Album Rating: 4.5

Thanks for the tips everyone ill edit as soon as I can

Digging: GZA - Liquid Swords

Heartsounds is an improvement over their debut in pretty much every aspect, what is most noticeable is the dual vocals with Murray’s slightly harsher voice and Nichols soothing lines.

This really should be two sentences just because of how awkwardly it reads, but if you wanted to keep it as one you could say: "Heartsounds is an improvement over their debut in pretty much every aspect, most noticeably the dual vocals with Murray’s slightly harsher voice and Nichols soothing lines."

In fact that whole second paragraph is pretty poorly constructed:

The first track shows this off and also shows off the bands more cohesive writing skills, especially with Murray’s guitar work pulling off some technicality that wasn’t shown on the debut, using metal melodies while making it still feel like pop punk is damn impressive. The first minute of 'Race to the Bottom' shows this off nicely and a shredding guitar solo in a pop punk song is always very satisfying.

Overuse of "shows this off", also the first sentence is joined by so many commas...it could be separated into two, maybe even three sentences.

The rest of the review is decent, just try to expand on your view points more...it will give the review a more detailed, fleshed out appearance. For a first review this is good though, so I'll pos : )

Album Rating: 4.5

Didn't notice that haha thanks

hey just saw what sowing said

You could say The first track shows this off and Also "displays"

showcases is good too like something showcases the bands sound or talent.
Just wanted to let u know in case your looking for other words to use ;)

Digging: The Wonder Years - The Greatest Generation

Album Rating: 4.5

I was wondering what words to say thank you lol

Album Rating: 4.5

Feeling burnt out from playing only metal for 6 years they decided to re-live their passion and released their first
effort Until We Surrender with Epitaph Records. The debut was filled with infectious pop punk and memorable hooks,
but the band is back to prove that they can raise the bar.

thus proving that pop punk is better than metal.

Digging: Faith No More - The Real Thing

Lol

I thought it was a pretty good review, pos'd. Although this really isn't one of my favorite genres to be honest lol.

Album Rating: 4.5

but it's so good.

Andcas don't you get tired of dancing?

Digging: Mekaal Hasan Band - Saptak