Def need to edit out the spelling and grammatical errors (like the constant commas-instead-of-periods in the description of the band's abilities), but other than that, good description of the album.
Michael Phelps is a dumbass who has no idea what music sounds like.
"Everything is bigger—more songs, more vocals, more melodies. And it all came naturally; it's not an attempt to try to outdo our first record, but we wanted to show how we had naturally grown as a band and as songwriters. This is my favorite record I've ever made—and most importantly—the best album anybody's ever made."