lol will i think you screwed up hard this one
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I would say that in your next review, try to write more like you would talk
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Album Rating: 3.0
yea writing seemed pretty awkward in a lot of places
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Album Rating: 2.0
I was 14 when this came out, and even then I was like "yeah this is a 2".
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I remember when I was 14 too... someone had a sticker from this band on their notebook in Earth Science, and the teacher was like, 'you have a corn sticker. You like corn.' Total dork, but for a minute I was with this band. This band is just misunderstood.
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Album Rating: 3.0
is that Clutterbuck in your avatar?
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Album Rating: 2.0
Whoever it is, I bet he ain't got a gal quite as fine as the one on tom arnold's arm.
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Album Rating: 3.0
yea she looks pretty cute
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Album Rating: 2.0
seriously, 4 people pos'd this?
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i dont know what to say. i think you faggots are only 'neg ing it because i rated it good, while you all despise it. ive only seen one comment that stood out about the actual review. the rest of this is bullshit.
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No this is terribly written
But there's the spirit!
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ok, what do you want me to do? nobody has given me any advice on how to fix these mistakes.
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First of all there's the summary: the band has begun the downfall of their career yet the album is still, apparently, excellent - that just doesn't work. Neither does the term "succession sound"; plus, it's not like a similar sound and the "depressing lyrics" weren't prevalent on any Korn album after this
What 'Issues' has experimented on is the deciding factor of how much longer Korn can keep up the same old thing over and over again.
I get what you're attempting to say here but it literally doesn't make any grammatical sense. How do you experiment on a deciding factor that ultimately is nothing more the same sound they've implemented in the past? That's not experimenting
Spiraling out of control, Korn has finally crafted something that actually half way reacts to the debut content that got them their fans.
So what were the last 2 albums?
This album, trialed and few errors, still makes the same mistakes as the old, but brings out something slightly new, and is a great way for Korn to depart. (So to speak)
Same mistakes but few errors?? And, trialed? I get the feeling you're trying to be hyper-intellectual with your thoughts here, but trust me when I say that the simpler option would be far more beneficial
Soundly speaking, this is many of Korn's members last time to truly show their talent, (Korn's standards) and provide the final front for all of Korn's fans.
Again, this just reads horribly and makes me question your sobriety
Where the overall eerie sounds presented with the rhythm guitar, and the low tuned bass provide backdrop for the amazingly dark lyrics.
Broken sentence
Many tracks in this album take a completely turn than the famous 'Life is Peachy',
*Completely different approach
where the darkness was presented in a much more spunky manner sound wises,
*wise - and spunky? Seriously??
'Dead' slips into the one of the most popular songs
Lose the first "the"
The bass expressed in these songs, both by drummer David Silveria and bassist 'Fieldy' really gets the ear excited.
Why? Never blanket statement or generalize if you're not going to provide samples or examples
You can't help but to bust out when listening to this.
Redundant sentence. And bust out of what - your pants?
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attempt to piss out everything you've heard in it before.
wut
Some of the most exciting songs in here include 'Trash', 'Beg for Me', 'Hey Daddy', and 'Counting'. All of these tracks have one particular thing in common: they are all represented by an interlude
And this alone makes them exciting??
wicked dark in sound including 'Am I Going Crazy'.
Lol wicked dark. Hang ten dude
(If you've ever heard their debut)
This needs to be included in the previous sentence, it's just existing on its own
As far as the actual members go, this is 'Head's' last album.
He recorded two more albums with the band - Untouchables and Take A look In The Mirror
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well okay, thanks lol. by the way, for the 'Head' statement, i was referring to the fact that the next two albums he did dont do him any justice at all.
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I would say just write your reviews like you talk. Don't worry about style, because that will come with time. Your own style is yours. Other users should be able to tell that it is you writing your reviews
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okay, that is really all i needed to hear.
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I would say just write your reviews like you talk. Don't worry about style, because that will come with time. Your own style is yours. Other users should be able to tell that it is you writing your reviews
That's the worst advice anyone could ever give
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ok, what do you want me to do? nobody has given me any advice on how to fix these mistakes.
My only advice involves your bathtub and a toaster.
Your reviews in general are crap
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cool
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