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Knott-
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December 1st 2009


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I'm fairly sure hyphens denoting clauses that could be placed in parentheses are open where I come from, but that could be different in the US. Either way, it's nothing to do with him making up for what you call the site's inadequacies; it's about making it legible, and it's awkward reading em dashes as en dashes because it trips the reader up and looks ugly.

theacademy
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December 1st 2009


31865 Comments

Album Rating: 1.0 | Sound Off

I'm fairly sure hyphens denoting clauses that could be placed in parentheses are open where I come from, but that could be different in the US.


this.

it's about making it legible, and it's awkward reading em dashes as en dashes because it trips the reader up and looks ugly.


i agree its an ugly sentence. I don't know exactly what you mean by 'em'

and 'en.' All I'm saying is that the text input options are extremely limited...better to just re-write the sentence

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


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Little dashes are en, like -. Big dashes are em, like _ but not subscripted. All's I'm saying is, at points, dashes are necessary, and when they are it's a logical thing to do to make them open (spaces around them) so that it's more legible. Also, some publishers use en dashes for these things now anyway.

theacademy
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


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Album Rating: 1.0 | Sound Off

http://www.wikihow.com/Use-English-Punctuation-Correctly



scroll to: 3. Understand the differences between a hyphen and a dash.



(i mistakenly used "extended hyphens" before, not knowing that 'dash' is a formal term...)



I'm also pretty sure in the U.S., no spaces.

RBN
December 1st 2009


4 Comments


Good review, but still I listened the steams and it still won't catch my attention maybe its just not my thing.. but this review was definitely well written.

and about the the album cover and album name
they both pretty much s***

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


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Haha, my English is fine, but thanks!

In other news I quite liked A Beautiful Lie. Inconsistent, sure, but some tunes on it. Unfortunately, the stream won't work in France, so...

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


10260 Comments


no it's just me raging about this country's stupid internet

did you know they don't even call it THE internet

just Internet

like it's a person

stupid fucks

PanasonicYouth
December 1st 2009


7413 Comments


strikey you still holed up in smell-arse france?

Willie
Moderator
December 1st 2009


20212 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

http://www.wikihow.com/Use-English-Punctuation-Correctly


Regardless of what that says, there should be spaces before and after a dash, and none between a hypen. It only makes the spaces more necessary when he's using the hyphen in place of a dash because as it looks right now, it's wrong.

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


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haha someguest

yeh kris until the 19th i just booked my train to paris though so at least i WILL be home for christmas lolz

PanasonicYouth
December 1st 2009


7413 Comments


yikes. get back to england.

Metalstyles
December 1st 2009


8576 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0

Regardless of what that says, there should be spaces before and after a dash, and none between a hypen
pretty much the truth in a nutshell

Observer
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


9393 Comments


The hyphen/dash issue seems to be a little confusing, but suffice it to say, I added the spaces and edited that sentence about the single.

I hope that reads better.

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


10260 Comments


would i care about this, kearns?

Willie
Moderator
December 1st 2009


20212 Comments

Album Rating: 3.0

I'll pos for all your hard work ;)



Anyway, I'm enjoying this so far. The debut album's influence is definitely more prominent than the second album's influence, and that's a good thing.

Observer
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


9393 Comments


The album or the dash issue?

Parts of this reminded me of Be Human, and if you liked that album, you may like parts of this.

Knott-
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


10260 Comments


Haha yeah the album! Be Human, really? Hmmm. Interessant.

Observer
Emeritus
December 1st 2009


9393 Comments


Yeah. The band goes for an orchestrated thing like Fightstar used as well, and the voices of the 1,000 fans is kinda hit and miss. Up until Hurricane, it's pretty solid stuff.


LiquidVelvet
December 1st 2009


640 Comments


I was kinda surprised by Hurricane, I found that one and Night of the Hunter to be the best.

Either way, this album way exceeded expectations, I think most can agree

AlexTM510
December 1st 2009


1471 Comments

Album Rating: 4.0 | Sound Off

overblown? Yes. Rules? Hell yes



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