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letsgofishing
April 14th 2011


1705 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

Finally got to this...



Might be way off here, but this kind of reads like a very extended sound-off. I understand what you're trying to do here, nothing turns people off on this site (with the exception of track by track) then a long review, but obviously you have to strike a balance. I personally believe this could of used one more (small) paragraph. The last paragraph kind of suffers. It just seems a little cramped in spaces, as if you're trying to cram your entire argument against the album in less than 4 sentences. That potentially might bring confusion.. Of course, I do prefer longer reviews, so I'm not exactly your target market.



Really great write up though-POS.

lancebramsay
April 15th 2011


1585 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

I personally believe that this could have used one more (small) paragraph.
Looks that

way - Went ahead and added a conclusion to the review.

lancebramsay
April 19th 2011


1585 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

Pitchfork stole my opening!



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