Bullet for My Valentine Scream, Aim, Fire
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fr33convict
February 20th 2011


11705 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

SCREAMMMMM
AIMMMMMMMM
FIRRREEEEEEEEEEEE

Knott-
Emeritus
February 20th 2011


10198 Comments


title track was my ex girlfriends favourite song

its ok though shes gone now

sifFlammable
February 20th 2011


2741 Comments


scene kidddddddddddddz

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 20th 2011


7127 Comments


Yeah its simple, but it works well.

endorphin
February 21st 2011


184 Comments


So corny. So so corny.

theacademy
Staff Reviewer
February 21st 2011


28838 Comments


OVER THE TOP OVER THE TOP

Digging: Charli XCX - Sucker

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 21st 2011


7127 Comments


@theacademy
you seem to be a little obsessed.

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 21st 2011


7127 Comments


was the review any good, any pointers people want it add?

fr33convict
February 21st 2011


11705 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

ok hold on...

fr33convict
February 21st 2011


11705 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

Bullet For My Valentine's second effortis something different showing a different side to themselves and thier fans.

effort is*
One of the first things listeners will notice is that while its Bullet For My Valentine, its faster and has a better balance...

Of course it's Bullet for My Valentine. You should probably change this too while it still sounds like Bullet.
Also featuring in Scream Aim Fire is the added melody lines...

This is a bit of an awkward sentence... Try changing it to something like Also featured on Scream Aim Fire.
A weak point of the album includes the transition between songs, more often than not listerners will find tracks blending together, especially during the faster, thrashier songs for example from 'Hearts Burst Into Fire' to 'Waking The Demon' to 'Dissapear' listeners will find this especially blending together, with no break from the fast-paced chugging.
Change the first comma after songs into a period. Add a period after after thrashier songs (which isn't a word just FWI). Reword that last part to something more along the lines of:

For example 'Hearts Burst Into Fire', 'Waking The Demon', and 'Dissapear' all blend together with no break from the fast-paced chugging.

fr33convict
February 21st 2011


11705 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

Bullet For My Valentine show great enthusiasm in Scream Aim Fire

I would add a period at the end there and and change the word "in" to "on".

Your second-to-last last paragraph begins by approaching the same thing covered in the previous paragraph then switched suddenly to talking about the vocals. That first sentence should be removed. Also, the term is pick-slide, not pick scratch :P

Overall Scream Aim Fire is an enjoyable listen, as long as the tracks don't start to blend together

Add a period and take out the comma.
a plus of the album is the developed song-writing and contextual maturity displayed on this album and while this album is consistantly good it is not as yet of a high quality which is expected from the band and it remains a great progression from 'The Poison'.

This last sentence is kind of a mess. Just do some basic revising. Sorry, I was going to do this earlier but I was on my iPod. In short just work on your grammar and using the right punctuation marks at the right time. Your biggest problem is run-on sentences. Read your review out-loud before you post it. If the sentences sound like they jump around to much or go on too long they do. Good review man, just make sure you take the advice people give you. You've got potential.

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 21st 2011


7127 Comments


Thanks fr33, youv obviously put some time into this, i will take your thoughts and use them accordingly in my next work. i do realise my grammer is a main offender as well as the couple of spelling errors. And flow needs a huge work of improvement.

And the pick slide vs. pick scratch just depends on which circles your musical experience grew in. However yours does sound more correct.

fr33convict
February 21st 2011


11705 Comments

Album Rating: 1.5

You know you can edit your reviews right?

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 21st 2011


7127 Comments


yeah, but it would make all the help comments a bit redundant, if others can see this as a train wreck they can learn from it with peoples examples in the comment sections.

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
February 25th 2011


7127 Comments


thanks fr33. i might have to edit them anyway

Necrotica
January 9th 2014


10145 Comments

Album Rating: 3.5

\m/

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
January 10th 2014


7127 Comments


Hey Brendan m/

NocteDominum
Contributing Reviewer
January 10th 2014


7127 Comments


Hey Brendan m/

SnakeDelilah
January 10th 2014


9191 Comments

Album Rating: 2.0

album's okay


jammed this band hard in 7th grade

Digging: Foxing - The Albatross

CodyVoid
January 10th 2014


170 Comments


it happens way to often... me saying i love my bloody valentine and people going like that they suck and they are way to core... me asking if they are mixing them up with bullet for my valentine and realizing that i still have hope for manking by their answer: YES

I think both band names suck a lot. Valentine in a band name, just why?!



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