I read it without puking, so eh pos
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Album Rating: 3.5
Sarcasm, bro. I wonder who's alt you are.
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thank you macadool
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Also, don't let Sowing see this or else new assholes will be torn
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Album Rating: 5.0
I'm a very opened mind person, sorry.
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Album Rating: 3.5
I'm sure Sowing's had to deal with plenty of people who don't like Brand New. His first review was for Devil and God, wasn't it?
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"you misspelled jesse's name in the second paragraph"
thanks i didnt see that one
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"I'm a very opened mind person, sorry. "
oh ok i get it now
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be nicer please
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i meant to me
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Album Rating: 4.5
ur ded and gon
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Album Rating: 3.5
"i think even crandy could do better"
Crandy could do much better. I recall that he actually like this one? I'm not sure.
"be nicer please"
Do you even know who Crandy is?
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"ur ded and gon"
stop that sardonism is not approved
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Album Rating: 4.5
ur not approved ur gey fag
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bro don't listen to a word these guys say. because of you, i'm gonna say "fuck that 4.1 average rating, yidnarc's review told me otherwise".
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thank you mindle
im glad you enjoyed unlike the nayers here
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"i think even crandy could do better"
I miss him!
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just to add a bit of constructive criticism. your review is fair and alright and all, you hit on the right points. but the way its structured needs to be worked on a little bit. it reads as though you wrote the review by just making points as they came to you, kind of like "this part sounds like this... actually, thats reminds me, that's another thing i dont like about the album", rather than having a structure and working around it. maybe for your next review you could write a plan about what points you want to make and where you want to make them, before going about with the actual writing. that way it wont so much seem like you thought it up as you went along.
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oh and of course proof read by reading it aloud to yourself. some awkward syntax and semantic problems.
"hurts the album for the worse" -- hurt implies that its for the worse
"for me personally, in my opinion" -- personally implies that it's your opinion
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Album Rating: 3.5
It's like he wrote a diary entry as he went along listening to this album. "Oh like that part where screamed in that one song, but in some songs, he really needs to get over himself."
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