digging: Diagonal - The Second Mechanism
In my opinion, this is just a thrash album with the cookie monster featured on vocals.
hehe cookie monster
Album Rating: 3.5
Great review for a great album. As one of my fave bands, i would expect nothing less than the best reviews for them, and this truly is top notch. Have a pos
@menawati, I hear ya it's just hard to explain lol. like i go on to say in the next sentence it's indescribable.
@onlyhuman, thanks man
Digging: Julie Byrne - Not Even Happiness
Ye but saying something is indescribable in a review is like saying you don't have the skills to describe it properly. It's like a self admission of incapability and brings the review down.
Album Rating: 4.0
Nice review dude classic album
okay thanks for the honest feedback. i'll do my best to describe it better.
I feel bad now.
Ha no worries, if you don't think it makes sense other people probably won't think it makes sense. but if you listen to the intro yourself you'll see what i mean lol
All i meant was saying you cant describe something in a review which is a block of text in which you describe things is sorta letting yourself down. You are better than that and it creates a negative feel.
lol i gotcha bro i said i was gonna change it ;P
I think what he said makes sense, not that I agree with it at all. When the first track starts, which is rather abrupt, it is already obvious that the guitars are in the midst of creating something unique. Just work on the wording.
I edited it do you guys mind checking if that paragraph looks better now.
@xing king, any suggestions on how to describe it better would be great i'm having a hard time unless
you think it looks better now.
ye much much better
I would cut "Honestly" out and "Then" out from the next sentence.
"The opening guitars are the perfect start for the album as they work together to create an uneasy opening. About a minute into the song there are some gnarly growls that help set the tone before the riffs and the relentless drums kick in."
damn feedback city, alright thanks man
I would actually cut out the first "opening" too since it's said twice in the same sentence.
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