Woods of Desolation Torn Beyond Reason
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Crysis
Staff Reviewer
March 7th 2011


16478 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Yeah, get rid of the entire first paragraph and instead sum it up in the opening sentence of the second.

EDIT- nvm you already did that with this sentence

While this Australian duo are not anywhere near being revolutionary, their success lies in their perfection of formula.


That says exactly what you were trying to say in the entire first paragraph but you were unable to convey because of all the filler.

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

i tried doing what you suggested, Crysis. did it improve the review at all, or is there still work that could be done?

EDIT - i just saw your edit. regardless, does it work any better as it is?

Crysis
Staff Reviewer
March 7th 2011


16478 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Don't really like that whole blurb you have in parentheses, and still not entirely certain why you compare this to Fen so much, but the review other than that isn't too too bad.

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

i condensed the parentheses blurb, but i don't think i'll eliminate it completely. it's just a matter of personal taste, i guess.

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


damn it crysis we talked about this

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

yeah, why in god's name would anyone help a user improve his writing?

reading shoutbox posts is pretty entertaining sometimes, not gonna lie.

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


you're pretty weird, aren't you

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


fuckin weirdo

Ire
March 7th 2011


41828 Comments


hey guys rec me post bm and dm

Crysis
Staff Reviewer
March 7th 2011


16478 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

post-dm how about btbam

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


yeah I listen to woods of desolation when I study

but that's just me


Ire
March 7th 2011


41828 Comments


guitars are loud? -------> guitars have reverb? ------> shoegaze

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

In all seriousness I always appreciate recs for anything good, and yes, that includes post-bm (even if that genre doesn't actually exist). Don't worry, I know Ire's comment was not meant in that nature: I'm just sayin'.

And @Relinquished: I actually am very weird irl. I have ADHD, I'm the only person I know who listens to the music I do, and I have the attention span of a goldfish.

woot taking comments out of context and waay too literally.

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

And WoD is actually pretty good music for studying.

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


And @Relinquished: I actually am very weird irl. I have ADHD, I'm the only person I know who listens to the music I do, and I have the attention span of a goldfish.


whoa bro did I ask

BallsToTheWall
March 7th 2011


44805 Comments

Album Rating: 2.0 | Sound Off

Album needs more trance elements.

Digging: Pink Turns Blue - If Two Worlds Kiss

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

whoa bro did I ask


nah, I know you didn't. I'm just rambling.

Relinquished
March 7th 2011


25961 Comments


weirdo

wyankeif1337
March 7th 2011


6739 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

I know, right?



BallsToTheWall
March 7th 2011


44805 Comments

Album Rating: 2.0 | Sound Off

My name is cheryl and I'm your daughter



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